FF 'pyar me hota h kya jadu'LAST UPDTED ON PG85

veena singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: bpatil3
Thx for the PM...

I loved the Wo kiss wala surprise Party, Hug, Teddy, suhaagrraat ...eveyting mind blowing...
Lagta hai BT wale aapko approach karenge RaYa Nok-Jhok aur liveliness dialogues likhne ke liye..

Waise aap karti kya hai-IF ke RaYainas ko apne FF se hasane ke alawa?? R u a student or working professional??
Have u taken any literature course to write Comedy-Romance with so much ease and effectively??

Soch lo agar aap ne koi literature course nahi kiya hai to bhi aap apna profession bana sakti hai writing mein . Chetan Bhagat , Amish Tripathi jaise log bahut shine ho chuke apni writing se..

Aap bhi ho sakti hai a GOOD INDIAN WRITER...

All the best...

hehehe...filhal mera yhi part time job h..ghar se social site tak sabka bheja khana litreture aur mera sath graduation tak hi tha..i hv master's degree in psychology..along with B.ed..so m sirf logo k deemag ki watt laga sakti hu..as teacher or as psychologist..lol..baki dekhte hain life kahan aur kaise le jati h

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Raya_some

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Posted: 12 years ago

#512

Originally posted by: veena23

HAHAHA meri story isse bhi intresting h...lol...ekdin mummy bht halla kr rhi thi ki kab se kh rhen h list bnane ko sun nhi rhi h...mne kaha lao bhai bna dete hain list...to mne puchha kya kya likhna h...to mummy btane lagi tabse boli ki kapoor likh do...mne puchha kaun sa wala u wala ya o wala...to mummy boli..kya???...mne kaha are priya wala ya pooja wala...to daddy bole priya wala mummy boli pooja wala...hum bole lo dono kaise likhe...tab mummy ko samjh aaya to bolti h...doost kahin ki...list bnao chupchap...aur humsablog hasne lage😉...

ohh really you literally said U wala ya O wala kamal kar diya ... and then priya wala ya pooja wala tab toh hadd hi ho gayi... i think hamari families hamare pagal pann se equallly pareshaan hai... LOL ... :)

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Raya_some

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Posted: 12 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: veena23

cmon yar tareef kise nhi achhi lagti h...aur ladkiya to mari jati h tareef sunne k liye😆😛...kidding...but seriously mujhe bht maza ata h padhne it means lot yar...aur khurafat karne ka hausla milta h...😉

haan jaha tak hausle ki baat hai toh ye silsila chalta rhega kyunki isse tumhe likhne ka hausla milta hai toh hame bhi toh padhne ka milta hai...😆 akhir sach kahu toh khurafati updates ka hi toh mujhe intzaar rehta hai. ... :)

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Raya_some

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Posted: 12 years ago

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arre ye kya ho gaya ram ka inta unexpected behavior .. :( ... but i loved the way letter ki sachaai priya ko pata chali i mean ram ne koi bhi gussa nhi kiya nd .. than 😳 ... overall it was beautiful update title ek dum perfect.. and jab mene padha ki ram priya going to neha vikram house i thought neha toh gayi sara valentine and reception sab satyanash ... but finally it was nice ...

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accha bahut hua scroll down n check it...

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bade acche lagte hai ye update ye khurafat ye raya aur tum (veena)

aur haan tareefon se phool kar jaldi update karna mat bhul jana ...LOL..

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Dsudipa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#515

hey Veena ji sry 4 d late comments

fantastic update finally letter mystery solved and they move on

waiting 4 nxt pls update soon

thx 4 PM

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taashu11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#516

omg its superb finaly finaly finaly finaly sare letters ki mystry solve ho gai aab dono anjana anjani se raya ban gaye am loving it... awesome veena di you rock...

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taashu11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#517

omg its superb finaly finaly finaly finaly sare letters ki mystry solve ho gai aab dono anjana anjani se raya ban gaye am loving it... awesome veena di you rock...

my laptop is not working so if possible vm ki yt link doge dm doesnt work on mobile so cant see it...

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veena singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: taashu11
omg its superb finaly finaly finaly finaly sare letters ki mystry solve ho gai aab dono anjana anjani se raya ban gaye am loving it... awesome veena di you rock...

my laptop is not working so if possible vm ki yt link doge dm doesnt work on mobile so cant see it...

yt pr to block h par jo second link h wo facebook link h wo mobile pe download ho jata h...u should try it

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veena singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Raya_some
arre ye kya ho gaya ram ka inta unexpected behavior .. :( ... but i loved the way letter ki sachaai priya ko pata chali i mean ram ne koi bhi gussa nhi kiya nd .. than 😳 ... overall it was beautiful update title ek dum perfect.. and jab mene padha ki ram priya going to neha vikram house i thought neha toh gayi sara valentine and reception sab satyanash ... but finally it was nice ...

bade acche lagte hai ye update ye khurafat ye raya aur tum (veena)
aur haan tareefon se phool kar jaldi update karna mat bhul jana ...LOL..
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-deepika-<33

hahaha...ye achha h...ha phool to gyi hu aur phul k jaldi se update bhi de rhi h...keep cmmenting...

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veena singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

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