FF 'pyar me hota h kya jadu'LAST UPDTED ON PG85

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#621

Ok...so i am here with my last update...ye thooodaaa sa touchy moment ho gya mere liye...hehehe..actully kya hota h ki koi cheez shuru karna bht asan hota h lekin use nibhana aur achhi yad k sath khtm karna bht mushkil hota h..aur mushkil kam karna thooodaaa sa to taklif deta hi h...anyways..i hope ki meri jo intention thi is ff me...wo m dikha payi logo ko..bhai pyar vyar ka funda to mera abhi bhi whi h...ye na kabhi samjh aya na ayega...but ha ye ff thoda spcl isliye tha qki isme mne bht time le liya...lol..are 2 din aur ruk jati to 5 mahine ki annivrsary ho jati...hahaha...apart of joke...actully ye pehla ff h jiski update m 85 page pe de rhi hu wo bhi 25 update me...mere sath ye pehli bar hua h yar..itne commnet aur like ki to expectation aur adat dono hi nhi thi mujhe...after this i turn into lill mor greedy...hahaha...anyways..i try to make last update memorable hope i will success..aur wo to tabhi hoga jb aaplogo ko pasand aayega...so fingr crossed...hope it will b succeed...

Ram kamre me aata h kamre me andhera rhta h wo dheere se priya ko awaz deta h par koi jawab nhi milta h..wo light on karne k liye hath badhata h to priya aake hath pakad leti h...

Ram whispers...kya hua???

Priya...ssshhh..HAPPY ANNIEVRSARY...mr.kapoor

ram...annivrsry.???.o teri 1 sal kab hue shaadi ko...??

Priya samne khadi hoke muskurati rhti h...

Ram...kya h???..andhera kyun kar rakha h

priya ek candle jala deti h...phir khadi hoke muskurane lagti h..

Ram...are bolo na kya h???..annivrsary shaadi ki to nhi h ..ye mujhe pta h...date humne kabhi ki nhi...pehli bar milna bhi kuchh khas tha nhi & dnt think ki wo tumko yad hoga...

Priya abhi bhi muskurati rhti h

ram...are kya special h yar???

Priya...kuchh to special h mr.kapoor hamare beech...aur sahi kaha aapne hamare pehli bar milne me bhale hi kuchh khas nhi tha phir bhi wo mujhe yad h...din bhale hi nhi yad h par ye yad h ki apne mere outfit ko notice kiya tha...

Ram...hahaha...tum dikh hi itni cartoon rhi thi...

Priya...achha!!..aur aap bade hero lag rhe the...

Ram...achha ab btao na kya h???

Priya...lijiye...

Ram...ye kya h???

Priya...apka jawab...padhiye to...(priya ram ko ek lettr deti h)

Aaj k din...

Ek naye safar k humsafar bane ...

nayi rahon k rehguzar bane ...

shuru kiya tha zindgi ko ummedo se dekhne ka silsila

us silsile ko dekhne ki humnazar bane ..

kuchh sabdo se shuru hua..kai bato me badle

kuchh lamhe the zindgi k jo ehsaso me badle

chalte chalte ye safar yaha tak aa pahoncha

jahan se manzilo k bht sare shehr bane ...

... Aaj k din...

Phir se aaya h whi pal jiske gawah hum sath sath dur rhkar bane..

Wish u vry happy annievrsry of lettrs jan...

(are bhai lettrs inki zindgi me pehle aaye the indono k ekdusre ki life me aane se bhi pehle to hum us time 6 mahine ka to man hi sakte hain..😉)

ram...oh shit..main kaise bhul gya yar...mujhe yad hi nhi tha ki aaj k hi din hamne lttr likhna shuru kiya th..shit..

Priya...koi bat nhi mr.kapoor ..kya hua apko yad nhi tha...yad to apki hi wajah se h na..aur aap us yad ko yad karne k liye mere sath h mere liye itna hi bht h...bas mujhe zindgi me hamesha aapka hi sath chahiye taki hum zindgi k liye behtreen yade bna sake ...

Ram...i am always with u dear...tum jitni chahe yade bnana bas har yad mujhpe khtm ho aur har sapna tumse shuru ho...lekin andhera kyun kiya h???

Priya...ufff aap to andhere k peechhe hath dho k pad gye hain...are iski bhi kuchh wajah hogi na...wait na...

Ram...cmon yar i hate waiting...

Priya...hahaha... I know..agr is andhere ka raaz janna h to apko bhi kuchh to karna padega..are annivrsry h...kuchh special to bnta h...

Ram...are aise achanak m kya special karu..??thats not fair...

Priya...theek h i will give u half hr..do whatevr u can..

Ram...woow half hr me to bht kuchh kar sakta hu 😉but no needed ur half hr...just close ur eyes...

Priya..hahaha..mr.kapoor waise bhi kuchh nhi dikh rha h

ram...q wo ek candl jal rha h na...

