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saniya9919

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Sorry for replying late Anju. Read all the parts in one go.😊 You write so naturally.⭐️Awesome !

Loved the concept. Ram has changed so much...just loved the transformation of his character..😛 Loved all the parts but Part-3 was fabulous.😍

The last part is so beautifully written...just loved it.❤️😳 You are awesome writer & can write any scene ...elegantly.😛 So keep writing more & more RaYalicious scenes.😃

Just fearing for the reason...why did they break-up??

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sushfiza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

very realistic.i m reading it today.sory fr late comment.keep updating both beutifl ffs.thnx

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IPSO_FACTO

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: saniya9919
Sorry for replying late Anju. Read all the parts in one go.😊 You write so naturally.⭐️Awesome !
Loved the concept. Ram has changed so much...just loved the transformation of his character..😛 Loved all the parts but Part-3 was fabulous.😍

The last part is so beautifully written...just loved it.❤️😳 You are awesome writer & can write any scene ...elegantly.😛 So keep writing more & more RaYalicious scenes.😃

Just fearing for the reason...why did they break-up??

thank you so much saniya...😳 soon you will know the reason😊

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IPSO_FACTO

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: 123fiza1
very realistic.i m reading it today.sory fr late comment.keep updating both beutifl ffs.thnx

hey yar its alright..thanks for reading🤗

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sss283

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

loved it...super cool raya moments...
gets even more exciting every minute...
am dying to know the mystery behind seperation...
jaldi update karo na

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IPSO_FACTO

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: sss283
loved it...super cool raya moments...
gets even more exciting every minute...
am dying to know the mystery behind seperation...
jaldi update karo na

hey subbu Thanks for reading...i ma sorry am late with updates now a days but my classes have started and i dont get much time to write moreover have to prepare a draft for an event ...

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IPSO_FACTO

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Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: cutiesakshi
nice update...grt gng...update soon

thnak you dear will update asap😃

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RamonaG

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Posted: 13 years ago

#248

very romantic and beautiful scene 😍..brilliantly written 👍🏼

continue soon...great work Anju😳

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IPSO_FACTO

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: ...RamonaG...
very romantic and beautiful scene 😍..brilliantly written 👍🏼

continue soon...great work Anju😳

thank you ramo di😃

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IPSO_FACTO

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Posted: 13 years ago

#250

CHAPTER 7- The Mistake...

next day in college ...Ram was moving towards his class when Akirti stops him...

"Did you check your mail this morning?" she asked...

"no didnt get time why?"

"our presentation has been selected..." she said sounding hardly excited...

"what? crap hell no...this cant be possible...i will see you later Akirti...i have some work to do..." saying this Ram makes his way to Priya's class...

Priya hugs him.."yaay you did it...just now Economics prof said your work was appreciable and you are selected...am so happy..."

"hey thanks...but baby what about you...am sure they would have selected you too...isnt it..."

"no Ram...we didnt make it...but big deal huh..." she said smiling...

"am sorry baby..." Ram was upset coz he knew how hard Priya had worked for it...

"sorry for what...you go or me...its the same thing..now be a good boy and start packing your stuff..." she dragged him out of the class...

"No i dont wanna go to bangalore...not for some geek kind of event...i did this just coz Priya could also be going...and now when she is not going why the hell will i go..." he said to himself...

"Priya...am not going..."

"why.." she asked shocked...

"ypu know na...i know ihave no chance there..."

"Ram dare you say that you are going and thats final..."

Ram agrees after a lot of pestering by Priya...

Ram and Akirti head to Bangalore...

in the event they are not able to make it and they lose ...but it bothered Ram the least...

Akirti - so now we are done with that boring stuff...so would you be joining me or not...i am going to the disco...my friends will be there in just a few mins...

"your friends here?" he asked confused...

"yeah i have a few friends here...so if you are done with your questions can we just go and relax..."

"ok fine" saying this they both make their way to the disco...

lot of drinking and boozing...Ram had already gulped down 10 shots ..and he was high...he was not in his senses...next day he finds himself in his hotel room...he opens his eyes to find Akirti going through her camera and laughing...

"aaah my head...crap am not drinking again..." he said rubbibg his head...

"you drink like a girl..." Akirti snapped at him...

"what happened last night..." he asked drinking water...

"nothing...you were high...and you kissed some of the girls..."

"ok" ...and then he realized what she said...he spits the water out...

"waht kissed...are you crazy...no hell no..." he said panicking...

"oh yeah look at these..." she shows him the pics ...he was not actually kissing the girl but was pecking her in a way he would think twice before doing it with Priya...in the next pics he was dancing very close with the girls...

"oh shit...waht have i done...oh my god..." he starts pacing u and down in the room...

"hey chill dude...see i am deleting these pics...no one will ever know..." she deletes the pic folder from her camera...

"ca...can you tell me how many girls did...i..."

"3..." she replied...

"3...hell...who were they..." he asked totally ashamed...

"hmmm remember the girl who was in black and the other in pink..." she replied...

"yeah i have a faint memory about it...and third who was the other girl...who did i kiss..."

"me..." she said with absolutely no reaction...she was totally composed...

"no way...no way...am such a jerkkk..."

"hey relax you...no one will know about it..." she retorted...

"how will i face Priya now..."

"dude you dont need to tell her...what happened its just between you and me...so chill..."