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Posted: 12 years ago
Down with severe Viral Flu...So no posts this weekend
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Krish, I hope you feel better soon...get lots of rest and pampering. Hope to see your next chapter soon after you get better😃.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Krishh, get well soon, speedy recovery
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Posted: 12 years ago
GET WELL SOON 😊😊😊
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Next day morning the first ray falls on Priya's face and Ram is awake watching her. He just couldn't get enough of her. He notices that she is a little disturbed with the rays on her face. He puts her hand in between and lets her beauty sleep in peace. Slowly the sun gets stronger and Ram is sweating. Priya is sleeping in glory as if the sun is not there. Just then a bead of sweat falls on her cheek and she opens her eyes. Ram is trying his best to make sure the rays are not disturbing her sleep and in all this he is sweating profusely. She looks up to him and feels like she is the queen. Here is a man who is fighting the sun for her. To make sure that the highest power does not disturb her in her sleep. She knew Love is real but she never knew the level someone can take it to. Love was real but it felt reel. Hearing about someone wanting to fetch stars for you is reel but having someone in your life who fights with sun to make sure your dreams are not disturbed was not something she ever thought she will see.

Priya : ( A smile appears on her face and in a soft tone ) Good Morning Husband.

Ram : Oh you woke up. Did I disturb you? I am so sorry. This stupid….

Priya : (Before he could finish) I Love you Ram

Ram with a little twitch on his face not understanding why she said that. You see for Ram fighting with the rays was nothing. But for Priya he had made her day. That small gesture of his was not small for her. A small tear rolled out her eyes looking at the extent this man loves her.

Ram : Yaar…I hate tears. Stop it Priya. These cheeks are not for tears to roll over. He gave a kiss on her cheeks. These cheeks are for me and me only.

Priya : I love you.

Ram : I know that. Now lets go inside before I become a benedict Omelette please.

Ram gets up and lands his hand for her to get up. She is still mesmerized without a word she gets up and keeps staring at him. Ram does not understand what is happening. He takes her inside. Once they are inside the cold breeze gets Priya out from her dream. Ram sits on the couch with both hands wide open.

Priya : Breakfast ?

Ram : Haan but where are Vikram and Neha ?

Priya : I will just check. Just then she notices a note on the table. She reads it.

To the love birds,

We have gone out to the city for some shopping and will be back by lunch. Breakfast is ready so please enjoy it.

Vikram and Neha

Priya : Ram these two have left us alone and gone out for something. And out breakfast is ready so lets go and eat.

Ram is lying on the couch still sweating. Priya notices it and goes close to him and wipes off the sweat from his forehead. Just then she feels a little breath of his and realizes he has a heat stroke.

Priya : Ram open your eyes.

Ram opens his eyes but she can see he is looking a little weak. She calls out to the butler and asks him to bring the breakfast up to the room. She then takes Ram inside the bathroom and starts the cold water and makes him stand under it. She gently rubs his body while supporting him. Takes off his clothes. All this while Ram is just enjoying this moment but making sure he does not stress her.

Ram : I am ok Darling. Its just a heat stroke.

Priya : Shut up just Shut up. Come on get up.

Ram lifts himself up from the toilet stool and Priya puts a bathrobe on him. She takes him inside and makes him lie on the bed. Checks his pulse and then gives him some Salt sugar and water to drink. Without a word he gets up drinks it and then lies down in her lap. Priya wipes him and drys his hair and gently gives him a kiss on his temple. A small child like smile appears on Rams face. She remembers their daughter Peehu first smile, it was identical. Just then there is a knock on the door. And she opens the door takes the breakfast trolley inside and tells the butler to go. She brings the breakfast trolley inside.

P : Ram get up love. Lets have some breakfast.

Ram is still a little dizzy. But he manages to sit up on the bed. She takes the trolley closer to the bed and sits besides him. Serves him tea and asks him to drink it. Before he moves she takes the cup sits close to him and offers to help him drink it. Ram not wanting to let go of this beautiful opportunity. They both share some eye locks and Priya makes sure she does not burn his mouth. They finish the breakfast and just then Nevi walk in.

Ve : arre Ram kya hua ??

Ni : Kal raat bahut football khela lag raha hai.

R : Oye…..Shut up. Who I got heat stroke and my dear wife is helping me that's all.

P to N : So…Kal kya hua ???

N : Adult talks, not for you.

R : To aaj ka kya plan hai. What should we do.

P : Aaj hum log ghar par hi rahenge aur baatein karenge. Bahut ho gay yeh bhagna dodna ab thoda arram karte hai.

Last scene of this FF

Ne – Vi – P – R sitting all together sharing some drinks and laughing away.

And life is beautiful.

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Posted: 12 years ago
End ?so fast ...thoda aur continue karna chahiye tha na


first ram taking care of priya and making sure the sun does not disturb her...and then priya taking care of ram when he has heat stroke...very chweet😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sss283

End ?so fast ...thoda aur continue karna chahiye tha na


first ram taking care of priya and making sure the sun does not disturb her...and then priya taking care of ram when he has heat stroke...very chweet😛

Its not good to stretch a story...So ended it But will keep putting SS and OS
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey krish nice update "adult talk not for u"😆
ram n priya are so caring awww😃
do write more
will be waiting for next one
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautifully written and dedcribed... What a happy ending... Love ur writing... Plzzx continue to write... Either please try continue this ff or write a new one... Its a request... Nd thanx for the wonderful ff...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the update...what a beautifully written story👏. Please do write more...whatever your passion for RaYa guides you to😉...I truly enjoyed this story.

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