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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SanRaj.RaYa

Oye priya its tooo goood...loved both the parts :D



Hehe.. Thank u anjali...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: P_sree_89

Awesome!!❤️
Kya imagination hein.. Wah! I've becme a fan of ur writing.. Thank you!!😛



Hehe THANKS RE.. .. I'm obliged.. Can i call u sree???
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Birdy91

Oyeee Not only Khushh... Me toh super khush my super chotti...:-) tnkuuu for updating nxt part darling...Loved d cutiiieee cuutiieee scenes b/w baap-beti.. yayyy.. bt ye priya... huhhh.. hadd h.. ab sab thk ho rha h toh in madam ko prblm ho rhi h.. arre agr unhone maan liya ki aap gaye. toh galti toh apki b thi na ki aap unke choad k gaye.. nxt part jaldi update kriyo plzz.. n madam Precap b de diya kro plzzz



Hehe.. Bas yehi chaiye thi mujhe... Teri khushi... Nxt part up soon.. Precap?? Ruk.. nxt update se deti hu...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Siacutie

luved both the parts

superb priya luved ram @ peehu conversation
why r they fighting now they luv each othr so much
continue soon 😉



All is gonna be good soon Sia... Thanks for liking it...
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 10

M dammn happy today.. toh ussi khushi me tum logo k liye ek update aur...



hum tum kitne pass hain kitne door hain chand sitare...

Ram Stamped his feet on the ground and went inside..

Ram found priya comforting peehu in her arms.

Peehu "mamma app muje chod ke kaha chali gayi thi!!!"

Priya hugging her tight said "mamma kahin nahi gayi thi beta'app kyun darr rehe ho!!"

Peehu "mamma papa kaha gaya mein toh unke pass so gayi thi..naa.. priya looked at ram and said "papa kahin nahi gaye hain beta yehin hain'"

Peehu demanded that what priya was neglecting!!!

Peehu " mamma muje aaj mamma aur papa dono ke saath sona hain muje darr lag raha hain mamma..app ne muje akela chad diya tha' uh uh uh uh '"

Ram came close to priya and said in her ears "abb peehu ko kya bolengi app.."

Priya said "theek hain naa beta mamma papa dono ke beech mein so jao toh dono hi mil jayenge naa app ko'. Ayiye papa beti bula rahi hain app ko'.

Ram's all enthuse went in vein and priya said " app jo soch rehe hain wo mein hone nahi dungi mr.kapoor."

Ram lied down by peehu and kept his one hand on her '.peehu took his hand on her and said mamma app ka haath kaha hain!!!"

Priya switched off the night lamp and said "peehu its late now so jao ' mein toh humesha app ke pass rehti hoon app papa ke pass so jao aaj and its late haan kal school bhi jana hain naa'so jao!! and she kissed peehu on her forehead'"

Ram didn't want to loose a chance to irritate priya ' he said "khash muje bhi ek milta'"

Priya didn't reacted she pretended as if she didn't heard n e thing'

Priya turned aside and tried to sleep!!! But she failed ..she sat up and she heard '. Two snoring sound!!!! She said "hain ek kaam tha ki doosra bhi 'and smiled and went to the sofa'she sat on the sofa reading a book and unknowingly she fell asleep'..

It was Almost 4 in the morning'ram woke up and looked aside!!... he found that priya is not there' he sat up and found priya sleeping on the sofa!!!

Ram nodded his head and went to her' he missed this sleeping face for 5 years.. he smiled and thought priya tum muje uss galti ki saja kitna din dogi pata nahi bass muje gussa maat dila na..jitna torture karni hain karo tolerate kar lunga but dil maat thodna..kuch aisa maat keh dena ki mein toot jau..kabhi kabhi tumse darr lagta hain jaan'her hair was blocking his view'he put her hairs on the back of her ear and said "priya ' priya '."

She opened her eyes and sat up instantly seeing ram so close to her'.

Priya "kya ..kya baat hain app yehaan kya '"

Ram "wash room kaha hain!!"

Priya "uss taraf she pointed to a door!!"

Ram "bed pe jake so jao mein sofe pe rest kar lunga!!"

