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Posted: 12 years ago

Part-16:

Ram: (Takes the chocolate) let's eat our favorite things Mrs. Kapoor & celebrate. (Kisses her deeply, tasting each others lips of course along with their favorite chocolate & Almond)

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PART-2: (Present)

She came back to the present as hurts her hand by stroking the railing in huff. Oouch' she cried. Ram came forward who was standing at the balcony door for few minutes, watching her. Took her hand in his hand & placed a soft kiss there saying" Happy Friendship's Day Mrs. Kapoor! So how many friends of yours wished you since early morning?"(Winking at her)

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Priya: Meine aapse meray friend ke baarey mein kahan tha na, ussi ka phone tha.

Ram: (Starts nuzzling her hand) you still smell like a chocolate (Gives his intense look)

Priya: (His arms move to wrap around her waist, pulling her closer) Meri baat toh suniye (Starts melting, resting her hands against his chest, struggles)

Ram: Bolo (Starts taking the steps in backward direction towards their bedroom till reaches near their bed, still holding her in his embrace) Today is Sunday, don't act like a meager….no office no college. (Laughs into her ears)

Priya: So? (Caressing his cheek, her fingers wraps around back of his neck)

Ram: Kya tum meray saath chocolate share karogi? (Looking into her eyes)

Priya: Kal raat se humlogone kitnay chocolates khaye hain (Blushes)

Ram: Kal raatse he toh 'Friendship Day' suru hua. (Gazes at her lips intentionally)

Priya: (Lowers her eyes) Chocolates zyaada khane se daant kharab hotey hai, aapko pata hain na?

Ram: Yeh toh tumhey sochna chahiye tha, gift karneyse peheley.

Priya: Aap kya ek he din mein sab khatam karengey?

Ram: Chocolates toh mujhe waise bhi pasand hai. Tell me! You too enjoyed eating chocolates with me since last night.

Priya: (Blushes, lowers her gaze) Hummm! Tasty the (A smile flashes on face)

Ram: Who kya kahey raheti 'Small gesture for celebration of our friendship' (Brings his lips near hers)

Priya: (Keeps her finger on his lips) Iss ka matlab sab chocolates khatam karna nahi.

Ram: Haa lekin acche 'friend' se ek 'accha pati' ban gaya hun toh …Itna toh mujhe karma he hoga (Grabs her hand to move away)

Priya: Jaise ke?

Ram: 'Small gesture' from your husband (Kisses softly on her lips) Good Morning!

Priya: Good morning! (Kisses him back)

Ram: Aur 'Sona' chahiye humey, neend bhi puri nahi huyi hai. (Holding her in tight grip bends down, his forehead touching to hers) Tum jaldi kyon uthi?

Priya: Wohi toh aapko batana chahti hun. Meray friend ka phone tha.

Ram: Itani subah-subah…?

Priya: It's not his fault.

Ram: Does not he know that disturbing a married couple early in the morning is a bad manner? (With anger)

Priya: No. He does not know that I got married.

Ram: Why? Tumney ussey bataya nahi? (Confused)

Priya: Nahi na! Ussney socha mein roj ke tarah, ussey mil sakti hun. (Calmly)

Ram: Kya?? Tum ussey roj milti thi. (Shouts in shock)

Priya: Of course shaadi se pehele park mein milti thi. (Normal)

Ram: Don't tell me woh tumhey roj park mein milta tha? (Shouting gets louder in exasperation)

Priya: Haa… (Confused) par uss mein itani chillake baat karney ke kya baat hain (Shouts in reply)

Ram: Come on yaar! Ek ladki jo abb meri biwi hain who roj ek ladke se park mein milti thi. Aur tum kaheti ho iss mein kaunsi badi baat hain? (Still holding her in his arms)

Priya: (Laughs) Meri tarah park mein who bhi wahanpe 'Morning Walk' ke liye aata tha. (Shakes her head by her hand)

Ram: (Breaths) Toh aise kahon na! (Relaxes)

Priya: We were official members of 'Borivli National Park' as morning walkers that too by paying yearly fees (Proudly)

Ram: Mujhe heart-attack denay mein majja aata hain kya tumhey?

