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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sahana747

👏 How much you have imbibed the characters of Ram and Priya even the CVs have not understood, that is why all this kichdi. But you are simply great ho, Only you can take BALH to its logical conclusions.Keep us happy..


defently..i would try...thank u...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 11

"koi rasta hai?"

Ram baitha rhta h aur priya ki bato kbare me sochta rhta h ki kya kare kya na kare wo itni asani se priya ko maaf bhi nhi kar sakta h aur pihu ko bhi nhi chhod sakta h…wo apne layer ko phone krta h…

Ram…wakil sahib m ye janna chahta hu ki is case me hamare jitney k kitne chances hain

Lawyer…sir bilkul bhi nhi

Ram….aap kehna kya chahte hain??kaise vakil h aap???ek case handle nhi kr sakte…

Lawyer…sir isme vakil hone wali koi baat nhi h ye law h…5 sal ntak k bachhe ki custody hamesha ma ki hi side pe hoti h qki us waqt bachhe ko ma ki jarurat hoti h

Ram…ok ok dnt teach me law…koi rasta ho to btaiye

Lawyer…iske do hi raste hain ya to aap bachhe ki ma ko kisi bhi trh glt sabit kriye as hercharacter or smthing else jiski wajah se wo bachhe ki parwarish dhang se nhi kr sakti…ya to phir sirf ek tareeka h ki bachhe ki ma apko khud bachha de de…yani out of court settlement…baat krk..

Ram…ok main apse bad me bat krta hu

Ufff ram ko ab to bilkul bhi rasta nhi dikh rha hota h ki kya kare kl tk sabko option deta phir rha tha ki kaun kiski side pr h pr aaj to priya ne use aise chakkr me dal diya h ki lagta h kahin use hi na priya ki side leni pad jaye…ram ka soch soch k deemag kharab hue jar ha tha…tabhi uski nazar tasweer ki taraf padhti h..use priya ka dialogue yaad aa jata h..

Aap ko kamre ka badla hua rang to dikh gya pr ye tasveer nhi dikhi mr.kapoor..ye sab maine kiske liye kiya aap k hi liye to

Tabhi peechhe se Ayesha aa jati h…ram koi prblm h kya aap bht pareshan lag rhe hain

Ram chaunk jata h…ha wo …nhi aise hi…bs thoda sa pareshan hu

Aayesha…bataiye na mujhe shayad main kuchh madad kar pau..a to ap ki hi saide pe hu na..u should share with me

Ram..hmmm actually wo lawyer keh rha tha ki itne chhote bachhe ki custody ma ko hi mil sakti h

Ayesha….are to usne kuchh solution bhi to btaya hoga

Ram…ha btaya to …ya to hum priya ko glt sabit kr de ye dikhaye ki wo pihu ko nhi pal sakti dhang se ya phir priya khud mujhe pihu ko de de…

Ayesha…are to kya problem h aap to jante hi h ki priya di aur rajat k beech me kuchh h..hum use use kar sakte hain

Ram…deemag kharab ho gya h tumhara…apni hadh me rho un dono k beech me aisa kuchh nhi h

Ayesha..lekin ram rajat ne to khud kaha tha

Ram…tum mujhe sikhaogi ya btaogi ki kaun kya h..main tumse jyada achhi trh se un dono ko janta hu…samajhi..now leave

Ayesha…lekin ram

Ram…I say leave

Ayesha chali jati h …aur khud k upar chillati h…kya Ayesha tere sath kyun hota h ye jb tu kuchh achha krne jati hu to hamesha kuchh na kuchh gadbad ho jati h..kya karu ye ram aur priya di to pta nhi kis mitti k bane hain aise chipke rhte hain ki itne salo tak bhi dur rhne k bawjood itna gussa aur itni narazgi k bawjud bhi inke beech me koi nhi aa sakta aur ek main hu kuchh bhi karu to glt hi hota hkya karu…(ullu kahin ki koi kam sahi karne k liye bhagwan ne insane ko ek cheez di hoti h jise hum deemag kahte h…pr tere time pe gadbad ho gyi …bhagwan tere chehre pe itna dhyan de ke bnane lage the ki parvatiji ko gussa aa gya aur wo shivji se ladne lagi isi chakkr me bhagwan ne jaldi se tujhe pack krk bhej diya aur deemag dena bhul gye …aajtk to tu ma bhn k deemag se chalti thi…achhekam k liye bhn ka deemag tha bewkufi wale kam k liye ma ka…lekin ab to dono me se kisi ka bhi nhi h to ab bate glt hi hongi na…rhn de jyada soch mt…insane ko khali cheezo pe jor nhi dalna chahiye…koi fayeda nhi hota)…

Udhar ram sochta h ki kya waqai me rajat aur priya k beech me kuchh h..lekin yar m to achhi tarah se janta hu ki rajat ne hi in sab bato ki shuruat kit hi…balki mne khud hi to uksaya tha usne to kabhi bhi pooja ki trf se koi sign nhi btaya tha…shayad m pihu ko pane k chakkr me jyada hi soch rha hu..mujhe priya ki shart k bare me sochna chahiye …main pihu ko do din rakh k dekhta hu agr rh jayegi to theek wrna phir rakh dunga kapoor mention k kisi kone me priya ko bhi mujhe sirf pihu se mtlb hai…aur uske liye mujhe priya ko bhi bardast krna pade to kar lunga..aur phir priya samne rahegi to main use ache se maza chakhaunga…mujhe itna rulaya h na …main bhi nhi chhodunga use..