Priya " no no its ok I m comfortable here'

Ram "may be but I m not comfortable on your bed too hard for me' he lied to her!!"

Priya "atleast jhoot bolna toh sikh lete 5 saalon mein'" ram smiled and left'.

Priya stood up and lied down by peehu '. Ram came out from wash room ..priya said "Mr.kapoor Plz yehaan bed pe so jayiye mein kal sofe pe anjaane mein so gayi book padh rahi thi!!! Plz'"

Ram "priya mein theek hoon idhar mein tumse naraz nahi hoon '.. he leaned back and said "abhi tak!!! Pata nahi kal kya hoga!!"

Priya didn't replied and lied down placing her head near to peehu'..

At about 6 in the morning priya woke up and she didn't found ram'she went to the balcony and found ram standing there.. she stood by him and said "good morning!!"

Ram looked at her and said "good morning!!"

Priya "kya hua app itna'udas kyun dikh rehe hain mein hoon toh aap k saath ' toh kyun!!!"

Ram "galat priya hum dono saath ho kar bhi saath nahi hain!! Priya hum dono itne pass ho kar bhi bahut door hain mein sab bhool na chahta hoon aur samne ki taraf dekhna chahta hoon aur tum past ko lekar '. Kyun priya !!!"

Priya "kuch past aise hote hain ram ki hum use bhoola toh sakte hain par mita nahi sakte'"

Ram "agar bhoola sakte hain toh mita kyun nahi sakte..haan priya !!!"

Priya "pata nahi ram time dijiye muje sayad mita pau wo nazara jaha sab ne'. ram said in between priya kyun nahi bhool sakti tum mein hoon tumhare saath ..sab se galti ho gayi yaar'.

Priya "par app' apne bhi' mein sab k bare mein nahi janti par haan yeh janti mein jisko zindagi mein sab se jada payar kiya jiske payar k samne maut bhi haar gayi wahi muje .. isse toh accha hota ki mein mar hi'.ram shouted "shut up priya just shut up!!kal se ek hi baat ' par tum , tum kyun wapis nahi ayi are koi kuch bhi kehta toh kyun suna tumne' kyun chali aayi haan bolo'. Kya tumne koi galati nahi kiya..kya tum mere pita hone ka '' priya mein abhi baat nahi karna chahta tum se aur ek baat agar tumhe mere saath rehne mein hesitation ho rahi hain toh mein wapis hotel mein chala jata hoon'."

Priya "nahi mr.kapoor muje koi hesitation nahi hain!! Afterall app meri beti k pita hain!!"

Ram struck badly wd this last statement and he said "priya ek minute ek minute' kya kaha app ne abhi abhi mein app ki beti ki pita hoon isi liye app ' horrible you are priya' tum chaho toh abhi bhi reh sakti hoo peehu ke saath akeli , aur mein jaise reh raha tha mein reh lunga and I think tumhe bhi koi dikat nahi hogi!! And dnt worry darling tumhe peehu ko lekar yeh ' yeh jo tumhara chota sa ashiyaan hain idhar rehna bhi nahi padega' priya stopped him in between and said "app kehna kya chahte hain '"

Ram " very simple 5 saal tak tum beti ko wo sari cheeze toh nahi de payi jo wo chahti thi.. be frank priya mein hota toh wo sari cheeze'..priya stopped him again and said "ek minute ek minute app kehna kya chahte hain'ki meine app ki beti ko takleef mein rakha!! Uski khusiyon ko mein puri nahi kar payi'haan "

Ram said "yes that what I mean!!"

Priya smiled and said "I dnt believe this .. I just dnt believe this '.ki mein aaj uss ram kapoor ke samne khadi hoon jisse kabhi mein chid jati thi ' app itna badal gaye 5 saalon mein '. Mr.kapoor haan yeh sach hain financially I m very weak but at heart I m very strong.. meine kabhi peehu ki khusiyon ko nazar andaaz nahi kiya'.

