RAYA New FF:ISHQ PART-24 On PAge -142 * 25-08-2014

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#651

Originally posted by: sahana747
⭐️ Out of the ordinary line of thinking.Thanx for PM.

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#652

Originally posted by: daggarwal14
Nic update..

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#653

Part 16

Rishab called to Ram ...
I cant take this alliance bhai ...where is priya bhabhi ..
She just went to talk with Mr.Mishra ...
Rishab coughed ..No stop her bhai ..dont allow her to go ..
Why What happen rishab ,,why you are tensed ??
Bhai plz just do what i say ..Plz stop bhabhi from going there ..Im also coming ..
He left out in a hurry ..
There
Priya fond of Soumya .She so glad to hear her answer and asked what was that condition ..
she rooted to the spot hearing that ..
Priya swallowed a lump in her throat ,What you want ...Meanwhile Ram reached there breathing fastly ..
Soumya:Yes di , I missed my baby and i will start my new life with Rishab as you people wanted ..But we want solace ourselves befre our relationship go forward ,So i would like to be mother of "Rashi " & Rishab to be father of her ..Just give us pride have her with us like "Our child"
We want to adopt her ..Each word pierced Priya like hell ,how ..how can a mother will handover her princess to someone else ...
She felt throbbing pain in her head ,tinge of tears in her eyes ,she dropped in the sofa there itself like a stone..

Ram rushed to her giving an angry glare to soumya...
Priya ..Honey ..what happen ? R u ok ..!!!
Gad damn it ..Speak to me Priya ??
Plzzz his eyes almost moistend seeing her pale face ...
Rishab words are ringing in her ears ..
"
bhabhi i know i have to move on , but i can;t forgt ashi and i dont want to ruin another girl life ..
why you are thinking you will ruin some girls life why like that
becuase i mean it ..my past will haunt me bhabhi , im married i have a wife
priya:but she is no more
what about my daughter ..
rishab understand the things they were not there with you ,plz accept it ..
bhabhi if my duaghter is there still you could have asked this question to me ??
she dazed at him a min, he shook her would you asked me the same question ...
she told "YES the next month itself i could have engaged with you some one else because your daughter needs mother and you need a life partner ..
ram and rajiv who were standing outside the room ,their beats just skipped thought ki may rishab will reveal the truth to her ??
if the girl loves me but not my daughter what you could have done ??
why like that ?
maybe she is not comfort with my first wife daughter ??"