Priya: Eeew…! Aap aise kaise soch saktey ho?

Ram: Tum aise kaise bol rahi thi... Tum socho toh, ke ek ladka aur ek ladki park mein kyon miltey hain?

Priya: Meray saath Papa bhi raheintey the. (Shouts in anger)

Ram: Sorry! Lekin tum agar aadhi-adhuri baat kahogi, misunderstanding toh hogi na?

Priya: Phir bhi aap aise- kaise soch sakety ho?

Ram: Don't you think we can talk about him later? Why, we are wasting our 'Precious Sunday Morning'? (Nuzzles her cheek)

Priya: Kyon ke mujhe thodi tension ho rahe hain.Shayad woh mujhpe gussa honewala hain.

Ram: Tumne 'Invite' kyon nahi Kiya tha?

Priya: Humari shaadi itani jaldi mein huyi, sabko invite karney ka moka bhi nahi mila. Phirbhi ussey contact karney ke koshish ke toh phone bhi nahi lagg raha tha. He went to Dubai due to some emergency.

Ram: But you didn't do that deliberately so why are you so tensed?

Priya: Meine abb phonepe bataya nahi ke humari shaadi huyi. Socha milkar he batati hun, itani badi baat.

Ram: Will you listen to me?

Priya: Haaa! kahiye na?

Ram: You should let him know about how our marriage happened in haste & you could not invite him.

Priya: I know. Mujhe ussey jaldse jald milna chahiye.

Ram: He will be really happy for you that you got married (Proudly corrects his collar of kurta).After all you have got such an eligible bachelor to get marry.

Priya: Haaa...khush toh woh jarur hoga par thoda naraaz hoga kyon ke who humari shaadi attend nahi kar paaya.

Ram: Phir toh ek he solution hain...

Priya: Kya?

Ram: Hum phirse shaadi kartey hain...(Winks)usske khatir (With naughty smile) agar itna he miss kar diya humari shaadi dekhna toh. (Laughs loudly)

Priya: Yeh joke tha? Very funny! Thanks for the advice. Mein ussey jaldhe milkar batati hun. Aap aaogey meray saath?

Ram: Mein phir kabhi milta hoon. This week I have a tight work schedule.

Priya:Aapka toh 'schedule' hamesha aisehe hota hain.(Irritates)

Ram: You know it na? How much 'The Time' is important for me & see 'You are wasting it.'

Priya: 'Time' se yaad aaya, woh 'Children's home' ke liye jo kaam hum dekh rahein hai woh kuch aage badha ya nahi? When will the project actually start? Bahot time hua na abb.

Ram: I agree that there was some delay in passing the plan from the municipal authorities because of the amendments in existing rules. Everyone in the building industry had to take 'Wait & Watch' attitude helplessly for the time being. But now the things are coming back on track slowly.

Priya: Mrs. Joshi always keeps on telling me that I have been visiting their school since a long time so they just want me to do the follow-up from their side. As I have accepted the responsibility I would like to explain them everything in detail.

Ram: Don't worry the work will progress fast now; we have in- house team working on our projects in spite of the separate design & construction companies.

Priya: I know you never compromise.

Ram: We will have a conference next week so that you will get an idea of the current status of the work.

Priya: Yes, good idea. We have not discussed it for long time.

Ram: Abb tumhare saare doubts clear hogaye ho toh humara adhura kaam pura kartey hain? (Goes to the bed)

Priya: Hayee...hayeee kuch toh samjh aaya (Follows him)

Ram: See, how we both are thinking about the same thing (Sits lazily resting against the bed backrest.)

Priya: Haa...chaliye, jaldise nahakar ready hotey hai. Daadine bahot kaam bol ke rakhey hain. (He pulls her towards the bed by grabbing her arm, she falls on the bed, settles herself besides him)

Ram:Tumhe nahi laggta kay Daadi ke wish puri karna sabse bada kaam hai? (Bends towards her)

Priya: Aap toh aise bol rahey ho jaise hum kuch karhe nahi rahey hain(Blushes)

Ram: Ek baat kahu meri suno! Take some rest in my arms. You need it (Encircles his strong arm around her)

Priya: Aur kya?