She closed her eyes and again said "mr.kapoor wo father's day wala card dekha apne' dekha peehu ka kya wish tha'bahut choti si wish thi jo uske papa hote toh ' ek second mein pura kar dete'

Ram said "haan meine dekha hain aur mein aaj use snow park le kar bhi jayunga!!!" ram was about to leave'priya said

"koi jharurat nahi hai!! Wo jaa chuki hain snow park!!! Mein apne bare mein lafarwa ho sakti hoon par mein apni beti ke bare mein lafarwa nahi hoo sakti!! Uski wish uski mamma ne puri kar di hain mr.kapoor' aur bhi aise bahut se chote chote wishes rahi hain uski inn panch saalon mein jo mein ne poori karne ki khosis ki hain' mr.kapoor mein use hi-fi lifestyle nahi de payi yeh sach hain par haan meine uski khushiyon ko kabhi nazar andaaz nahi kiya '." She left '.. saying this''

Priya sat by peehu and tried to woke her up '. She woke up and hugged priya and said "good morning mamma!!"

Priya "good morning beta chalo chalo brush karo fresh ho jao school jana hain naa.."

Peehu saw ram standing at the balcony door she smiled and said "good morning papa'"

Ram also greeted her back and came and sat on the bed'..

Peehu "mamma papa aaj ka day kitnnniii special hain naa'"

Priya said "kyun baccha!!!"

Peehu "mamma school mein sare friends bolte the ki jab wo log neendi se jagte hain tab wo apne mamma aur papa dono ko saath saath dekh pate hain aur mein bhi toh aaj neendi se jagh kar mamma papa ko saath saath dekha..toh hua naa day special'

Priya was in tears hearing peehu shee nodded and said "haan baby aaj ka din bahut special hain!! Aaja she extended her hands to hug peehu'.

Peehu extended her little little hands and said "mamma papa app dono aao naa'ek saath '."

Ram priya both cant neglect her demand..they moved forward together, peehu smiled and hugged them together she kissed them on their cheeks and holding them tight said "I love you mamma I love you papa'"

Priya broke the hug and said "bahut roola liya muje jaa jake ready ho jaa'"

Peehu jumped from the bed and ran to the bath room'.

Ram was a listener till then ' he said "priya tum mere saath peehu ke liye rehna chahti hoo naa' priya didn't reply' ram said " mein bhi aaj se tumhare saath peehu ke liye hi rahunga' aur mein wada karta hoo tumse tumhare pass ane ki koshis bhi nahi karunga!!!"

Priya stood up and said "as you wish mr.kapoor" and got busy with her work!!

At the lunch time the family is in a restaurant'.

Priya was busy reading a book!!!! Her concentration broke wd'. "SWEETHEART KAISE HO'." She saw ram smiling and he stood up , a lady came and hugged him'.she again got surprised as Ayesha hugged her from behind,'..priya smiled and stood up and hugged her and said "kaisi hain !!!"

Peehu "are yeh ho kya raha hain' mein bhi hoon muje bhi dekho!!! Koi!!"

Saumya broke the hug and said "are yehi hain junior kapoor!!!!"

Priya looked at saumya..and she recognized her '.. as she saw a picture in ram's cell''

Saumya sat by peehu and said "hi junior'. Are yeh toh puri ki puri junior ram kapoor hain'. App ki bachpaan ke tasveer se puri milti hain iski face'"

Ram "saumya yeh rahi teri bhabi priya'."

Saumya stood up and turned to priya and holding her hands'said "bhabi nahi deedee' deedee app ka ghar app ki amanat app ka wait kar rahi hain aur toh aur app ka beta bhi wait kar raha hain!!! Waise papa ke paas ana hain papa k paas ana hain ka jidd pakad liya tha' par mein use surprise dena chahti thi!!! Isi liye nahi layi' deedee paach saal tak samhala hain kapoor khandaan ko abb app ko phir se sab kuch samhalna hain muje toh world tour mein jana hain rishab ke saath!! Aur peehu ko bhi toh uske apno ke pass'Ayesha said "chup abb muje bhi kuch bolne do!!"

Ayesha "di app aise idhar' kyun di '."

Priya "Ayesha saumya tum dono baitho toh sahi !!! phir sari baatien hogi!!!"

Saumya "waise app ne kitne burger kitne donuts khaye hain haan" she said to ram'.