Udhar priya bht tensn me rhti h ki kya kare aur kya na kare pta nhi ram uski shart manenge ya nhi waise wo janti thi ki pihu k liye ram kuchh bhi karenge..ek to jiddi h dusre baap h aur court k faisle k bare me wo samajh hi sakti h to wopihu ko to nhi chhodenge bhale hi unhe pihu mere sath hi kyun accept krni pade…hopefully ram man jaye taki pihu ki jindgi barbad hone se bach jaye…tabhi shruti ka phone aa jata h

Priya…ha shrti kuchh hua kya ghar ka

Shruti..priya h to ek ghar apni society me hi lekin

Priya…lekin kya???

Shruti…bht chhota h sirf ek karma h aur rent bhi thoda jyada h

Priya….are its ok yar m manage kr lungi..waise bhi ghr chhota ho ya bada ghar me insane ka hona jaruri h aur unke beech pyar hona jaruri h…priya k samne shipra khadi rhti h….achha humlog aaj hi shift ho sakte hain kya???

Shruti…kabhi bhi

Priya…thanks shruti..kam se kam tune to sath diya

Shruti…anytime yar dost hote kisliye hain..chal by…milte h bad me

Shipra…priya…

Priya…ma tnsn mt lijiye ghar mil gya h bas humlog abhi shift ho jayenge

Tabhi sudhirji aa jate hain…priya…kahan jane ki taiyari kar rhi h..ye bag wagairh

Priya…papa m wo soch rhi thi ki kitne din aise yha rahungi..isiliye yhi isi society me rent pe ek ghr liya h

Sudhir…priya tera deemag to theek h…kitne din tak mtlb …tera baap abhi jinda h aur tujhe sari jindagi apne ghr me rakh k khila sakta hteri aisa sochne ki himmat bhi kaise hui…5 sal ki saja kam h jot u aur saja dena chahti h…beta aisi kya glti ho gyi h humse ..

Priya…papa please aisa mt kahiye…glti apse nhi mujhse hui h…5 sal pehle bhi mne hi glti kit hi aap sab ki jindgi se jake aur aaj bhi meri hi glti h ki main aap sabki jindgiyo me wapas aakr unhe disturb kr rhi hu…please papa m janti hu ki aap mujhe jindgi bhar apne ghr me rakh sakte h…lekin papa mere andr waise bhi bht sara guilt h main ek aur guilt leke nhi jeena chahti ki mere yha rhne se ..hum sabki jindgiya aur uljhengi…plez papa aapto mujhe samjhiye…m kisse apne halat samjhne ki ummeed karu…har koi to mujhse naraz pareshan h…kam se kam aap to mera sath de dijiye please papa…

Sudhir…achha achha rona band kar…main janta hu ye sab kyun ho rha h…theek h tu jaisa theek samjhe…lekin ek bat hamesha yad rakhna ki koi tere sath ho ya na ho …main hu hamesha tere sath..tu job hi chahe har bat me..

Priya…thank u papa…aur rone lagti h sudhir k seene se lag k

Sudhir…bs bs chup ho ja

Udhar ram isi uthal puthal me pada h ki kya kare kya na kare…tabhi use pihu ki yad aa jati h to wo sochta h ki yar jo hoga dekha jayega…aaj mne ek bar bhi pihu se bat bhi nhi ki …mil k ata hu aur priya se bhi bat kae lunga…ram Sharma house jata h….pr priya aur pihu wha nhi rhte hain…ram bhadak jata h

Ram…priya aisa nhi kar sakti h …how dare she is …wo phir se meri beti ko mujhse dur nhi kar sakti…agar usne phir se aisa kiya to m use bilkul nhi chhodunga…

Sudhir…bas karo ram…shant ho jao…bht ho gya…main bardast sirf isliye kar rha hu qki meri beti ki galti thi…lekin wo maafi to mang rhi h na…kahan se itna gussa aa gya h tumme kit um bas apne bare me aur apni beti k bare me soch rhe ho…hum sabk bare me to soch hi nhi rhe ho…apni beti k liye tum meri beti ko itni takleef de rhe ho agar tum ek baap hoke nhi bardasst kr sakte ho ye sab to main bhi nhi kr saktas apni beti ki takleef bardast…kahin nhi gyi h…bas tumhari wajah se wo apne hi ghr se begani ho gyi h…tumse main bht samjhdari ki ummeed krta tha ram…lekin…main ye bilkul nhi kh rha hu kit um galat ho …tum bilkul sahi ho…lekin ek bar priya ki jagah rh dekho to tumhe samajh me aayega…m bhi ek baap hu mujhe bhi meri beti se 5 sal dur rhn a pada wo bhi usi beti ki khud ki galti se ….main bht naraz tha baat nhi kr rha tha…uski taraf dekh bhi nhi rha tha…lekin phir bhi hu to baap hi na…meri nafrat aur gusse pe mera pyar bhari pad gya ….main nhi dekh paya uske aansu…nhi bardast kr paya m uski takjleef aur chahe koi uska sath de ya na de main hamesha uska sath dunga…aura b ek baap k samne dusra baap khada h …aur main tumse apni beti ki khushiya mang rha hu…tum chahe job hi krna…bs meri beti ko koi takleef nhi hona chahiye…aur ram m jitna tumhe janta hu to main tumse ye ummeed kar sakta hu…ye hai priya ka address wo yhi society me rent per h rhi h….tum jake mil lo…..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Lavi_961

Wah! Superb tha ji!!



thank u sooo much ji pr ye btao...ki ajkl ghayab kahan ho??
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update...its very interesting..please continue soon
Edited by lalmadhu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update di continue soon👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lalmadhu

Superb update...its very interesting..please continue soon



thank u sooo much...it will b
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...i cant find words to express my feelings...
it was very touching...
i really really wish this would happen in the serial too...fingers crossed



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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update,don't have words to describe. waiting for next update. please pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anizor

awsome veena. thanks


😊🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago





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