Ram shook her ..she freezed out from her thoughts ...
She looked at soumya who is standing with a glass of water & worried face behind Ram ...
Soumya i want some time to decide this matter ,could you please give me sometime .She maturely handled the situation .
I wants talk with my husband too gazing at Ram ...
Soumya nodded her head as positive ..left to her room..
Ram placed his hand on her waist helped her to get up ..
He knows that she is vulnerable and cannot be in position to stand up on herself ..so he decided to take her to their home..
Rishab bumped with them ...He was petrified to see his bhabhi like this
he angrily called soumya but Priya held his wrist tightly ..Let us take decision right now ..Plz if you have any respect on us ..Just give us sometime and leave from here..
HIs eyes turned to thick red left from there ...
They soon reached to room ..
Ram helped Priya to settle down on the bed ...He turned to bring water ..she held his wrist tightly ..
"Plzz kuch der ke liye mere pass baithiye" .
Her pleaded looks stopped his tracks,he sat beside her ..She moved her body like a snake settled her head in his lap .
He stroked her hair gently ...Lightly brushing her hair pressed his lips on her forehead ..
Tears rolled down from her eyes landed on his pants..Kya priya what are you thinking ??
"Ram what should i do , I so wanted Rishab to settle down soon and forgt about ashi lead a normal life..
We tried our best to make up to find a girl to him , but everytime it went negitive only ..
But for the first time ...I have seen genuine concern in soumya's eyes as well as Rishab's bahviour towards her ..
Rishab words are ringing in my ears still ..Can't we make him happy ..." He looked at her deeply
But how can i give my daughter to her ...Ram plz kuch kijiye na ..He too was shocked with the condition
you know Rishab always loved me like his mother ...
hai na she asked him with teary eyes ...
He uttered "haa"
Than my son is suffering to find a peace in his life .. i should help him right
he again nodded his head silently ...
But if i want to help him matlab i have to give my daughter to them ...
Ram closed his eyes tightly remembring she is not their daughter ..she is rishab's daughter but how can he say this to her ..
God why you are punishing us like this ..He breathed ...
He pulled her near to his heart ..Hugging Baby just think clearly and take a decision .No one is forcing you to do their way ..
Whatever you will take the decision i will be with you my dear ...
Now take your medicines ..and just go to sleep ... He ordered their food ,gave medicines to her ,made her to sleep in his lap ..
A low tangling sound make them to look back ...
Wohhh a tiny pair of hands clapped ...SHurrplizeee...She twirled around to show her new dress to RAYA ,Just than Rishab enterd with a box in his hands ...
Priya cosily streched his arms ,Rashi jumped in to her lap ..
Mamma shuper hai na ,showing her frill of frock ...Lishu ne diya mamma ...lishuuu muhaaa gave a flying kiss to him...
Rishab handed the box to Priya ,Asked her to open it ..
There she found her favourite kulfi's with a note on it ...
"Bhabhi i love you from the bottom of me heart , and i have kept you on a pedestal respected like my mother ,I can't see you crying nor this vulnerable state ,
Don't take hasty decisions regarding me ,Im happy being with you and bhai ,so just forgot and we will go for any other alliance ,What ever your decision also ,im willingly accept it But plz ab rona band karo,Ye kulfi lijiye"

Her lips curved into a huge smile seeing the letter ,She streched her arms to give a hug to him..
Rishab hugged her ,I love you ma...
Rashi pouted and slapped his hand from priya ..
Mela mamma hai ,pushed him with her lil palms..
No mela mamma hai ,he hugged priya again playfully ...
Nahi ,Mela mamma hai ...
First she is my mother ,Than only your's...He showed his tongue to her ..
Rashi too showed her to him ..Stood up pushing rishab away from priya embraced her completely in her tiny hands ..
Clasping Priya's chin in between her two small thin fingers ,Mamma bolo na ..mai hu first hai ...First mai hai na ..
She kissed her hands winked at rishab "ha baby aap hi hai pehale than lishab ..both showed their tongue to rishab "
Rishab said to her "Badmaashhh trickled her stomach "
She giggled at his touch ..Hugged Priya ..He continued his trickling ..she Jumped on Ram ...who unaware of her move ,He fallen back ..Rashi too fallen back on his stomach laughing away to lively ..
The wether gets normal but the heating inside her heart is not pausing for a sec also ...
Rishab went with Rashi ..Ram freshend up came out of the room to find Priya is still in sitting position ,crooked her head on the large pillow ...
Worriedlines clearly visible on her smooth skin of forhead ..Scrunching her eyebrows with pain ...
Priya r u ok ??
She opened her eyes to see love of her life !!!Hmm ok matlab ha kya hua ??
Ram a bit amused with her behaviour ,So what you decided with soumya's condition ???
Well im not in a mood to discuss right now ,Can you plz avoid this upto morning .she turned her side to sleep ..
She waited for him to sleep ,When she was in her deep thoughts ,she felt the other side matrix sinking ,She smiled a bit ..
Hmmm golu abhi aggaya sone ke...He placed his hand on her waist turned her over to him ...
Hmm sooo Honey i know what you are going to do ..
She blinked her eyes ."what ?? how you know"
He pulled her more closer ..I can see here, wiping the forming tears in her eyes ..
So you assumed something and telling you know what i thought ?
Well I think I know my wife better than herself ...sliding her strap from her shoulder ..she slapped his hand playfully ..
What ??She asked him
Hmm well everything ..Kissed on her bare shoulder ..She arched her back ,He kissed again on her crook of the neck ..
He whispered in her ear .You smell soo good Priya ..
Ramm she hits on his chest ...Rammm..
What ????Didn't you smell good ??
Rammm
Kya??? bathao na ..
She blushed !! I don't know ...she replied him
But i know you smell like my black forest !!
She giggled for his joke ??Ram aap bhi na ...black forest and mai ...
He lost in her smile ..Priya you are so beautiful when you smile ...
Sachhi placing her forehead on his ..
Hmm sachhi my dear ,rubbing his nose on her ,She giggled ,Their lips are inches away from each other ..His breath trikling her lips ..
She spelled "I love you "
Well my honey reminded me that she loves me ...
Ram?? ? She pulled his hair ...
Ouchh !!! that hurts my sweet heart ??
Ohh really but you deserve it my dear hubby !!!
Awww you are turning to hitler mode again ??
Well my hubby likes my hitler mode ?? Winked at him
what say Mr.Ram kapoor ??
Awww how sweet my name is when it spelled from you ?? He is so relieved that atleast he can give some happiness to her by his talk ..
She smiled at him ...Ahaaa ...
yes my dear lovely wife !!1
She planted a feathery kiss on his lips ..Hmm I love you my dear hubby ..I love you love you love you sooo soo much ..
Be with me dear forever and ever ...Tears spilled it out from her doe eyes ..
Awww my baby what happend to you ...I will be always there with you ..Thank you so much for being there with me to lead my life ..
He trikled her on her stomach ..She giggled ..Bas .bas..plz stop it ...
He pulled into her in his warm embrace,I lve you kissing in her hairs ...Come sleep ..
She slowly dozed off to sleep listening to his hearbeats ...
At the morning :
Breakfast table ..every one seated ...
Priya served aloo paranthas to everyone ...Hmmm so here is special sweet for you people ...
Every one asked why ?Is there any special mamma both minnu & monnu asked innocently relishing their sweet bowls ..
Yes bachhao ..I just confirmed rishu chachu marrige with your soumya chachi ..
Ram grip tightens on Rashi ..
He aske "Matlab kya??
Bhabhiii?came from rishab ...
She digs her fork in her food ..Gazing down ...Dadi too shocked ..what you are going to do priya ??