Ram "meri maa'. Do din se wo sab kuch nahi khaya ..yeh madam jo hain!!!"

Priya smiled and said " accha laga saumya ' ki mein nahi toh kya hua tum toh thi inka kheyal rakhne k liye'. Saumya sat there and said "nahi, nahi, kaha meri baat sunte hain!!! Tablets khate hain!! Maa ne kaha tha ki app inka wo aadat churwa chuki thi!!! Deedee phir se start ho chuki hain!!! Phir se chudwana padega!!"

Peehu "mamma '."

Priya "haan beta !!!"

Peehu "book shop nahi jayenge hum log!!"

Priya "aap ko bhook lagi hain!!"

Peehu "topic kyun change kar rehe hoo book shop chalo naa'"

Priya "beta hum log uss book shop pe nahi jayenge'"

Peehu "nahi jana hain papa jana hain!! Meri bahut important cheez hain udhar!!!"

Ram "kya hain ..beta shop mein!!"

Peehu "yaad hain app ke saath photo .. lucky draw mein'"

Ram "haan"

Peehu "wo udhar hain papa 'muje wo chahiye!!!"

Priya "beta papa ke saath doosra kheechwa lena.. wo chod do!!"

Peehu "nahi mamma wo special hain mere liye.. nahi papa muje wo chahiye!!!"

Priya "peehu kyun jidd kar rehe hoo"

Ram "priya ,mein samhal lunga'"

Priya "mr.kapoor app samajte'saumya stopped priya and said "ek minute ek minute '.and turned to priya and said "mr,kapoor'."

Ayesha "dee jiju ko mr.kapoor hi bolti hain!!!"

Saumya "yuuu'.. mr.kapoor wo bhi husband ko ' inka naam ram hain chota sa naam hain deedee aur haan agar app ko ram bolne mein sharam aati hain toh '. Ek kam kijiye'. Suniye ji .. ye ji oo ji kar k ya peehu ke papa keh ke bula sakte hain and she laughed' ram said "oye chup kar ek toh bina bataye tapak padi' upar se ' ate hi start ho gayi'. Prank star hain yeh priya tumse bhi acchi hain khichayi karne mein!!!!"

Saumya "are aise kaise nahi aati maa ki representative baan ke aayi hoon..abb jaldi se idhar ka sare kam khatam karo aur wapis chalo deedee'. Ayesha kneeled down and said "di plz wapis chalo muje app ki jharuraat hain!!! Mujhe hi nahi sab ko app ki jharuraat hain!!"

Priya said "itni asaan nahi hain sab kuch khatam karna' 5 saal diya hain meine iss seher ko iss seher ke kuch logo ko' jo mujse bahut jud chuke hain' unhe chod ke aise hi kaise chali jau' !!!"

Ram got surprised and said "priya kya bol rahi hoo'are you gone mad'." Saumya and Ayesha also got surprised!!!!!!




Precap:

Priya kept on looking some where she said " mr.kapoor peehu ka dhyan rakhiye plz" and she left from there…. Ram stood up and said 'are isse ho kya gaya achanak!!!" ram tried to watch her…. He saw priya slapping a girl!!!!

Ram "saumya peehu ko tere pass rakh toh mein aata hoon aise kya kar rahi hain yeh!!!"

Ram rushed to priya and he found "CADY" their….


Edited by RaYaKapoor - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update par yeh precap kya hai... priya slapping caddy no ways...
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanx.all together superb story line
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome yr...
bt no romance btw RaYa...😔
plz plz plz do somethin yr...
plz plz thoda sa romance...😍.
plz plz continue soon...
waitin...
Edited by asheema_sharma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Now this priya is getting on my nerves lol kitna pareshna kar rahi hai bechare Ram ko...and i would love to see Priya calling Ram as suniye ji or Pihu ke papa in the show...ha ha...as ususual awesome update babz.
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Posted: 13 years ago
⭐️1st

for the update or tum roz khush raha karo or hame b khush rakha kro upate krk😆
sacchi m yeh dono pas hokar b bahut dur he
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continue soon the next part😆yeh dil mange more😉

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