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taashu11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#721

congo for completing 100pages...

great job par ye kya kar diya poor ram...

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#722

Originally posted by: veena23

hahaha..are mne IF 1 sal 4 mahin pehle join kiya tha na...tab se bakwas karti ja rhi hu ab jake pehli bar kisi ff me 100 page hue...lol

Haha but pages se kya farak padta ur ff re far better yaar

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veena singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Haha but pages se kya farak padta ur ff re far better yaar

defently mujhko fark nhi padta h yar...me liye to ek bhi cmmnt aa jata h to main uchhlne lagti hu...😛..i am vry lucky that i hv plsr to make people happy...dsnt mttr ki wo muskurahat ek page se aati h ya 100 se...😊

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#724

Originally posted by: taashu11
congo for completing 100pages...

great job par ye kya kar diya poor ram...

thank u dear...hehehe aise socha thoda rambabu k dil se bhi khel lu...

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veena singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#725

Originally posted by: 123fiza1
lovely update...

thank u dear...😊

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veena singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#726

Originally posted by: Dsudipa
wonderful update Veena ji
u written very well
thx a lot pls continue soon

thank u dear😊

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#727

Hi...i know u all waiting for somthing spcl from me...but maine dil tod diya sabka koi nahi...chalo aaj romantic update de deti hu...bhai kuchh fillr to hona hi chahiye na...achha lage to wah wah kar dena na achha lage to ...khud handle karna mujhe bolne ki koi jarurat nhi h...lol...here u all go..hope aaplog gali nhi doge...enjoy the update...

Part 41

"aap thanku bol sakte hain"

priya ram ghar aate hain ram thoda upset ho gya rhta h to priya ko hi kuchh karna padega rambabu ko khush karne k liye to rambabu fresh wgrh hoke aate hain priya bhi change kar leti h...

Priya..mr.kapoor room me chaliye

ram...kyun???..aur ghar k sab log kahan h???

Priya...are m apko btana bhul gyi thi sabne dinner ka plan bnaya tha ma ke wha to sab whi h...

Ram...aur pihu???

Priya...wo bhi...chaliye na kamre me

ram...kamre me jane ki itni jaldi kyun h???

Priya...hehehe..are aise hi aap thode upset lag rhe hain to

ram...nahi main theek hu

but phir bhi dono kamre me jate hain priya ram ko bed pe bithati h aur phir khud bhi aake unki baho me baith jati h

ram...kya h yar??

Priya...kuchh nhi..aaj pihu ki mumma ko pihu k papa ko bed time story sunani h...

Ram..are mujhe nhi sunni h koi story

priya...are pr mujhe to sunani h...chupchap suniye...

Ram priya ki masumiyat dekh k muskurane lagta h

ram...suna do mere kehne se manogi to h nhi...

Priya...hehehe..wo to h..ok to ..ek chhota sa ghar rhta h..usme kai jane ek sath rhte the..ghar logo k hisab se chhota tha pr logo k dil bht bade the...aur chhote se ghar me har cheez saf dikhti thi..logo ki khushiya,logo ke gum,unki hasi unke ansu...sabkuchh aur wo sab mil bant k use share kar lete the...wha pe ek dadi thi jinke ek "golu puttr" the...jo waqai me bht golu the..

Ram...oye tum story suna rhi ho ya meri tang khinch rhi ho...

Priya...kya mr.kapoor aage to suniye...bht intresting h..(ram muskura k priya ki story sun rha hota h)...han to jo dadi k golu puttar rhte hain wo waqai bht golu rhte hain...ek din wo apni biwi se thooode se disappointed ho jate hain to unki biwi sochne lagti h ki apne golu pati ko mnane k liye kya kare??..bht sochte sochte use ek idea aata h...apko pta h mr.kapoor use kya kiya apne pati k sath

ram...nahi..??..kya kiya...

Priya...(priya btate hue wo krti bhi h)wo uthi..aur apne purs se ek cheez nikal k le aayi aur apne pati ko de diya...ye lijiye..

Ram...ye kya???

Priya...are doctor ne apko kya bola tha

ram...kya???

Priya...yhi ki mera khyal rakhiyega

ram...ha to...uska isse kya lena dena h

priya...isse hi to lena dena h..are isko padhenge tabhi to pta chalega ki kaise khyal rkhna h kya khyal rakhna h...

Ram...oh ok..

Ram padhne lagta h priya use dekhti rhti h ..

Ram...priyaaa...i will kill u

priya...achha???..pakka na

ram...oh my god...u idiot how dare u to do this

priya...hehehe

ram...shutup...kya karu main...kaise...mtlb ...main ...oh my god...ufff...m kya karu...tell me na...why u do this...mujhe kuchh samjh hi nhi aa rha h...

Ram priya ko pakad k uske chehre pe kiss karne lagta h...

