FF: RAYA LIFE AFTER PIHU NOTE updated pg 62 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
its ok, u take ur time
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry guys for making u wait for so long. I was busy n then I was not well.

PART 3

Priya got up in the morning and looked towards peehu who was hitting her legs in the air.

P: meri bachi uth Gayi?

Priya takes her in her lap and takes her down.

Kk: gm priya.

P: gm ma.

Kk: peehu k vaccine ka kuch bola ram se?

P: ma aaj bolungi.

R: gm ma.

P: gm. Vo aap mere sath.

R: ha vaccine k liye chalunga.

P: how do u know I was going to say this?

R: antaryami hu.

P: very funny. Bolo na?

R: sun liya tha mene.

P: okay.

R: aapki ijazat ho to aaj chale?

P: yes.

R: chalo ready ho jao. Do peehu ko.

P: lijiye. Tayar kijiye use?

R: akele kaise?

P: aa rahi hu.

Kk laughs seeing them.

Kk: kabhi Nazar na lagte inhe.

Raya freshen up and makes peehu ready in her fav red.

R: aaj pata hai aapko vaccine lagega.

She starts crying. Ram tries to stop her.

Priya comes and makes her stop.

P: Kya hua peehu?

She is not coming to ram or priya. Kk comes n she goes towards her and stops.

Raya shocked.

Raya: ye Kya hai?

Kk: vo dar rahi hai beta.

P: dar kyu?

Kk: vaccine se.

P: par ma ?

Kk: kuch nahi hoga. Ram ka bachpan hai yeh. Pakdo ISe.

P: ji.

They go for vaccine.

Doc calls them inside.

Doc: kitni pyari bachi hai?

She starts crying.

Ram and priya keep her down and hold her but she is crying and when she gets injection she cries even more.

P: chup ho jao. Sab thik hai.

Priya sees her mom and smiles.

R: Hanse lagi.

P: meri beti hai. Apne papa ki tarah frowning beauty nahi hai.

R: Kya kaha tumne?

P: ha sahi kaha. Chalo

They go home and say kk about it.

Peehu feels sleepy and sleeps in priya's lap.

They make her sleep.

Ram goes to office and priya is sitting and her dad comes.

P: papa

Sudhir: priya kaise hai?

P: me thik hu

Sud: peehu

Peehu gets up and gets excited to see her nanu.

To be continued.



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Indeed it was very good update .. welcome back
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey glad to see you back...hope you are better now😛
peehu is just like ram...so chweet yaar...
lovely
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sss283

hey glad to see you back...hope you are better now😛
peehu is just like ram...so chweet yaar...
lovely

thanks but m not yet better now. I had cough n cold n fever. I still have cought.some days back
I had fallen from the stairs at my clg n cos of it m not able to sit or walk properly. Dont worry will be fine soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I hope dear u are keeping gud, small but gud one, yes it seems Peehu us her father's xerox copy, loved it, do continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the comments. Here is the next part.

PART 4

Sud: peehu ayegi nanu k pass?

Peehu smiles.

Sudhir takes her in his lap.

Sud: priya ISe toh bukhar hai?

Priya: Kya?

Priya checks n goes down to bring medicine for peehu.

P: subah toh thik thi ab Kya hua? Vaccine k baad bhi thik thi?

Sud: achha toh vaccine tha. Don't worry thik ho jayegi. Thoda fever hota hai.

P: papa pakadiye ISe dawai Pilati hu.

Sudhir catches her and she is crying n priya is giving her medicine.

P: bas ho Gaya.

But peehu is only crying. She is showing her anger towards her mom and nanu. Then ram comes. As soon as she sees ram she stops crying. He takes her on his lap.

R: Kya hua meri bachi ko? Bukhar hai. Priya medicine di.

P: ha di par mere pass a nahi rahi yeh.

R: lo.

Priya takes her and she hits her legs and goes to her dad again.

P: sorry beta. Aapki medicine thi vo.

Peehu smiles and goes to her mom.

Sudhir has gone home.

Days are passing and peehu is becoming big. A small get together is planned between rayape and vikha. They go to vikha house.

RAYA ROOM

P: aap peehu ko tayar kijiye me tayar hoke ati hu.

R: thik hai

Ram goes to peehu but instead of making her ready he starts playing with her.

Ram is making faces and she is laughing. Priya sees this.

P(anger): RAM!!!!

R: Kya hua?

P: apko kuch Kaam DIYa tha mene.

R: ha abhi karta hu.

Ram makes her ready and both leave for SHERGIL house

P: aa Gaye hum

N: kitne baje bulaya tha mene?

P: sorry yar yeh ram ko bola peehu ko tayar karvaye. But yeh khelenge lage.

N: janti hu vikram ka dost hai.

They sit and all play with peehu.

R: yeh koi toy nahi hai.

Vik: Jante hai. But kitni pyari hai.

Peehu starts crying.

P: lagta hai ISe bhuk lagi hai.

N: chalo priya

P: ha chalo.

Priya takes peehu inside with her

R: galat timing pe bhuk lagi hai ISe.

N: priya idhar tum usse feed karva lo. Me ati hu thodi der me.

P: thik hai.

Priya feeds peehu. After finishing her feeding neha comes.

P: ho Gaya chalo.

They go and sit. Peehu is sleeping on her moms lap.

They keep her inside with riddhima Rahul and sammy

P: chalo khana kha lijiye

All sit and priya sees ram little scared looking at his cell.She goes towards him.

P: Kya hua?

R: nothing. Kuch nahi hua.

P: itne dare kyu ho?

R: m not scared.

N: fatty jhut kyu Bol rahe ho. Tumhara chehra dekho.

P: bolo Kya hua.

Kids are asleep with peehu.

R: nothing priya.

Priya just snatches his cell.

P: Dekhu toh Kya hai

Priya reads I LOVE YOU

P: who the hell is this ram? Kaun hai yeh?

R: I really don't know priya.

P: nahi pata. Toh pata Karo. Jab tak nahi pata karoge baat mat Karo mujhse.
Dokha Diya mujhe ram. How could u? Agar aaj cell na Leti toh kabhi pata nahi chalta. I hate you ram.

N: priya shant ho jao.

P: kaise hu neha. I can't. M going bye

N: akele kaise? Khana toh kha lo. Tum apni health k bare me socho.

P: tumhare kehne par kha rahi hu.

She eats and takes peehu and leaves with ram but not talking to him.
Priya is having rams phone with her.

Unknown no se MSG ata hai.

U: hey ram I love you.

Priya replies: who are u?

U: ur true lover.

P: what?

U: yes darling

P: stop calling me darling n telling. Me I love u

U: y? Itna darte ho priya se?

P: me kyu daru. Me sirf usse pyar karta hu. Dare u MSG here again.

U: what will u do?

P: u wait and watch.

Ram sees her.

R: priya

P: Kya hai?

R: mene tumhare ilawa kisi se pyar nahi kiya hai.

P: sach toh yeh kaun hai.

R: I don't know. Tumhari Kasam.

P: ap meri jhuti Kasam to nahi le rahe na.

R: no priya.

P: ok then I trust u but till this thing is not solved your sim will be with me and u use my cell.

R: my business calls.

P: u call from my cell.

R: ok priya.

Priya and ram hug each other.






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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Nic yr.. But yeh unknown kon h..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: daggarwal14

Nic yr.. But yeh unknown kon h..

thanks. U will get to know soon

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