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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: sss283

that was cool...
i guess i missed out on reading it...
well awesome threesome parts😛
continue soon

thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Thanks for the lovely comments. It really means a lot to me. Here I start my next part.

PART 4

Ram has reached home as its 7pm. He goes to his room.

Bansi Kaka(B.K): sir aapko kuch chahiye.

R: nahi abhi kuch nahi chahiye. priya madam room me hogi.

B.K: nahi sir vo ab tak vapas nahi ayi hai.

R: achha thik hai.

Ram goes to his room and thinks where is Priya. why she hasn't come till now.

There we see Priya sitting on the sand in juhu beach sitting alone with her cell in her hand and tears coming from her eyes.

P: papa ne toh kaha hai ki me Mr. kapoor ko sab bata du. but batau kaise. kal tak rukti hu agar vapas kuch kiya toh bataungi

just then she sees ram calling. she cuts the call as she is crying and ram should not know about her crying.

she wipes her eyes and goes back to kapoor mansion

she reaches her room and directly goes inside. she sees ram roaming and he sees priya and before he reaches her she keeps her bag and directly goes to freshen up.

Ram thinks: kya ho gaya hai priya ko? aise kyu behave kar rahi hai? bura toh nahi maan gayi subah k liye?

just then she comes and her eyes are still red because she cried a lot. She goes to the dressing table. Ram goes behind her.

R: priya kya hua hai? mera phone kyu nahi uthaya? mujhse naraz ho subah k liye?

P: kuch nahi Mr. kapoor. me aapse naraz nahi hu. me thak gayi hu. me sone ja rahi hu.

R: bina khana khaye tum sone jaogi?

P: mujhe bhook nahi hai.

she goes from there and ram catches her arm and turns her towards him

R: kya hua? me tumhe tab se dekh raha hu jab se tum bonus dekar ayi ho.

P: kuch nahi Mr. kapoor.

R: tum mujhse kuch chupa rahi ho. meri taraf dekho.

priya sees towards ram slowly. As soon as ram sees her eyes he got to know she cried.

R: tum ro rahi thi priya?

P: nahi Mr. kapoor vo kuch chala gaya tha. aur kuch nahi.

R: jhut.

P: nahi mr kapoor.

R: jao araam karo.jab tum sahi samjho tab bata dena.

P: mr. kapoor aap meri help karenge

R: kya help?

P: ppt k liye

R: par tumne office staff ki help nahi li.

P: nahi ho paya. aap kar dijiye pls.

R: thik hai bolo kya karna hai.

P: yeh karna hai or aap mujhe sikhayenge.

R: ha zaroor. aao hum study me chalte hai.

P: mr kapoor hum idhar karte hai.

R: idhar kahan?

P: bed par baithke

R: thik hai chalo.

they both sit on the bed

R: ab yeh open karo.

P: ji thik hai.

she tries but she can't.

R: aise nahi priya but aise.

he catches her hand and does.

P: thanks Mr. kapoor.

R: iski koi zarurat nahi hai.

in 1 hr they complete

R: mujhe bhuk lagi hai. tum bhi kuch kha lo.

P: ji.

R: maan gayi tum. abhi toh keh rahi thi nahi khaogi.

P: apke liye kha rahi hu.

R: thanks

P: its ok.

both are having dinner.

R: priya ek baat bolu.

P: apko mujshe kuch bolne k liye permission ki zarurat kabse hui?

R: sorry. me vo bol raha tha ki jab bhi me ashwin se jab bhi milta hu toh mujhe aisa kyu lagta hai ki me usse kahin mila hu.

P: vo aap mile hai. hamari shadi se pehle lift k pass.

R: ohh ha ab yaad aya. tumhara dost.

P: nahi mera dost nahi hai. mere best friend ka pati hai. good night. me sone ja rahi hu.

R: kya hua? khana toh khao pura.

P: bhuk nahi hai or.

R: sorry agar bura laga.

P: aisi baat nahi hai. kal aap mere sath class me rahoge. vaise bhi kal last class hai.

R: aisa kya hua priya?

P: pls mr. kapoor

R: ha rahunga.

P: thanks Mr. kapoor.

R: its okay.

they both sleep. Suddenly Priya starts shouting at 4am

P: leave me alone. leave me. chodo mujhe.

Ram gets scared and moves towards her.

R: priya kya hua? tum thik ho?

he wakes her up.

P: ha mr kapoor me thik hu.

R: toh tum kisko leave me bol rahi thi.

P: I am fine mr. kapoor.

R: are u sure?

P: yes mr kapoor.

