Originally posted by: lolita_lahiri
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1st : Loved the 1st episode... made so much sense and seemed so real.
2nd : Loved the fact that the 2nd part was also uploaded... 😃
Actually had the whole thing written at the same time. Just didn't want to scare away readers with such a long post, so broke it up 😉
3rd : Loved the 2nd episode also... 😛
Thanks
4th : Hated the fact that till now there's no 3rd part uploaded 😡 😭 😡 😭 😡 😭 😡
My goal was to set the scene for the Big C in the purple bedroom, with the white saree... the rest is up to your imagination 😉. You are much better at that than I am.
The idea of undoing the changes in the room was awesome !
The language in the note and Ram's analysing it as her not having any rights as a wife was again awesome !
Shipra's non stop conversation with her neighbour... 😆
Only thing ... ram's sleeping away due to jet lag... i know it makes a lot of logical sense... but that means he slept and snored away peacefully whilst our Goli suffered alone both nights... that part 😭 ... I wanted both of them to suffer till the confession..
If he didn't sleep, how else would you explain their not discussing it, and resolving it sooner? I am pretty sure you can come up with a great scenario for that, but I was at a loss. I wanted time for the room to be changed, and Holi to arrive. this was the only way I could imagine it.
But please update part 3 and part 4 together...
😳