Priya..hehehe..she close her eyes...

Ram...now open

priya...itni jaldi???kya kiya apne???

Ram...kholo to...

Priya ankhe kholti h samne cake rhta h...jispe likha hota h...

Aaj wo pal aaya h jisne zindgi ko bht sare pal diye

ankho me sajane k liye sapno bhare naye kal diye...

Happy annivrsary of lettrs...

Priya...mr.kapoor apko yad tha...??

Ram...toh??..lettr kya tum akele likhti thi...

Priya...hihihi..thats so sweet...katen???

Ram...nhi pehle andhere ka raz btao..

Priya...nahi...jane dijiye...wo itna achha nhi h...

Ram...are cmon yar..mujhe janna h...chahe jaisa bhi h..

Priya...eehhhmm..

Ram...cmon yar bhav mat maro...dikhao na...

Priya halki roshni wali light on kar deti hai..ram charo taraf dekhta h...aur kehta h...

Ram...are yar...kya khas h???sara kamra to waisa ka waisa h...na koi alag cheez h na kuchh khas cheez...bate karte karte ram priya ki tarf mudhta h...kya h yar priyaa...bolo...he just quite & look on her...

Actully priya ne waqi kuchh nhi kiya tha kamre k sath..wo ram k samne ankhe band kark khadi rhti h in three piece red black nighty which make her so sexy...ram not able to remov his eyes from her...halki roshni me priya ka chehra aur chamak rha tha qki uspr uske pyar ki nazar thi..hawa se udhte hue baal uske chehre ko chhune ko machal rhe the pr unhe uski izazt nhi thi...qki is chehre ko chhune ka pehla haq mr.kapoor ka tha..he nvr expected ki wo priya ko aise dekhega...ram priya k pas ata h..ekdm pas...uske hath priya k chehre ko chhute h..aur uski sanse priya ki sanso ko chhuti h...

Ram..(whispers)..priya aisa kyun hota h...hamari sabse khas cheez hamare pas hoti h par hame kabhi uska ehsas nhi hota aur jb ehsas hota h to usse dur rhna mushkil ho jata h...

Priya smiles & kiss him & try to go but ram hold her tightly...

Ram...ye kya h..pta h???

Priya...pta nhi...aap hi bta dijiye...

Ram...ye jadu hota h

priya...kya sachhi me jadu hota h???

Ram...lets try

priya...ok but pehle main...

Ram smiles...

Priya...agar apke sath muskurana apke sath rona

apka hr pal me mere sath hona..pyar h to han pyar me jadu hota h...

Ram...agar zindgi ki mushkilo ka tumhare sath asan hona

agar haste haste khusi me sath rona...pyar h..to han...pyar me jadu hota h

priya...agr meri bato pr apka chillana

agr apke chillane pr mera muskurana ...pyar h...to han...pyar me jadu hota h

ram...agr meri bato ko tumhara ansuna karna

aur mera phir bhi unhe jbrdsti sunana...pyar h...to han pyar me jadu hota h

priya...agr apki baho me mera yunhi chale ana

agar apki sanso ka meri sanso me samana...pyar h ...to han...pyar me jadu hota h

ram...agar mera tumhe bina bataye hothon ko chum lena

agar tumhar itra k us bat pe jhum lena...pyar h...to han pyar me jadu hota h

priya..agar apko dekhte dekhte mera apki agosh me kho jana...

Agar aapke chhu lene se mere jism ka madhosh ho jana...pyar h ...to han pyar me jadu hota h

ram...agar teri angdhaiyo ka mere jism me karwate banke badal jana...

Agar tere chehre pe mere chhune se rang aa jana...pyar h...to han pyar me jadu hota h...

Dono bate karte karte ekdusre k bilkul kareeb aa jate hain...

Rampriya...agr kisi bhi hal me kisi bhi rah me kisi bhi ummed kisi bhi chah me ek dusre ka sath na chhodna ...pyar h to han pyar me jadu hota h...

Ram...i love u priya...

Priya...i love u 2 mr.kapoor...

Dono pyar ki description dete dete ekdusre me kho jate hain aur us description pr experiment karne lagte hain...hahaha...now they r happily married couple...with pyar ka jadu...

Pyar me jadu hota h ya nhi ye to mere liye abhi bhi paheli hi h...bt i am vry sure ki pyar sabse jyada seductiv tab hota h jab wo ankho me dikhta h..ap dikha k kisi ko pyar nhi karwa sakte hain lekin jb pyar ho jata h to wo khud hi dikh jata h...& i defenatly bleiv that love is more passionate when it comes unknowingly with simplicity...to achhe se aur sadgi se pyar karo dikhawa mt karo to pyar hamesha khubsurat lagega...aaah its ovr from my side...jate jate thoda kuchh aaplogo k liye bhi h...

