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Hey Guyz sorry for delay. My comments are in Red.

Here goes todays update
Payal comes back and sit with all the family members. She calls Salochna and tells her to come with her for a minute. Salochna goes with her while Shubh is still hiding and looking at her (I wonder why payal isnt looking for shubh, usually he is always the first target of Payal). Payal takes Salochna to the side and Shubh slowly and quietly comes and sit where he was sitting. Salochna asks Payal whats the matter. Payal tells her that doctor called her saying that there is some problem in the reports. Salochna gets shocked. Payal tells her not to worry doc just to have my check up for his satisfaction. Salochna tells her to take someone but Payal insists on going alone but Salochna calls Deepa and tell her to go with Payal for the check up. They both leave but Shubh follows them and ask Deepa where are they going? Deepa tells him that they are going to hospital for Payal/Aastha check up. Shubh tells her that Aastha/Payal knows the way to hospital and she can go with driver. But Deepa tells him he is not all worried that Aastha/Payal is pregnant and instead of going with her he is also stopping her. Shubh asks Deepa to shut up and forcely takes her inside (awwww I wish Shubh forces me as well lol). Payal looks confused.
Payal is driving and thinking why Shubh over reacted whereas, Salochna told Deepa to come with me but then why Shubh wants her go alone (okay dont use your brain so much just drive). Payal sees Shubh following (damn it). Payal thinks so this is the reason why Shubh want her to go alone he wants to see where she goes. Payal stops her car at City Hospital and secretly looks at Shubh (Payal is driving big car and Shubh is driving small car hahahaha can you tell me who is the owner lol). Payal goes inside while Shubh looks at her and thinks that Payal was really coming to the hospital (no bubble head only coz of your stupidity you missed your chance..can't you drive slowly).
Break
Payal is walking inside the hospital and feels Shubh is following, she turn around but Shubh hides (man lets play hide n seek with Shubh heheheh he is the best in that).Payal walks off. Shubh comes out to see but she already walked off so he thinks where she disappeared. Shubh looks here and there. Payal comes to doc and gives him money and tells him that someone is following her and if anyone asks about her than he need to say that she came in for check up because he called her. Doc picks up the money and tells her that her check up is done (docs like him are stain on the profession of docs). Payal smiles. Shubh is still looking for her (baby you can only hide but not seek). Payal asks doc if there is any other way to get off but doc says there is only way from which she came in. Om calls Payal and she tells him that Shubh is following her so he needs to take care of everything and pacify Sonu. She disconnects the call and pray to God that nothing shuould happen to her Sonu. She than looks at Shubh from room and so she goes out and bumps into Shubh. He is shockes . She asks him what is he doing here? and if he wanted to come than why didnt he come with her? Shubh makes an excuse that after she left Deepa complaint about him to mom and so mom send him after her (nice one lol). Payal smiles. Shubh tells her that he is sorry for stopping Deepa and whatever is happening it is a fact that they used to have a relation. Payal smirks. Shubh tells her to lets go.
Aastha is sitting and Om comes to her. He holds her hand and she asks him where is he taking him? He holds her more tightly and she pleads him to leave her. He takes her out of the room and brings her into another room and locks her (what was the need of switching the rooms). Aastha asks him to open the door but he leaves. Someone calls "Ma" and Aastha is shocked seeing a child. Thats's Sonu. He gets up calling her Ma. He started walking towards her is about to fall but Aastha holds him. Sonu hugs her and asks her not to leave him alone. Aastha hugs him back. She remembers what Payal told Swayam about their child. Sonu continues to say that dont leave him alone. Aastha thinks he is calling her Ma and so he is Payal and Swayam's son and heir of Ranawat family. Aastha picks him up and make him sit on the bed and makes him eat the food. Sonu smiles (awww such a lovely scene). She then sees his medicines and makes him drink it (man I am dying after this scene such a beautiful scene). She then asks him to sleep but Sonu asks her is he can sleep on her lap. Aastha nods her head. He puts his headon her lap and she makes him sleep.
Break
Payal is sleeping and dreaming about what Om told her about Sonu. Payal gets up and looks at the time its 5.00 am. She opens the door and sits in car and goes but Shubh comes infront of her so push the break (super man se upr hero lol) and she is shocked. Shubh asks her where is she going so early in the morning? Payal is confused and gets off from the car. Payal pleads him to let her go and she will tell him once she gets back. But Shubh tells her that wherever she wants to go she can go but after telling him. Payal shouts at him to let her go otherwise he will never find out her Aastha alive (finally hahahaha yayyyy). Payal is shocked and Shubh smiles (what a smile yaaaar). Shubh tells her that finally she accepted that she is Payal and not Aastha but he knew this from begining that she is Payal. He tells her that if she wants to go she needs to tell him where Aastha is. Payal tells him that it doesnt makes her any difference if he knows the truth or not because he cant do anything and he needs to let her go without even knowing where Aastha is. Shubh holds her with her hairs and asks her where Aastha is. Payal warns him that if she is hurt than Aastha also wont be alive and if he wants to see Aastha alive than let her go. Shubh leaves her angrily. Payal tells him that she will advice him free of cost that he needs to learn how to control he will be relaxed in relief and this time it will be better for him not to follow her otherwise he knows what the result is going to be. Payal leaves in car and Shubh stands there worried/angry.
The End
Once again sorry for delay. Again a lot of dragging. Hope to see something good next week.
Have a great weekend. See you all Monday.

Edited by sonia_mughal - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx a lot for the update
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thnx alot astha is so sweet she treated the child like her own

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