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VAISH

@Pinky.Raya

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: D4BALH
comedy is missing in this update partner. But i m surprised.. U wrote beautiful dialogues for Rafa.. Btw which language did u use inbetween? Thankx for the PM.

gujju partner ! GUJRATI !!

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leena

@leena04

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

awesome update Pinky yaar awww Rafa is really sweet she clears the tension btw RaYa in 2 min... & its lagan bagde toh bhav bagde not baaman dear but loved her for just one thing she having intelligent & honest but i just love RaYa hug after the argument it was so cute but loved Ram & Rafa's friendship she even lie for Ram but she don't use this letter as the advantage of her i hope it don't turn into affair... as.i trust Ram but not Rafa but what is this at end what is now Rafa up to hope no more MU btw RaYa now... plz update next soon waiting for next do update soon...

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RamonaG

@RamonaG

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Fantastic.AWESOME update Pinky dear..👏 But whatis in Rafa"s mind. Hope kuch gadbad nahi hai...? 😛

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IndYa4u

@IndYa4u

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Pinky.Raya

LMFAO ! Even I dunno what that means ! Hehe

Ha Ha.. Meany.. you had me going for a min.. thinking why the hell do i not know what this means..LOL.

Alrighty.. here's my 2cents on the update then...

Absolutely LOVED Rafa's dramatic lecture to Priya. Well written... though it was pulled outta thin air by the character Rafa.. Kick A$$ Chick.. Woot Woot.

But wait.. did he just dig another hole for himself by not clarifying that Rafa was full of hot air with her lecture?? 😲 Dude will not learn huh! Men will be Men .. haha

Champak Patel ???? Are you friggin kidding me? Abbe, how typical.. Come On girl.. Gujjus' got cool names too.. 😆😆

Now... going back to Priya and Ram... Absolutely lovely couple. You are making them even more lovable by the chapter. Small arguments and ruthna - manana is becoming popular with your audience.. i am sure everyone would agree.

Rafa's got a crush on the man or what? Gotta watch this character 😉 waiting to see the "other' side of this Gujju Chick..

BTW: Ram and Priya from your story are making the live-in relationship popular..😉
Soon, You might be held responsible by the not so broadminded Janta.. 😆😆😆😆😆

Needless to Say.. Episode HIT hai Boss

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

the word TRUST is a big word, but when you feel that word it becomes so easy and it comes into your grip, but if it ditches you then you can never ever rely on that

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VAISH

@Pinky.Raya

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: IndYa4u
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Ha Ha.. Meany.. you had me going for a min.. thinking why the hell do i not know what this means..LOL.

Alrighty.. here's my 2cents on the update then...

Absolutely LOVED Rafa's dramatic lecture to Priya. Well written... though it was pulled outta thin air by the character Rafa.. Kick A$$ Chick.. Woot Woot.

But wait.. did he just dig another hole for himself by not clarifying that Rafa was full of hot air with her lecture?? 😲 Dude will not learn huh! Men will be Men .. haha

Champak Patel ???? Are you friggin kidding me? Abbe, how typical.. Come On girl.. Gujjus' got cool names too.. 😆😆

Now... going back to Priya and Ram... Absolutely lovely couple. You are making them even more lovable by the chapter. Small arguments and ruthna - manana is becoming popular with your audience.. i am sure everyone would agree.

Rafa's got a crush on the man or what? Gotta watch this character 😉 waiting to see the "other' side of this Gujju Chick..

BTW: Ram and Priya from your story are making the live-in relationship popular..😉
Soon, You might be held responsible by the not so broadminded Janta.. 😆

Needless to Say.. Episode HIT hai Boss

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VAISH

@Pinky.Raya

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

hey guys ! I am so so sorry I wont be able to update for sometime ! I am Not free and plus My lappy is NOT working ! so I am really sorry guys ! I will update ASAP ! Sorry for inconvenience !😔

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Siacutie

@Siacutie

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: Pinky.Raya
hey guys ! I am so so sorry I wont be able to update for sometime ! I am Not free and plus My lappy is NOT working ! so I am really sorry guys ! I will update ASAP ! Sorry for inconvenience !😔

its okay pinky but try to update soon 😉

missing ur missing files😆

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Harshidakp

@Harshida_Rani

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Hey Vaishu! M new here.. N sister hatss off to u! I read ur all parts of season 1.. N lol It was full of entertainment .. Kya fantabulous tha! Bas ab koi rukavat ke shadi karvado! N what a idea to bring magic of Raya... 😛 😛
N now coming on season 2 tooo
Have to tell u ki Rafa is ekdum rapchick chokri che! Ane Raya r too lovely! Apki story padhke Raya pe Aur pyaar aa raha hain! 😳
N lol at the 2nd Part! U know what.. I was reading this funniest part in the night n lol can't control my laughter.. To zorr se has padi thi n mene ghar vaalo ko jaga dia tha! Lol... U r just too good!
Now waiting for next update n plz PM me while u update next part.😊
Wee hu pan gujju chokri chu 😉

Edited by Charlotte_Sona - 12 years ago

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VAISH

@Pinky.Raya

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: Charlotte_Sona
Hey Vaishu! M new here.. N sister hatss off to u! I read ur all parts of season 1.. N lol It was full of entertainment .. Kya fantabulous tha! Bas ab koi rukavat ke shadi karvado! N what a idea to bring magic of Raya... 😛 😛
N now coming on season 2 tooo
Have to tell u ki Rafa is ekdum rapchick chokri che! Ane Raya r too lovely! Apki story padhke Raya pe Aur pyaar aa raha hain! 😳
N lol at the 2nd Part! U know what.. I was reading this funniest part in the night n lol can't control my laughter.. To zorr se has padi thi n mene ghar vaalo ko jaga dia tha! Lol... U r just too good!
Now waiting for next update n plz PM me while u update next part.😊
Wee hu pan gujju chokri chu 😉

First of all a big Thank you 😊 n yeah accept my buddy req ok ? I will pm u as soon as I will update.. ! Btw hw do u know my name ??