FF:'Yet Unknown.'Part-30 up. on pg.104(14/02/13)

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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OMG Trupti !!!!!Girl I must say you are brilliant ..
What an idea madam ji ,stair case wala episode ..I mean their first meeting in the show you potrayed very well with present ..
So Priya liked at thaat time only ..And Ram is fulfilling her wish ..
So now he became superman for Priya ..Lovely
The flash backs were just flowing with the present...
Loved the bindi scene ..I'm thinkin even in this stage also Ram wants to correct her bindi ..
And have you noticed present days ,They are not showing Priya having a bindi...
Surely Its going to come and Ram will correct it ..[Expectation]
Love you for this , Ithna busy scedule me bhi aap update diya na ...
Thank you so much ..Great going ..Update next part sooonn...
👏 👏 👏

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Eram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#642

that staircase safar was lovely FB also amzing 😃👏bindi scene superb👏

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sushfiza

@sushfiza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#643

thanks for the pm trupti di...the restlessness of ram due to priyas bindi was beautiful...this part seems very real n natural...another key point was starecase conversation

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Anjali

@Pinkjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#644

Mindblowing. I just love this journey of raya .. Raya has really came a long way from there first meet.. Finely written.. Update soon..

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Mani

@Mani-RK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#645

o read this uppy last n8 n it took half an hour to complete it

actually i was thinking abt balh season 1 during reading ur update😃

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Krutika

@kaparikh1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#646

Your update came as a saviour...Kash we cud see such romance in the show...But hats off to u such a fab update yaar...Just love u...Thank u for the update...🤗

Please update soon dear...

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#647

balh season 1 ki yaad diladi, bindi scene is very nice

continue soon

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Dsudipa

@Dsudipa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#648

love it bindi scene is very nice 👏 pls update soon

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538742

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Posted: 12 years ago

#649

AweSome and very very well written...🤗

Loved the way u right the bindi scene and stair case one too😳

Totally Beautiful update😳

Update soon..

TC <3 <3

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 12 years ago

#650

Part23

awww what an update yaar... snake part i feel like kinda filmy... i always thought would it be really true... that snake have some conection with Sivji's mantra... then i feel i will only get to know when i will exprianced but i guess... i hope face such situations ever... lol i loved that part even real Simba part too he bite twice Nik... ab toh pakka hai dogies ko dumano ki parakh insaano se zayda hoti hai... wowoowo i really loved it... n enjoyed it a lot now moving on next part let's see what is store there...

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