'KILLING ME.. '--A poem.(plz chck pg 5).

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leo4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

it is so so so goog!! awesome maris you rocked it!! it perfectly emoted the hidden thots na feelings of priya, i hope in her talli state she gives in info thats only good for raya and not k we are tricking nikki😆

and heres my standing ovation amidst whistles and hoots👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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bhakti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Very nicely written .thanks 4 lovely poem

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pink27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Very Very well written maris 👏

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maris

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: azk92
BEAUTIFUL!!!
Love it!

It so perfectly fits the situation and her emotions!!

You are amazing!

🤗

Thanks Amby😳 Am just an ordinary scribbler. Nothing amazing..😆

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maris

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: anizor
very nice maris. loved it

Thanks Rosy..😳

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maris

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: fanraya
Very nice maris, lovely.. 👏

Thanks Priya..😃

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maris

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

[QUOTE=TVserialfreak]Awesome didi👏👏...really suits the situation to a T...thanks for posting 😳 [/QUOTE] Thanks Kishore. ..

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maris

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: xXHoNeYb3aRrXx
very well written keep it up😊

Thanks. Your name please?

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maris

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: salsaly
superb di... well written... loved it... tfs.. :-)

Thanks Saly.😳

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maris

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ravichitra
U seem to be kidding by saying u don't have a poetic brain. This poem is fabulous. I loved the way how Ram says whats bothering me is not my mom's health but Priya's feelings. Best line and u brought out the consequences of that in a very gorgeous way dear.

Chitra, thanks for ur kind appreciation😳..Indeed those exact words by Ram, That Priya was bothering him,more than his mom, got me started to think about this poem. And then all the rest of the lines simply appeared to dance before my eyes..😉😆

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