Khush rahne k bahane milte mushkil se asani se kho jate hain
zindagi ki pareshaniyo me kabhi kabhi baten bhi afsane ho jate hain...
Hamara tumhara sath to umar bhar ka h
ye to waqt ki karwat hoti h jo rishto pe dhul jamti h aur log anjane ho jate hain...

Keep smiling & keep missing me
with love
veena...

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Dsudipa

@Dsudipa

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#622

oh no this is d last part of this FF 😭😭 i miss u & this FF

u r a good shayar thx 4 PM u written very well

fantastic description of love

love it thx 4 pm thx a lot

Edited by Dsudipa - 12 years ago

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shavii

@shavii

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#623

😭😭😭

when u r starting an new ff 😆
an beautiful end

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toshboni

@toshboni

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#624

Di I am a silent reader but mein islye comment kar rahi hoon bcoz I m already missing U :'(

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#625

Veenaji, aap ne aaj mujhe rula diya, itni achhi tareeke se bayan kiya ke mere toh zubaan hi band ho gayi, agar pyaar ki definition koi mujhse poonche toh main kahungi RaYa, aur yeh baat apne likh ke batayi hain, sach bolu, mujhe likhna nahi ata par aapki writings me kuch toh hain jo mujhe mere dil ki feelings bayan karne pe majboor karta hain, aap hi ho mera inspiration, aap itne sadgi se sab keh jati ho ke maano sab bohot asaan hain, koi milaavat yah impure nahi hain, this update will always be very dear to my heart, just wanna ask u?, shayris, kavitaye written over here are in actually written by u or by someone, if by u then would love to read more, want more from u...take care, and god bless u

Edited by jineejiggs - 12 years ago

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veena singh

@veena23

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#626

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
Veenaji, aap ne aaj mujhe rula diya, itni achhi tareeke se bayan kiya ke mere toh zubaan hi band ho gayi, agar pyaar ki definition koi mujhse poonche toh main kahungi RaYa, aur yeh baat apne likh ke batayi hain, sach bolu, mujhe likhna nahi ata par aapki writings me kuch toh hain jo mujhe mere dil ki feelings bayan karne pe majboor karta hain, aap hi ho mera inspiration, aap itne sadgi se sab keh jati ho ke maano sab bohot asaan hain, koi milaavat yah impure nahi hain, this update will always be very dear to my heart, just wanna ask u?, shayris, kavitaye written over here are in actually written by u or by someone, if by u then would love to read more, want more from u...take care, and god bless u

hehehe...its my plsr dear...& these r defenatly mine...instantly come between writing...m to pehle se kabhi likh k bhi nhi rakhti hu...story likhti hu situation ko shayri bna deti hu...hopefully it comes more...depend on situation...thank u soo much...😊🤗

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Malati

@bpatil3

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#627

Loved it Veena...

U are just amazing..

Pardes- Shah rukh ki scene yaad dila diya ''Pyar me Jaadu hota hai'' Raya conversation..

U wrote it so well...I enjoyed each and every bit of ur FF..

Thanks for filling my life with so many comical/romantic and sensible touchy scenes of Raya. Pyar ke ulzhan kabhi na sulzhegi even i think the same...😕

Par pyar samjhane ki cheeze nahi mehsoos krne ka hai.. so isko waqt aur situation ke saath chodna chaahiye...😆

Par kuch bhi ho Jeevan Pyar bina adhoora hai.. ye mai maanti hoon😊

25 parts kaise khatam ho gaye pata hi nahi chala...u have the best quality of writing skills.. its so touchy emotional, comedy , romantic and which has so many messages for life..hats off

agar mein aapke upar comment likhte jaavu to AAP hi mere FF ki Subject hongi...😃 i don;t have any words to describe u Veena love u yaar...

U are the ROCKSTAR ever.

Well done...👏

Miss ur FF. I have to read the entire thing again all the 25 parts of ur FF.

Like i watch BALH videos again again n like mad...but i happy to be MAD😆

Well thank u darling...Ek naye andaz ke saath nayi shurwat k saath aap phir avogi na...?

wait for u...

Edited by bpatil3 - 12 years ago

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veena singh

@veena23

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#628

Originally posted by: toshboni
Di I am a silent reader but mein islye comment kar rahi hoon bcoz I m already missing U :'(

awww thats soo sweet iam not leaving dear...only stop this one...will try to back with something new & special...thank u sooo much for all ur love...🤗

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gupta90

@gupta90

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#629

ohhh you ended this FF, it was a beautiful journey from the start, totally liked it 😊

looking forward to your other FFs😊

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nazianisar

@NAZIANISAR1

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#630

OOOH NOOO...!!!BOHOT SAD FEEL HO RAHA HAI,THIS FF WAS GOING SOOO NICE...!GO THROUGH YOUR DECISSION ONCE MORE...I REALLY MISS YOUR SHAIRANA FF...THANKS ALOT FOR UPDATE...,

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