FF-BADE ACHE LAGTE HAIN-Update 8th Jan Pg 49 - Page 10

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awesome update 👏
w8ing for the next part
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awesome parts dear...
sry was not in the town...
read all the parts in one g...
lovely..continue soon...
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WOW... how nice... special children ward... 😃
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gr8 update
waiting for next
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After they reach home

In Ram Priya's room...

Ram: Priya...thanks

Priya: Kis liye?

Ram: Main waise donations toh deta tha charities ko, trusts ko par kabhi kisine mere Maa Pita ke naam par kuch nahi kiya... Aaj jo tumne kiya...woh sach much bahut achha lagaa

Priya: Ram...isme thanks ki kya zarurat hai... Aap ne jo un bachho ke liye kiya hain...woh sach mein kabile taarif hain...Maine toh bas un bachho ke behalf pe aapko thanks karne ki koshish ki hain...

Ram: Kash Maa aur Bauji aaj zinda hote...woh bahut kush hote yeh dekhkar

Priya: Aap aisa kyun sochte hain...yeh sochiye ke woh aapke hi sath hain...

Ram: Waise ek baat puchu?

Priya: Puchiye

Ram: Tum sach mein Neha ke sath sab share karti hoon

Priya: Ram...aap bhi kya...

Ram: are nahi woh itne confidence se keh rahi thi...

Priya: Jaane dijiye na us baat ko...Aapko yaad hain na kal diwali hain aur sab log hamare ghar aa rahe hain...

Ram: Haan kaise bhul sakta hoon. Kal sab honge

Bansi Kaka arrives...Priya Madam aapko daadi ne niche bulaya hain..woh saree and jewellery wala is here

Priya: Main abhi aati hoon...

Ram is thinking to himself...Mujhe bhi Priya ko kuch gift dena chahiye...He too goes down

All the family members are sitting...

Daadi : Aao Priya baitho...apne liye Diwali ki saari aur gehne select karo...

Priya is sitting in one corner and heaps of sarees are lying near her... She is shuffling through the sarees when Ram comes there...

Ram: Daadi kya kar rahe hoon

Daadi: Are golu diwali aa rahi hai...Hum sab sarees pasand kar rahe hain...

Priya is searching for a yellow saree as she knows thats Rams fav colour...

Daadi: Kya hua beta...kuch pasand nahi aaya..

Priya: Nahi daadi main dekh rahi thi ki koi yellow colour ki saadi ho toh...woh kya hai ki woh colour mujhe suit karta hain...

Daadi: Are puttar tujhe toh koi bhi colour suit kara hain...Ram is racking his brains thinking what is Priya's fav colour...

Ram reaches for the phone in his pocket and send an sms to Ayesha asking Priya's fav colour...

Ayesha replies...Indigo...

Ram to himself...Are yaar yeh koi simple colour nahi choose kar sakti

Priya find a embroidered yellow colour saree and puts in on her shoulder...

Priya: Daadi yeh kaisi hain

Daadi: Are wah Priya yeh toh bahut hi achhi hai...tu sach kehti hai yeh rang sach mein tujh pe bada achha lagta hain...

Ram looks up from his phone and makes a face...

Priya is surprised that its Ram's favorite colour and he dsnt like it...She raises an eyebrow to him...

Ram gives a smile and picks out a saree...

Ram: Daadi yeh saree kaisi hain?

Daadi: Are wah golu puttar tu kabse itni achhi sareeya pasand karne laga...Priya ne toh apne liye pasand kar li yeh mujhe de de...

Ram: Nahi daadi yeh aap mat lijiye...itni phiki si hain...aap ke liye main dusri nikalta hoon na

Priya is laughing at the situation...

Daadi: Toh yeh kis ke liye hain

Ram: Yeh maine socha ke yeh jo colour hai...mera matlab hai aapko toh har rang achaa lagega par agar aap thoda nazdeek se dekhe..toh yeh aapki bahu par bahut achha lagega hai na?

Daadi: Achha toh tu niharika ke liye pasand kar raha hain...

Ram: Nahi Daadi...maa toh apne liye khud le sakti hain...

Daadi: toh yeh hai kiske liye...

Ram: Kya daadi aap bhi...yeh Priya ke liye hain...

Daadi starts laughing...Main janti hun Golu bas tujhe chedne mein bada maaza ata hain...

Both Priya and Daadi start laughing...

Ram thinking has le beta...agli baar aisa phasaunga ke dekh lena...

To be continued
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Ooo...Wow... gr8.. 😃
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As Ram is leaving from there he meets the jeweler outside and after making sure that no one is watching him he takes him aside.

Ram: Suniye mujhe thode sets dekhne hain...

Jeweler: Haan haan kyun nahi..

Ram: Par meri ek shart hai...

Jeweler: Kya ji

Ram: Aap aaayiye mere sath phir dikhata hoon...

After meeting Ram...the jeweler goes to daadi and starts showing them the sets...One by one all choose the sets ...

Daadi: Are kuch achha nahi hain kya...Meri Priya puttar ke liye

Jeweler: Ab maa ji jo bhi tha sab toh laya hun...