Ram: Bol dena tumhari tabiyat thodi theek nahi hain isliye thoda aaram kar rahe ho.

Priya: Kya? Mein jhooth nahi bolungi.

Ram: I just want to feel you like this. (Starts nuzzling her face)

Priya: Mujhe lagg at least aap daadi kay saath toh 'Cheating' nahi kartey ho. (Her fingers start moving on his back)

Ram: (Stops nuzzling) Arre..toh kya karu..ek he toh Sunday morning milti hai tumhare saath aur uss par bhi Daadi aur tum milkar paani pher deti ho. (Makes a puppy face)

Priya: Aap yeh bholi surat mat kijiye. I know you so well.

Ram: Why? (Starts showering kisses on her face) Maine kya kiya?

Priya: Who did this? (Shows her hand where Ram has given a love bite)

Ram: What's my fault? You are so soft just like a chocolate. (Smells her, looks into her eyes)

Priya: So you will treat me as a chocolate? (Looks into her eyes, challenging)

Ram: Wait! (Opens his last button of the kurta) Look at this (Shows a bite on his chest given by her) who did this?

Priya: (Bites her lower lip, blushes) Ummm! Who did this? (Touches the mark with her finger)

Ram: Haa kal woh breaking news aayi thi, raat ko 'Borivli National Park' se ek sherni bahar aayi thi, shayad ussine kiya hoga. (Tightens his arms around her, she wraps arms around him with equal passion in response)

XXX

Sorry, for the late update. Hope you all will enjoy reading it. The present starts here which was ended in update-2. Comments, criticism all welcome...😊 Don't know why this Rajat's entry has made me so nervous. Though nothing can come between RaYa.😉

Thanks for the comments & clicking the like button guys.Sorry that I couldn't reply to the comments on previous update but each comments means a lot to me.🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
Me first!!!😃
Will get back after reading!

*edited*

Woww.. Amazing update trupti!👏😊
Loooved it! Borivalli National Park?!😆😆 Ram ko def heart attack aaya hoga!😛
Ram is so eager to fulfill daadi's wish!!😳 Waise Priya bhi kuch kam nahi hai!😉
Can't get enough of these two lovebirds!😳 Eagerly waiting for the next part!!
Edited by _CandyCream_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update priya gayege rajat se milne,ram priya ke beech kya hoga
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was soo soi sio very cute update yaar... You write the romantic scenes btw our RaYa so very well yaar... Just loved the last love bite wala scene a lottt... And i hope that rajat stays in his limit... And yes no one can come between our RaYa... Thanks for the update... Love you...
By the wats your name Trupti or Saniya... Sorry but confused...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey u wrote it so well.
Hav read all parts nd all r jst fab.
U r an awesome writer!
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update sania loved the most cutest fight & romance btw RaYa awww loved the way Ram gets passive for Priya hearing abt Rajat 😆 i just loved this Ram Kapoor would like to see this Rk in show too... & then following Sunday Romance hayyy ☺️ loved the last part of biting one awesome... 😳 😳 😳 heheheh hope dadi ki wish jaldi hi puri ho jaye... 😳 😉 😛 want Jr. Kappor to arrives soon... ok so from next part Rajat's entry is sure ok let's see what he brings Drama in story...😕 loving the FF till now n will love it more in coming days... ⭐️thanks for PM awesome update no doubt 10/10👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Too good dear...
u write so nice...
ram very possesive abt priya...
priya to meet rajat alone...
curious to know what's nxt to come...
will eagerly be waitin' 4 d nxt update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saniya9919

Subu, will try to update tomarrow.😛 Sorry for the late but got busy with some work at office so could not update last week.😳


No problem...got a smashing update to make up for it...thanku sooo much 😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved the way you have executed the story
I just love the character portrayal... his possessiveness... his love.. his adamance... his caring, sensibility... uff... just awesome... The treatment made me smile😃
please continue that too...

Love ya for the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Saaniya.. nice update yaar... can you please avoid this Rajat track... ese Haadi ko skip karo dear plss..

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