The Apple of Our Eyes; Last Prt(27: Pg 62)

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vanillaflowers

@vanillaflowers

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Am loving the way this FF is rolling out.. Next update ASAP please.

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Eram

@viny_queen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Just Love the way U carry the Story forward...

Lets c wat happens aage

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

part 1
awesome start dear something really diffrent from otheres... story sms very intersting so waiting to read other parts too soon...

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Part 2

awesome update once again i feel Priya is joining Peehu's school i loved that even i loved how Ram sanded cake for Peehu n she even enjoyes it having n feed to Priya too lovely update...

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

part 2

awesome update so its Priya only who is new teacher of Peehuns class i love Peehu Priya's bonding her so like real loving mother n duaghter... missing Ram here do update soon the next part btw ending is intesrting ...

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sushfiza

@sushfiza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

ram is a doting father...peehu is a princess literally...lovd d way ram got to manage d situation in d pc...

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Suman

@_CandyCream_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Aww that was such a cute part!!
RaYa are so adorable!! Love their chemistry!! ❤️
Superbly written arathi! Cant wait for the next part!

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Thanks for a quick update and its a very super cool one. please continue

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

part 3

update is awesome yaar...the way u r carring story is just mindblowing... u have shows the love between RaYa so well... i loved Ram's masti with Priya over paper intv n at the last Peehu's words u can carry on after dinner was so cute... loved it so much... waiting for next to update...
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forgot to add... loved this sacchi muchi wala lines... awesome...

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Krutika

@kaparikh1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Hey arathi that was really a superb update... Loved the way ram held priya during yhe conference... And loved the part wherein ram teased priya with those interview ques...
Awesome... This is a grt ff... Plzz continue soon... Thanks for the PM...

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