Well well hope i have given you long wali update ...
So what happen now ?? how they will react with her decision ...

P.S: Guys you people are awesome ... I just gave the update ..And who gueesed it correctly hats off them ..You are too good and im very happy that you people remebered the story very well and you peple really made me guilty for nt updating so longg time ..Hope you enjoyed this time ...
Thank you soo much ..LOVE YOU all ...Enjy the day 12-12-12 ..Take care ...Goodnight ...

Thank you very much for sapring your time to read this FF and make me feel happy with your commnets ... Thank you soo much ...
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sss283

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Posted: 12 years ago

#654

My fears came true...hmmm...
takes a lot of courage to do what priya did ...giving up rashi whom she thought was her own daughter
hats off to her n u di...you penned down those emotions so well
wow...this update has something special in it...it set me thinking...lol...
..its a wonderful update

Edited by sss283 - 12 years ago

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jayashs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#655

Great update!!!

Yeahhh! I am so happy that my prediction was correct! But, ya she is truly torn apart between her son (Rishab) and her daughter (Rashi)... Very nicely written...

Thanks for the PM.

Cheers,
Jay.

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sushfiza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#656

unique update onthis historic date...i am wondering hw priya will manage to hr give daughter to soumya...

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taashu11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#657

its super awesome update...

but how can you seperate raya from rashi...

i know rishabh and saumya will be great parents but still how can raya manage without rashi...

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Evan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#658

I feel for Priya :( it's really excruciating for a mother to let go of her child :-(

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snehasya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#659

ohh no she asked the same thing i feared for neel my guess turned right ...i hope it would have turned wrong but can not see priya in such pain and ram he is so adorable husband only one can dream of having someone like him besides you for your life ...he is torn between the condition and still have to show that he is strong for his wife ..his dilema and also rishabh caricature is good ..but rashi and priyas talk made me cry ..the love between them is above the love true mother and daughters can share...pls update soon ..thanks for pm dear