Priya: Rehne dijiye na daadi...mere paas itne saare sets hain jo maine pehne hi nahi...Wahi pehen lungi

Daadi: Woh toh thik hain puttar par isko bhi toh kuch lage...kapoor khandan ki bahu ke liye kuch nahi laya...

Priya: Are chodiye daadi...chaliye baaki sab tayyarioon mein lagte hain

Priya and Daadi get up and from Ram pats his pocket and gives a wry smile.

Priya calls Neha...

Priya: Neha...woh aaj sham ko tum aaogi na

Neha: Haan aa jaongi par mere ghar par bhi diye jalane hain

Priya: Haan woh toh hain

Neha: Kyun kya hua...

Priya:woh actually Neha...aaj sham ko tayyar hona hain aur mere hath ke wajah se i will need help...toh main soch rahi thi ki agar tum thoda jaldi aa jati toh...

Neha: Hmnn toh yeh baat hain..waise mere pass ek idea hain

Priya: Kya

Neha: Tum...apne pati ko keh sakti ho isi bahane thoda romance bhi ho jayega

Priya: Kya Neha...kuch bhi bolti hoo...Par plz tum try karo naaa

Neha : thik hain

Ram overhears the whole conversation...and calls Vikram...and tells him to explain to Neha that he will manage...

Vikram explains the plan to Neha and Neha agrees

Ram meanwhile opens his laptop and googles how to drape a saree...sees it a number of times and locks his room...

Goes to the cupboard picks out one of Priya's sarees and tries draping it...After many attempts he finally gets it right...

By the end of it he is sweating...Hash ho gaya...yaar yeh aurate yeh pehenti kaisi hain...Dont worry Priya aaj tum sabse sundar lagogi...

Its evening time...Ram gets ready first...After overseeing all arrangements Priya enters the room and finds Ram...

Priya: Are aap tayyar ho gaye good...Main bhi tayyar ho jati hoon

Ram: Hmn

Priya: Maine kahaan main bhi tayyar ho jati hun

Ram: Toh ho jao...

Priya: Woh aap kya yehi par...

Ram: Haan...waise bhi tumne partition toh lagwaya hain na

Priya: Haan par...

Ram: Par kya...

Priya: Kuch nahi...woh actually main Neha ka wait kar rahi thi

Ram: Are sorry main tumhe batana bhul gaya usne call kiya tha...Uski mummy aayi huyi hain toh woh thoda der se aayegi

Priya: Ohhh

Ram: Kya hua...

Priya: Nahi woh actually mujhe tayyar hona tha aur aap toh jante hain meri hath ke wajah se...toh maine Neha ko jaldi bulaya tha

Ram: Toh kya hua...main tumhari help kar deta hun

Priya looks open mouthed at Ram...Aaap?

Ram: Haan main

Hesitatingly Priya starts to drape the saree behind the partition...She has draped the saree and only the pleats and the pallu is remaining to be fixed...

Ram: Kya main kuch Madat kar doon...

Priya is holding the Pallu to pin it up but because of the injury she cant pin it up...

Ram comes there and takes the pin from her hand and keeps a hand on her shoulder...Priya closes her eyes at the sensation of the touch...

Ram arranges the Pallu and pins it up properly...

Priya: Thanks...main ab kar lungi...She is trying to do the pleats but cant hold her hand for long...Again Ram comes and puts her hands to the side...puts his hand around her waist and pulls her closer...Priya is feeling the blaze on her skin as Ram starts doing the pleats one by one...After finishing the pleats Ram again pins them and comes close to Priya...and slides the pleats in the saree thereby touching her waist ...The touch plays havoc on Priya's senses and she is unable to look at Ram...and just whisper...Bas kijiye...

Ram leaves her and Priya walks to the dressing table still in trance. She puts all her hair to one side and when she looks up she again sees Ram close behind her...He puts a hand in his Kurta pocket and takes out a beautiful matching diamond necklace ...He forwards his hand and places the necklace on Priya's neck...As he bends down to close the clip with his teeth...Priya feels his warm breath on her nape...and she can feel the hair on the back of her nape stand up...Unable to mantain her balance she holds the chair for support...After clasping the clip...Ram turns Priya and says...

Priya ...I have never loved anybody so much...the way i love you...and slips a ring in her finger...

Priya is so moved by this that she touches Ram's cheeks and says I

There is a buzzing of the intercom and Dasdi's voice booms over...Golu...Priya puttar tayyar ho gaye hoon toh aa jao..

Priya: Aaaye daadi...

Priya is about to leave when Ram hold her back...

Ram: I ? ? ?

Priya: Baadmein and untangles herself from his grip and goes down...

Ram smiles to himself...Priya beta...Ab puri baat toh tumhe sabke samne baatani padegi...and looks in the mirror and gives himself a thumbs up sign!!!!

To be continued...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Gr8 update 👏
Ram drapping saree around himself 😆

loved it
w8ing for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
i give u very very big hug 4 such lovely update u r very good writter 👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 update nodi
loved it
thank you
continue soon

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