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This was very well written! I REALLY LIKED HOW YOU INTEGRATED THE SONG IN TO THE STORY.

You are a very good writer, i also liked how you wrote about his imaginations and then Rishab wakes him up, i really thought it was an actual scene n not his imagination.

Very Nice, Keep up the good work! 😃
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i dont know your name but when i read the last lines i felt is this short 😉😉

i didnt feel it was lenthyyy and and i loved to read more from you

it is realy awesome...keep posting...

took little more time to read, but still its very gud thanx for keeping our weekend with these type of ff

Amy - sorry again for being late lateef and THANK YOU for calling me slow 😆
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Outstanding! Expressive!

WOW.. kaise likh lati ho. I have told you before, you need to rethink your career choice.. 😆. Amazing work girl.👏

what a twist from a lovely lovey-dovey scene to bitter reality of "separation". I am so happy you gave us readers few moments on cloud 9 with sweet moments before slapping us with reality. That was a fabulous U turn.

Loved how you brought back the "scary-tone" from Australia experience.

Beautifully captured Ram and Priya's realization. Having Priya go back on Krishuji spoken words was a nice touch.

R : Bat karni hai.. Par yaha nahi.. Hamare ghar me.. Hamare kamre me baithkar..

Emphasis on "Hamara Ghar and Hamara Kamra" is giving us all a ray of hope that your next chapter will be RaYa-licious.

I am also not sure how you are going to have Priya expose Niharika but we are all eagerly waiting..

Originally posted by: Oneandall

This was very well written! I REALLY LIKED HOW YOU INTEGRATED THE SONG IN TO THE STORY.

You are a very good writer, i also liked how you wrote about his imaginations and then Rishab wakes him up, i really thought it was an actual scene n not his imagination.

Very Nice, Keep up the good work! 😃
👍🏼
👏
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Hi Amy, amazing dear..wonder why the thought even crossed your mind that it is not up to the mark... The way Ram's dream abt the sweet memories is been perfectly written, I neva thought it wld have been a dream..loved that surprise element!!!

Very well written, considering Raya's feeling for each other, please do come up with more like this. CV's can actually take up this scene..

Amy, beauuutiful dear. So moving and touching,

This was too good!!!! I read it twice and bookmarked it.. now I can read it to escape a crappy situation, if any, in coming times (which I am too sure of)

Amy Di what do u mean by asking ''do u feel like killing me''...we surely do😆
b4 reading i saw the length n was like how would i read so much, bt at the end i was so sad that it ended😔

fab update Di...love ya❤️

we are blessed to have so wonderful writers here!!😳

BTW, ppl make me comment here, n later i get scoldings for being stuck to phone, my Nani is already getting mad at me...ouch!!!