'KILLING ME.. '--A poem.(plz chck pg 5).

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Nancy_NUTS
That was such a meaningful poem Maris Di👏...absolutely loved it❤️
and the words expressed Priya's condition and feelings to the T

ur poems are always i look forward to, so keep writing for us Di😳

Thanks Nancy. Am always game to oblige and please you all..😃

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Roxy369
nice...😊

Thanks.

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kaviya10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Poem maris dii...

It is very much apt to the situation...Thank you for giving us a lovely poem...

Edited by kaviya10 - 13 years ago

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Punya

@PunyaS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Loved it.

It indeed is so descriptive of current emotional state of the leads.

Rally good!👏

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: kaviya10

Poem maris dii...

It is very much apt to the situation...Thank you for giving us a lovely poem...

Kaviya..😳

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: PunyaS
Loved it.

It indeed is so descriptive of current emotional state of the leads. Punya. Thats why this poem happened nah?Written exactly keeping in mind the current state of raya..😃

Rally good!👏

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

A slight modification of this poem from Ram's point of view..

Killing me brutally

Killing me brutally with your words

Hurting me beyond words compare.

Deeper I try to unravel your secret

Harder your resolve to open up.

Mouthing those nonsense casually

Failing to understand me seriously.

Killing me brutally by your actions

Scaring and singeing me deep within.

Shattering me each and every day

Seperating from me further away.

Contrasting was your heart and mind

Aghast and anguished yet so blind.

Killing me brutually with your love

Bury and burn me in hell, so true..

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PS: The last scene saw Ram,shattered and in disbelief. This is my way of describing his feelings at that juncture..

Asusual please leave your comments..

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azk92

@azk92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

👏

PERFECT!! ABSOLUTELY PERFECT!!

Just want to hug him! 🤗

i just wish Priya would see this!! 😡

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: azk92
👏
PERFECT!! ABSOLUTELY PERFECT!!

Just want to hug him! 🤗

i just wish Priya would see this!! 😡

Thanks Amby. In my present state of mind writing a lengthy piece of prose or to be precise my rant and rave over Priya's words, is out of question. I chose the best way to write my thoughts about the last scene..😭