FF: RAYA LIFE AFTER PIHU NOTE updated pg 62 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
read the last three parts at one go, who the hell is this unknown person, ab kaun aa raha hain Raya ke beech mein?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the comments.

PART 6

The girl has changed her attire and camethere.

R: who r u?

U: how dare u bring your wife with u. Today m going i will meet u some other day alone.

R: what?

U: don't act like u don't know anything.

Ram comes to the car and says what happened.

P: abhi kuch karna hoga.

R: ha chalo ghar ab.

Priya comes home and sees peehu crying.

P: ma Kya hua?

Kk: Rone lagi hai. Pakdo ISe,

Priya catches peehu and she stops crying.

Ram and priya make peehu sleep and then thinks what to do.

P: ram call karte hai use

R: lekin.

P: trust me.

Ram calls her but no reply.

P: ram aap call karte rahiye me abhi ayi.

R: ok.

Priya goes to outside and sees a phone ringing continuously in a room.

P: yeh phone.

She picks up the call and sees ram calling.

P: hello ram

R: priya tum. Iska matlab.

P: no ram it's not my phone. I was just passing by n saw a phone ringing.

R: okay. Whose phone is this?

P: pls don't shout now. I will let u know soon.

Ram cuts the call. Priya is still in the room. She comes out of the room and starts thinking.

P: aise kaise ho sakta hai. Why would she do this?

DINNER

Priya has rams phone with her and she calls again and again the no. The person sees the no and it's ringing.

R: kiska phone aa raha hai. Kitni bar kaha hai tumse no phone on dining table.

The person: bhai aap hi call kar rahe hai.

Ram looks at priya and says sorry.

After dinner

P: mere sath aao room me.

The person: ji

RAYA ROOM

P: Kya kar rahi ho tum apeksha?

A: what did I do bhabhi?

P: apne bhai ko aise msgs bhej na.

R: Kya?

P: ha yeh no. Aapki pyari behen ka hai. Bolo apeksha.

A: sach batau toh Maza le rahi thi.

R: kyu?

A: mujhe bht Maza aa raha tha. Hehe

R: tujhe me chodunga nahi. Ruk kahan chali

Ram runs behind her and she runs down and kk sees them.

Kk: ab Kya hua tum dono ko?

R: ma aaj aap beech me mat aiye. I won't leave her today. Jeena mushkil kar Diya tha isne.

Kk: kiya Kya usne?

R: naya sim liya or mujhe I love u msgs bheje. Priya sab handle kar rahi thi. I won't leave her ma.

Kk: hehehehehehe

R: ma aap?

Kk: fir toh priya ne tumhara band bajaya hoga.

R: or nahi toh Kya. Bht hasi aa rahi hai.

A: sorry bhai. Me toh Maza le rahi thi.

R: mere sath kyu? Rishi bhi toh hai.

A: ha par aapke sath karna tha.

Priya comes with peehu down and sees ram n apeksha running behind each other. Apeksha goes behind priya.

A: bhabhi save me.

P: I can't come between the fight of brother n sister. So m moving aside. She is moving aside when peehu sees apeksha and pulls her hair.

A: ouch peehu Kya kar rahi ho. Apni bua k sath Asia koi karta hai.

Ram laughs.

R: aa raha hai Maza.

P: peehu chodo.

Peehu doesn't leave.

P: ISe sorry Bol do ki tum ram ko tang nahi karogi.

A: sorry peehu kabhi apke papa ko tang nahi karungi.

Peehu leaves and smiles. Ram takes peehu from her and she smiles.

To be continued.







Mahaalwayscool thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
oho.. so it ws apeksha.. hahaha.. continnue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Wooww...nice update...wo apeksha thi...jo itne time se raya ko paresan kar rhi thi 😃 peehu wala scene to awesome ...papa ko presan karne wale ko jhodne se rhi...continue soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Alya1991

Wooww...nice update...wo apeksha thi...jo itne time se raya ko paresan kar rhi thi 😃 peehu wala scene to awesome ...papa ko presan karne wale ko jhodne se rhi...continue soon!!!

thanks dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Super cute!! Loved it!! Thank you for the awesome update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Wow... Its so nic... Thnx for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
awww! It's so sweet, so the unidentified person is none other than Apeeksha, good yaar, nice suspense, and Apeeksha ka haq banta hain ke woh Ram ko taang kare, but Peehu ne jo revenge liya woh bohot hi cute aur sweet tha, she is my DARLING, luv u my cutiepie, cuddly wuddly, continue
Edited by jineejiggs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
so cute.. loved it ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
lol apeksha is too naughty
loved peehu ka part😆😆

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