FF:'Yet Unknown.'Part-30 up. on pg.104(14/02/13) - Page 61

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Posted: 12 years ago
so simba was a dog oh god ye priya bhi na kya kya soch leti he but her idea worked 😆snake to chala gaya
simba ne do bar niharika pr attack kiya wow wo bhi jan gaya hoga niharka ko🤣
superb update continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Roflsss.. Really dear that was just awesome.. I can clearly imagine the expression of raya during that scaring time.. A very happy new year, update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hehehehehe...That snake wala part was tooo good yaar just loved it...And also loved that simba had attacked niharika twice.. Priya shud take back Simba to KM...Just loved the update... And now pls update jaldi jaldi se...
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update... simba niharika ko sahi pahchana...isiliye to attack kiya love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Trupti! Happy new year! 🤗
I'm super busy with my exams.. So sorry for not commenting.. I'll def comment after my exams! 😊 Take care!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ufff Trupti ,Im extremly sorry for posting thecomment late ..Actuallyy i posted but it was not there ..
Sorry for that ..Happy new year ..

Coming to the update ..Priyaa thought snake was his pet ,I can so imagine Rams expressions ..I was smiling while reading the whole update ..Thank you for the beautiful update..
so finally simbha is his pet dog ..Cool one ...Jaldi update chahiye

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you so much for your precious comments, likes. Hope you all enjoy the next part.

Part 24:

Ram introduces Priya to Laxman & his wife Revati. She didn't realize why Ram hadn't opened the door of the Villa until Laxman & his wife reached there. Laxman makes a call to his mother to inform that Ram & Priya have reached at the villa. He then gives the cell phone to Ram. Ram talks with his mother.

Ram: Dwarka Maa mujhpe bahot gussa hain kya? (Bit tensed)

Priya observes Ram's facial expressions changed which show as if he respects the lady. He shows this kind of concern for someone's feelings only for few people. Those people for whom he cares a lot, loves a lot.

Laxman: Aap khud he dekhiye. (Tries to suppress his smile)

Ram: Haa maa kaam itna hain kay aaney mein aise late hua.

After that he kept on saying only 'Ji Maa' in soft voice. While talking to her, his face became pale in between reflecting the same remorseful expressions. The expressions which were flashed on his face while talking about why Simba couldn't stay at KM. After he finishes his call.

Ram: Aur Laxman, Gauri ki shaadi ki tayyari kaise chal rahi hai?

Laxman: Ram bhai puchheye mat. Yahan aaney kay liye nikal rahey the, toh phirse jaruri kaam kay liye ghar rukana pada.

Ram: I can understand. (Steals glances at Priya) Gauri khush hain na?

Laxman's wife tells about Gauri. Gauri is Laxman's younger sibling.

Laxman: Gauri bahot jyada khush hain, ussney ladka bhi accha chhuna hain.California kay college mein do dilo ka milan hua. Lekin sab jaldbaazi mein ho raha hain.

Ram: Very Good. Love marriage hain na, phir tensionwali koi baat he nahi hain.

Laxama:Waise koi baat nahi hain par shaadi hotey waqt do gharo ka milan bahot najuk hota hain, Sab rit-rewaaj, sab kay egos ko lekar har modpe sambhalna hota hain.

Ram: I know…I know. Humari shaadi kay waqt bhi yeh sab hua tha. I can understand. (Looking at Priya)

Laxman: Abb jo ghar mein bade hain who baatein nikal letay hai jaise ki 'Humrey yahan aise nahi hota hain, ya humlogo mein waise he hota hain'. Phir sab bhaagdaud karni hoti hain.

Ram: Humari shaadi mein bhi bahot baar aise hua tha, khass karkay Priya ki Nani toh Indore se thaankar aayi thi kay ek bhi rewaaj chhodegi nahi.(Laughs looking at Priya, she retorts him back by giving one of her strict looks by making her eyes big)

They all reached at the entrance door. Laxman opens the lock of the door. They instruct Ram & Priya to stay outside so that Laxman's wife will do 'Nazar utarna' before they would enter in the house. Laxman & his wife went inside the house. The moment they went inside,

Priya: Meri naani ka naam lena jaruri tha? (In huff)

Ram: Mein toh majjak kar raha tha, aur tumhari naani ka behavior waisehe tha.

Priya: Aur aapki daadi bhi toh thi, uss mein shamil, taali kabhi ek haath se nahi bajti hain.

Ram: Wait …wait..abb daadi sirf 'Aapki daadi' ho gayi. Jabse ghar mein tum aayi ho, meri daadi meri rahe nahi. Aur abb 'Aap ki Daadi.'

Priya: Meray kaheinay ka matlab hain, humari shaadi honeyse peheley toh who sirf 'Aap ki Daadi' thi. Aur mujhe hain na abb kuch jalney ki smell aa rahi hain. (Acts like sniffing) He reacts with irritated face.

Laxman & his wife come back; she holds a thali in hand. They give smile to Ram-Priya.

Laxman: Bhai waise aapko aur bhabhi ko dekhkar aise laggta hain ki aap ki shaadi kai saal bahot puraani hain. Bahot saara pyaar dekhayi de raha hain.(Laughingly)

Revati does kumkum-tilak & allow them to enter in the spacious living room after completing the auspicious ritual.

Revati: Abb sab theek hain, aap andar aa saktey ho. Ek toh aapko itani raat ho gayi hain aaney mein, iss liye aap dono ki achhese nazar utarni thi. (They entered in the villa.)

Ram: Ek baat mujhe samajh mein nahi aa rahi, Maa phone pe bol rahi thi kay nayi dulhan ka khayal rakho. Par humari shaadi ko abb ek saal ho gaya hain.

