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Anjali

@Pinkjali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Spelendid, superb, simple and smashing os... It was above my expectation.. Eagerly looking forward to the sindoor wala scene in balh also, thanks for writing that scene... Awesomely pen down the whole os, simple dialogue but with gr8 feeling in it. Title of this os has been justified perfectly.. Looking forward to more of ur work... Thanks for the pm.

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Siona

@.m.a.r.y.s.i.o.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

wow mayu it was a splendid os i must say...the way u put in all the elements of the perfect romance between ram n priya...it was like the whole scene is visually present b4 me...indeed a wonderful job...i wish the cvs show something like this soon...and yeah thanx for the pm...

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Siona

@.m.a.r.y.s.i.o.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

and yeah pls provide an epilogue too dear...we'd love to know what else happens...

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balhfan

@balhfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

amazing ss...

plz plz.. update the epilogue

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A. Kishore

@TVserialfreak

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Awesome one sister...sorry for late reply...really loved it... 😳

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Birdy91

@Birdy91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Awwwiiieee mayu... Wht could I say abt it Yaaa??? 👍🏼 Omg wowww yaar kitna simply tumne dono k emotional ko portray ki.. Loved it... Dialogues were amazing.. perfectly emotional... Aaahhh raya r back in dis.. Muaaahh to you
N loved evry bit of it...
hey plzzz Epilogue jarur likhna...👏

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

awesome update Mayu loved the whole sequesnce so sweet n so nicely they settle down the matter of this issue this is called mature love story so gud love Ram's actions that he made Sid to marry Aye ... he actually didn't marry to here woowowow i loved this... to gud work yaar loved it...

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: namrocksss
Brilliant...

... Great

Thanks so much:)

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: lalmadhu
Wow.. Lovely I was just longing for Raya to talk in the way u have written their dialogues Very simple and touching and matured way they are. I love if u continue it and thank u for the pm

Thanks so much🤗

I am surely continuing! And I so want RaYa to have a Mature Conversation! So I am still having hopes!

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: crystal30
Hey dear, fantastic..

How I wish something like this happened in the show, guess it's too early to ask for it. Bt atleast I wld want Priya to knw that Ram did fast for her. I wld literally jump with joy the day wen Ram wld fill her maang.. Thank you so much for making the weekend bearable!!!🤗

Hey Thanks for replying even when I didnt send you a Pm!😳

And I would literally jump in air when they will reunite and Ram would fill her maang!

Love,

Mayu