FF Western twist to BALH - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago
Oye...That was suprebbb...Both the update were awsomest yaar...A trip to Mahabaleswar and the dostana part was sooo very cute yaar...It was really fun reading it...Plzz Plzz Plzzz continue soonnn...Waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
as you said in the post ..This is hilarious one ..haha
how do they manage to make the dishes ...waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey next part update karo na...
waiting to see what dishes they actually make...and how they taste...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
I went through two parts and the last one is hilarious, amazing, infact I can visualize the dialogues and expressions of ram and Vikram, very well done @Krish, update ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hahaha.. Awesome update Krish!
Priya aur Neha milke Ram aur Vik ki band baja rahe hai! Dostana Part 2?!!๐Ÿ˜† Loved every scene!!
Thanks a lot for the PM yaar!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting for next part...jaldi karo na๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
awessoommee update i was just laughing till end dostana ,rajma pakod aise aise item bole hai banane ko ke bass ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...nice update waiting for next and please if possible give pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snehalparab

awessoommee update i was just laughing till end dostana ,rajma pakod aise aise item bole hai banane ko ke bass ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...nice update waiting for next and please if possible give pm...

Thanks Dude...Even your FF is very nice...Just read all the parts...Awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago

Ram and Vikram are busy making trying to figure out how to make it. There is a huge amount of commotion in the kitchen. And Priya and Neha are watching all this enjoying them selves. Vikram is looking through internet to find what Bernedetta dish. And Ram is taking Rajma out and wondering what should be done first.

After a while Priya and Neha wonder what their hubbies are upto and they land up in the kitchen. They look for their hubbies but they cant see them. Suddenly Priya notices hair peeping out from behind the platform. Priya tells neha to come inside. They both see their hubbies covered in Atta and chopped vegetables in their hair and hands full of wet atta.

Ram and Vikram look up to them and show them a puppy face.

Ram and Vikram both say in Chorus Sorryโ€ฆ..Please maaf kardoโ€ฆ.Bhukh lagi hai.

Priya and Neha both are absolutely melted. They cant be angry with them anymore. Priya and Neha both pick their hubbies and lead them to their respected bedrooms.

Priya first takes all the vegetables out of his hair. Then cleans his face with a towel. Checks his hands for cuts.

Ram : Nahi laga hai. Hum churi tak pahoche hi nahi.

Priya feels a little shy for getting caught. She continues cleaning him up with a smile. Then gives him fresh clothes to put on and asks him to come out when he is ready.

Ram and Vikram get ready and they both walk out and they see candles lit on the floor leading a pathway. They both look at each other and wonder what is this. They follow the pathway and then comes a fork way. They both follow their instincts and choose their paths. Rams path leads him to the terrace. And Vikrams to Swimming pool.

Ram looks at all this and does not know what to say. This was not even his wildest dream. And then he glances at a beauty in white saree standing near the edge. Her back towards Ram. Ram goes closer and touches her bare back with his fingers. Her body shivers as if she just got a current from 400 volts. Ram gives a gently kiss on her back and she quickly turns around.

Ram :Love you.

Priya says nothing and just hugs him tight. Soon Ram can feel his kurta a little wet and he realizes she is crying. He cups her face in his hand.

Ram : Priyaโ€ฆ..What happen Love ?

Priya : Aap promise kijiye kabhi bhi cigar ya cigeratte nahi piyenge. Please ?

Ram : arre baba itni choti se baat ke lliye aansu ???

Priya : Wo choti si baat nahi hai Ram. It can take you away from me. Please.

Ram : Okay baba. I won't. I promise. Now please rona band karo. I cant stand your tears yaar. Tumhe pata haina.

Priya : Okay sorry. Ab lets have food.

Ram : Waise khana aya kaha se.

Priya : Wo Neha aur meine driver ke saath khana kab ka order kar diya tha.

Ram : arrre To bola kyun nahi humein. We both were going mad in the kitchen.

Priya : Maza aa raha tha aap ko pareshaan karke.

Ram : Abhi bhi mazaa ata hai pareshaan karne mein ?

Priya : Hmmm

They both sit and eat their food. They finish their food and Ram can see Priya is a little sleepy. He goes to the bedroom and brings a air mattress and a duvet. He lays it down on the terrace. Closes the terrace door for privacy.

Priya : Arre yeh sab kya hai Ram ???

Ram : Wo tare gin na baaki tha na us din.

FB : Taare gin gin, Raat guzaareโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ

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Posted: 12 years ago
so ladies forgive dem...
wooo!!!!!
raya on the terrace and ram sounting d stars...
thanxx 4 d wonderful update
and
update soon...

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