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Anamika

@Sakshi_Deewani

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hiya everybody😛
2 ppl who dont knw me um Anamika (Anu in short)
crazy about Sakshi n loving
BALH😃
um gonna share a scene i had written 4 our RaYa
it was basically 4 RKR.com... but i wud love to share it with you
hope u guies lyk it😳
criticisms r most welcomed🤗

Edited by Anamika163 - 14 years ago

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Anamika

@Sakshi_Deewani

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Posted: 14 years ago

Scene after RaYa gets married

its sunday... RaYa had a fight last nyt n ram is trying 2 think of a way 2 make it up 2 Priya...
in the morning ram's sitting with da news paper thinking of an idea 2 make up... priya comes in puts da tea cup on da table angrily... n turns around 2 leave... when
RAM asks: tumhein shopping jana hain??
PRIYA: nehi...
he tries 2 stop her asking her 2 go out with him some where 2day... but she's not ready 2 go any where
da whole day passes on lyk this.. ram cant find a single way. in the evening he comes n asks priya 2 get ready... she asked where were they going... n he avoids n says its very important n dat there isnt much tym in his hand...
priya gets ready wandering wht cud b da matter...
priya gets ready lyk a princess n ram is mesmerized by her beauty
they drive 2 a very soundless place n there is no 1 other than them.
priya gets confused... n comes out of da car
PRIYA: aap mujhe yaha kyun laye hain??
RAM: ssshhh... (putting his finger on her lips a lil bit akhon akhon mein batein... priya's shy then he ties a blind fold on her eyes) aao mere saath
she follows him holding his hands n they come in front of a big door... ram opens da door n take her into da place n opens her blind fold...da whole place is decorated with candles n flower... extremely beautiful, priya looks around surprised n happy
she turns around 2 look at ram... smiling at her he starts walking 2wards her... priya's eyes sparkling with joy... he comes in front of her kneels down n gives her a flower n says
RAM: i am sorry priya... main tumhe kabhi hurt nehi karna chahta tha... main humesha apne business aur family ke bare mein soch ta raha... lekin kal mujhe yeh pehli bar ehsaas hua ke tum mere liye kya ho... main tumse bohot pyar karta hoon priya.. I... I... I love you (in a shaky shy voice)
priya astonished by his confession... mixed emotion... happy.. shy... surprised... n in loss of words...
she is smiling n crying at da same tym... then without saying another word kneels down 2 him holds his cheeks n rubs da drop of tears dat rolled down his face while confessing his love 2 her
n hugs him

hope u guies lyk it

Edited by Anamika163 - 14 years ago