TO BE CONTINUED



deepa1993 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Nic update.. plz update ko thoda long write kro.. nd update soon.. wating..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
nice one.. good to revisit old balh with your ff... pls PM..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
really nice way of writing loving the way RaYa is coming closer to each other slowly slowly... but why Priya just don't spelled out abt Ashwin to all really needed... let's see wat is next now...do update soon waiting for next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Hey all parts are nice .. felt old BALH ...
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
nice update dear.. continue soon.. n plz pm wen u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
thanks for the lovely comments. it means a lot to me.

PART 5

MORNING

Priya is sleeping peacefully and Ram gets up and sees her asleep. He smiles and goes to the washroom to freshen up and by the time he comes out priya is already awake.

P: good morning Mr. kapoor.

R: good morning priya. tum thik ho?

P: ha me thik hu. me fresh hoke ati hu.

priya freshens up and comes in the room and they both eat breakfast.

R: priya agar tum thik nahi ho toh kisi or din class le lo. tum kafi dari lag rahi ho.

P: no Mr. kapoor i am fine.

they reach office in the car.

R: priya tum jao me aata hu. tum mere cabin me jao. vahan milta hu.

P: thik hai Mr. Kapoor.

She waits for the lift. she receives a message in her cell. It was a joke sent by ayesha so she was reading and enters the lift.

she looks up after reading and sees ashwin standing very close to him. she moves away from him and she reaches the end. Ashwin too comes till the end. Ashwin holds her hand again and brings her very close to him.

The lift stops and she runs out of the lift straight to Ram's cabin and drinks water.

R: sorry priya. chalo chalte hai.

P: ji Mr. kapoor.

Ram is sitting and Priya is eaching. Ram is loving how she is teaching.
Class gets over.

Ram addresses the employees.

R: thanks a lot to my wife Mrs. Priya Ram Kapoor without whom this class was not possible. Thanks for taking out sometime and teaching them here. employees get back to work now.

All leave. Ram too leaves with them. Priya is still inside and this time Ashwin turns to Priya and she starts to leave once the space is formed for her. Ashwin catches her hand and pulls her with him. He takes her out from the back gate and Priya is telling leave me alone.

P: chod do mera peecha ashwin. please leave me.

A: bilkul nahi. agar mene us wakt shruti se shadi nahi ki hoti toh aaj tum mere sath hoti.

P: bht achha hua ki mene tumse shadi nahi ki. agar kar li hoti toh meri zindagi barbad ho jati. tumne shruti ki toh kardi hai.

A: PRIYA!!😡

P: Kya hua? gussa aa gaya? mene toh sach kaha hai. mujhe gussa ata hai kabhi kabhi apne upar ki mene socha tha ki me tumhare sath rahungi. I hate you. I hate you.

A: pehle pyar fir nafrat... haha

P: tum itne gire huye ho i dnt believe. ha janti hu pyar kiya tha. but achha hua shadi nahi hui. vo pyar me kabka bhula chuki hu.

A: me toh ab bhi karta hu or tumse shadi karunga bhi. tumhari shadi todunga bhi.

P: kabhi nahi kar paoge or na hi me aunga. me sirf tumse nafrat karti hu.

Ashwin turns Priya's hand and she shouts

P: chodo mera hath.

A: or chillao maza aa raha hai.

P: jab Mr. kapoor ko pata chalega tab pata chalega tumhe.

A: me nahi darta ram kapoor se.

P: achha dekh lenge. usse pehle mujhe chodo.

A: no never.

P: u cheap, gire huye insaan.

Ashwin shouts and gives her a slap. She in turn slaps her even hard. He again slaps her and his hands marks can be seen easily and some blood comes from her lips and her head hits the wall and starts bleeding.

A: I am sorry. me ye nahi karna chahta tha.

Priya runs from there and takes an auto and reaches Kapoor Mansion.
as she enters Dadi sees blood coming out from her lips and her head bleeding.

Dadi: priya puttar?

P: dadi aap.

Dadi: yeh sab kya hai priya puttar? kisse jhagad k ayi? tu toh kisi se jhagadti nahi hai.

P: kuch nahi dadi aisa kuch nahi hai. bus thodi si chot lag gayi. me abhi first aid karke ati hu.

she goes to her room and enters the washroom and locks herself and cries.
meantime dadi calls ram.

Dadi: ram puttar!!

R: ji dadi kya hua? aapki awaz ko kya ho gaya? aur aap ro kyu rahi ho?

Dadi: tu jaldi se ghar aa ja.

R: dadi hua kya?

Dadi: tu bas jaldi aa.

R: ji dadi.

Dadi calls up Dr. Shah.

Dr. shah: hello!!

Dadi: aap jaldi se Kapoor Mansion aa jaiye.

Dr. shah: ji thik hai.

Ram and Vikram reach Kapoor Mansion and Neha was coming to meet priya as she had not met her for so many days.

R: dadi kya hua?