Priya...mr.kapoor aaram se...aauch

ram...sorry sorry...kya hua...??...r u ok na mne kahin hurt to nhi kiya...kahin kuchh dukha to nhi ...tum theek to ho

priya...aaahh..relax m theek hu..its only 1 month pregnancy mr.kapoor ...abhi kuchh nhi dukhta h

ram...oh sit...yar mujhe to kuchh pta hi nhi h...main to samjh hi nhi pa rha hu ki react kaise karu??..kya lau tumhare liye...are yar main baap banne wala hu...ufff..main priya tumko bta nhi sakta what i feel...bolo na tumhe pani chahiye...kuchh khane ko lau...kya...kya karna hota h khyal rakhne k liye...are tum muskura kyun rhi ho...ansr to karo...m kya karu???

Priya...(ram ka chehra apne hatho me lekr)...ssshhh..boht bolte hain aap..kuchh nhi kariye bas mere pas rahiye...aur mujhe jeene dijiye ye pal..this is exactly what i want to see on ur face...i am vry sorry for irritating u soo much..pr agar doctor aapko btati to m ye pal aur khushiya miss kar deti...are ofcourse uske samne aap mujhe kiss to nhi karte na...hehehe...isiliye mne doctor ko nahi btane diya qki ye sirf humdono ka pal h ise m ek bar kho chuki thi dubara nhi khona chahti h...congratulations papa...(she kiss hin on forehead)

Ram...priya..main tumhe explain nhi kar sakta ki m kitna khush hu...mujhe aa wo sab mil gya jo mne khoya tha...main iske ek bhi pal ek bhi lamhe ko miss nhi karna chahta hu..m sabkuchh karna chahta hu..lekin mujhe kuchh pta hi nhi h..main baap bhale hi dusri bar ban rha hu pr ye ehsas mere liye ekdm nya h

priya...i know mr.kapoor...agr apko kuchh nhi pta h to seekh lijiye..we hv too much time

ram...par kaise ma se puchhu...

Priya...ufff abhi jayenge kya puchhne...subah puchh lijiyega

ram...pr m maa se kya puchhunga

priya...hehehe...mujhe kya pta wo apki problm h

ram...aye..tum mujhe pareshan mt karo waise bhi tumne bht pareshan kiya h aaj...seriously btao na kaise seekhunga

priya...oh...are h na wo apka google puchh lijiyega usi se..

Ram...are ye to mne socha hi nhi..mera laptop kahan h

priya...oh mr.kapoor aap na sachhi me golu h...mujhe abhi apka laptop nhi chahiye yha..please

ram...to kya chahiye...bolo na main lake deta hu...

Priya...aap chahe to thank u bol sakte hain mujhe...pta nhi phir bad me mauka mile na mile thank u bolne ka...

Ram...mtlb???

Priya...mtlb ye dadi k golu puttr ki aaj sablog dinner k bad ma papa k wha hi sone wale hain

ram...ye tumhe kaise pta???

Priya...usse apko kya mtlb aap aam khaiye na ped kyun gin rhe hain..

Ram..o teri...but sochlo ab to double thank u ho gya h...

Priya...(sharma k)...hehehe...soch liya h

ram...woow

he kiss her forehead & say...

Ram...thanku soo much priya meri jindgi me aane ke liye..mujhe itni sari khushiya dene k liye..thank u darling..& i love u

priya..i love u 2 mr.kapoor

phir dono ekdusre ki ankho me kho jate hain aur ankho se bat hontho tak pahonch jati h...baki aplogo ki soch jaha tak ja sake...qki log kehte hain pyar karne ki koi hadh nhi hoti...lol

to b continue...

Hihihi...i am vry sorry to irritate u all

..are ekta kuch bhi kare but m rambabu ko dukhi nhi kar sakti isliye nhi ki usse mujhe koi fark padhta h balki isliye ki usse priya ko fark padhta h aur priya ki har bat se mujhe fark padhta h to priya rambabu ko dukhi nhi dekh sakti aur m priya ko dukhi nhi de sakti...aur waise bhi itni updates deti hu to thoooda nakhra to m bhi mar hi sakti hu...hope u all enjoy it...?

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shavii

@shavii

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#728

Maateee Aaapp dhanya hooo ekta ko koi beat karsakta chain WO aaap took baa I comment Kal par aapne itlnanakra dikya are sunne nakre waliii
😆 😆 😉

ohoh ye kya veenaa maaate tum ekta maata se badi maata niakali pehle hum sab ko sataya ab u gave the good news ohh bhi aaapke style meeeinnn u r and start maaate😉 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 pehle meri mood saach much karaab ta lekin jaab aapki update read kiya i was in shock😲 i read it 3 timess to confirm what was written and which was raya's pregnancy track.. aaap ne haaamaari maan rakliyaaa😳 thanks for it..jahanpanaa tujsi great hoo😆

Edited by shamavi - 12 years ago