OS : Chalte Chalte - Page 4

Originally posted by: IndYa4u

Amy - sorry again for being late lateef and THANK YOU for calling me slow 😆
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what do I do?*innocent face** you'll always miss it.. and call me names for not telling you!😛
Outstanding! Expressive!

WOW.. kaise likh lati ho. I have told you before, you need to rethink your career choice.. 😆. Amazing work girl.👏
Thank you!🤗
what a twist from a lovely lovey-dovey scene to bitter reality of "separation". I am so happy you gave us readers few moments on cloud 9 with sweet moments before slapping us with reality. That was a fabulous U turn.

Loved how you brought back the "scary-tone" from Australia experience.

Beautifully captured Ram and Priya's realization. Having Priya go back on Krishuji spoken words was a nice touch.

R : Bat karni hai.. Par yaha nahi.. Hamare ghar me.. Hamare kamre me baithkar..

Emphasis on "Hamara Ghar and Hamara Kamra" is giving us all a ray of hope that your next chapter will be RaYa-licious.
wow.. liked ur analysis!! 😊
I am also not sure how you are going to have Priya expose Niharika but we are all eagerly waiting..

Thanks for using the songs of Chalte Chalte - they are my favorite ones...I used to remember buying the audio cassette - went back to those sweet memories...😍😃

Areee it was very good yaar... continue karo na... plsss :)

You are very good writer keep it up and update soon

I finally finished reading!!😃..it is such a lovely OS Amy..u r very talented and i really loved it👏 👏..but the finishing was lil incomplete na?😛..if possible pls write part 2 of this OS..how the problem solved!!..and i know that will be gr8t!!😳 thank u sooo much for gifting us so nice OS!!!😳

Link of the second part...i need it :P

it is aweosme lovely supab...