Dadi: jaldi upar ja kamre me. Priya ki halat bht kharab hai.

R: kya? kya hua usse?

Dadi: sar par khoon n lips se khoon aa rahe the uske.

R: kya dadi?

Dadi: ha puttar.

vikram and neha also shocked and doctor comes.

Dr. shah: kya hua hai?

dadi: priya ko bht chot lagi hai. ja upar.

Dr. shah: ji thik hai.

when they reach the room they see Priya trying to do First Aid to herself.

R: priya!!

Priya shocked to see neha, vikram, ram, dadi and doctor.

R: yeh sab kya hai priya?

P: kuch nahi.

R: tumse me baad me baat karta hu. doctor aap dressing kijiye.

Dr. shah: ji!! mam aap yahan aiye bed par.

he dresses her wounds and when he is wiping blood with cotton from her lips. He is shocked to see the marks but decides to tell Ram later.

He dresses and goes outside and Ram goes to leave him.

Dr. shah: mr kapoor aapse kuch kehna hai mujhe.

R: ji kahiye.

Dr. shah: apki wife ko kisine thapad mara hai vo bhi ek bar nahi. unke cheeks me nishan hai.

R: what?

Dr. shah: yes Mr. kapoor. unka zyada khayal rakhiye. or jo sir par nishan se lag raha tha ki unhe kisi ne push kiya hai vo bhi wall ki taraf or unhe kuch bhi ho sakta tha. u know sir ki chot kaisi hoti hai. but vo theek hai. she needs complete rest and do ask her who has done. so that u can be careful from next time.

R: thanks doctor.

Doctor leaves. Ram reaches.

Neha: doctor ne kuch kaha?

R; ek min neha.

Ram goes to Priya who is lying on the bed and Priya gets scared. Just then Ram's phone rings.
Its from Priya's dad.

R: hello papa!!

Priya shocked

Sudhir: beta sorry to disturb tum office me honge. I tried to call priya but she was not picking so called u.

R: papa me office me nahi hu. me ghar par hu. papa aap idhar aa sakte hai kya?

Sudhir: kya hua beta? sab thik hai.

R: papa aap bas idhar aa jaiye.

Sudhir: thik hai ata hu.

sudhir leaves from there and Kartik and nuts are at home. shipra has gone with ayesha for auditions.

Sudhir: kartik me KM ja raha hu. ram ne bulaya hai.

K: papa sab thik toh hai?

Sudhiir: mujhe kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hai.

K: papa me bhi chalta hu.

Sudhir: tum ghar me raho. me jakar ata hu.

KAPOOR MANSION

P: Mr. kapoor apne papa ko kyu bulaya.

R: tum toh bata nahi rahi ho. khud hi sehena chahti ho.

Dadi: puttar tu kya keh raha hai?

R: dadi abhi batata hu kya hai.

Ram goes to her removes her hair from her cheek and all shocked.

Dadi: kisne mara tumhe?

R: dadi yeh toh kuch nahi. doctor ne kaha ki kisi ne isse mara hi nahi balki usse wall par dakha bhi diya jisse sar par chot lagi hai. kaun hai vo priya? batao mujhe.

N: fatty ko bol do priya.

Then Sudhir enters and sees her daughter.

Sudhir: priya yeh kya hua hai?

P: papa.

Sudhir: kya me akele me isse baat kar sakta hu?

R: ji papa zaroor.

all go out.

Sudhir: kya hai yeh sab priya?

P: papa ashwin ne mara.

Sudhir: kya?

P: ji papa.

Sudhir: tune ram ko bataya?

P: nahi papa. mujhe dar lag raha hai. agar me batau toh ma ki baat nahi manungi. mujhe samaj me nahi aa raha.

Sudhir: priya tu apne bare me soch or teri ma ki chinta mat kar.

P: thik hai papa.

he goes out.

Everyone is there and they go inside. Neha sits besides Priya.

N: bolo priya yeh sab kisne kiya hai?

P: vo Mr. kapoor

neha cuts in between : kya fatty ne.

P: nahi neha me yeh keh rahi hu ki Mr. kapoor aap pls jhagada nahi karenge.

R: tum bolo kaun hai.

Sudhir: bol beta.

Dadi: bol priya puttar. apne aap ko tu dekh.

P: vo ASH...

R: kya ash?

P: pura bolne toh dijiye.

R: sorry

P: vo ashwin ne mujhe thapad mara or wall pe mera sir laga.

Ram is shocked and is fuming in anger.

to be continued

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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Hey this part was super coolll ..

how dare ashwin to slap Priya ... 😡 i want to kill him idiot..
timgod sudhir came and priya blurts out the truth .. story moving forward ...
thank you and cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
nice going... continue soon dear.. it ws nice update..😊😊

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