Revati: Shaadi kay baad peheli baar iss ghar aaye hain, issliye nayi dulhan jaisehe hain. Aap itani raatko aa rahey the, toh unko chinta ho rahi thi.

Priya: Arre yaad aaya, daadi ko phone karna hain, who bhi humarey phone kay intezaar mein soyi nahi hogi.

After finishing her talk with Daadi, Priya goes to the kitchen with Revati. Both Ram & Priya didn't want to eat anything as they had their dinner before leaving KM. Revati shows everything arranged in the kitchen to Priya specially mentioning about the apples which Ram had told them to arrange at any cost. That brought a cute smile to Priya's face. Laxman & Ram got the two bags from the car. Ram tells him that rest of the things; they would get inside in the morning. Laxman asks him, if they want any household help he would arrange someone.Ram tells him if they would need anything he would let him know. Before the couple leave from there Ram makes sure that Laxman would have arranged the other things which he had told him to do in advance. The couple left from there, Simba stays back with Ram & Priya. Finally, Ram closes the entrance door when they came inside after saying goodbyes to them. As she starts to walk, rubbing her bare arms by palms of her hands,

Priya: Kitani thand hain yahan pe! (She shivers due to coolness in the air)

Ram: (Thinking to himself as his eyes wanders on her 'Wearing a red saree in this chilled weather; she looks like a snow covered strawberry in the fields of Mahabaleshwar.') I must say very tempting! (He blurts out in loud voice; she turns around to look at him).

Priya: Kuch kahan kya aapney? (Confused) Abhi kuch der peheley toh aapko bhuk nahi laggi thi. (Looking at his open mouthed face)

Ram: (Comes and stands behind her, puts his finger on her bare back) Nahi toh…

Priya: Uhhh! aapka haath kitna thanda hain(Shivers more due to his teasing touch, turning her head)He enjoys it, continues to do.

Ram: (Pressing his finger more against bare skin of her back) I am talking about this (he speaks into her ear, nibbles it)

Priya: (She gets the butterflies) Kya? (Putting her hand on his cheek, feels his skin by her palm)

Ram: (In husky voice) this is tempting (Places a soft kiss on her bare skin of the back)The touch of his lips makes her weak) She moans

Priya: Please Ram don't do this to me. Simba dekh raha hain. (Looking at Simba nervously, she speaks)

Hearing it, Simba swiftly runs towards the other room before anyone would say anything further.

Ram: (A parting his lips from her skin) Poor thing. Why did you made him so conscious? (Laughs) Who thodi na kissi ko jaakar bataaneywala hain, kay hum dono kya kar rahey the.

Priya: (Starts to walk towards the bags) Who kaafi smjhdaar hain. Shameless nahi hain aap ki tarah, issliye bhaaga yahan se(With naughty smile) Kahipe bhi suru ho jaatey ho aap, office mein Yashikaney bhi hum donoko dekh liya tha.

Ram: I know it. You do this purposely. You love teasing me like this (Complains)

Priya: Now what? Abb meiney kya kiya? (Checking her bag)

Ram: You are wearing the Red Saree. When you came to my office…again that was one more beautiful. How the guy can control? (Exasperated)

Priya: (Stunned by his explanation, her lips twitches into grin) Ohhh! I see (Come backs & stands in front of him) my 'Raging Bull gets out of control by seeing the color Red'. (Holding the corner of a pallu of her saree, she caresses his face with it)

He likes this way of attention to him by his wife. He smiles looking into her eyes with twinkle.

Ram: Now this is like my good girl! (Wrapping his arms around her waist)

Priya: Aww..!(Feeling his touch) aap kay haath kitnay thande hain. Pata hain? Maaney meray woolen cloths jis bag mein pack kiye hain who car meihe rahey gaye hain.Aur yahanpe kitani thand hain.

His fingers start moving on all over her back. She leans against him for support, wrapping her arms around him.

Ram: Are you a small kid? Maaney diye huye 'Woolen cloths' mein pack hokar soney kay liye?

Priya: Normal insaano mein woolen cloths he pehentey hain jab thandi ka mausam aata hain. (Now she starts realizing slowly, as her skin is gets warm feeling because of his palms all over her back)

Ram: You don't worry! Meray pass dusra tarika hain.(Winks) 'Warm' rahainey kay liye.(Starts nuzzling column of her neck)

Priya: (She understands his words, blushes, buries her head more deeply into his chest) Ek baar aapka dusra tarika dekha hain, Simba ki jagah koi aur he aaya tha. (Kisses on his chest)

Ram: (Stops nuzzling) don't challenge me. (Holds her shoulders by his hands, gives his intense look to her)

Priya: I am not. I just want to feel warm & comfortable in this cool weather. (Blushes more, lowers her gaze)

Ram: You just wait & watch Mrs. Kapoor. (Bends down & lifts her in his arms)

Priya: Mr. Kapoor kya kar rahain ho aap, puri ek floor ki height staircase se chalkay jaana hain(Wrapping her arm around his shoulder, another hand clutches to his T-shirt collar.)

Ram: Sachhi yaar tum peheleys thodi motti lagg rahi ho, par abb mein nahi ruknaywala hun! (Starts walking towards the staircase)

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yayy...!!!!
What a grt update yaar...Just loved...Poor Simba became conscious by seee our RaYa romance...Awww...Just loved these cozy moments between our RaYa... Thank u, thank u so so much for such a cute update...
Love yaa...🤗 And b4 i forget again wish u a very happy and a prosperous new year...May all ur wishes come true dear...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww...lovely update...such m bht thand h...hahaa...thanks for pm...continue soon!!!

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