MEANT TO BE..26th part updated page 49 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
I could just visualise it. SOOO romantic. love it. 👏

Hats off Ankita, Future CV in the making? 😉
Edited by Infofan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
thanxx for lettin me know its great seriously do carry on plzzz thank you 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
too good imagination.
arry yaar mujhe to ye 7 parikrama 7 pheron ki tarah lagi 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
awseme upadte i love this line

He watched her she smiled at every person who came in front of her .shonaaaaaaa can picture her

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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
awesome ff plz do write more soon cant w8 and thnx for the pm keep em coming :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
OMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved ur update.too goog man. i just luvd it😊.
the first meeting and the god as narrator & the 7 pheras 👏, awesome plot. pls continue writing and don't forget 2
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update soooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnn⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Thanks one and all i hope you like the next part as well
heres go

fourth part

Recap- as we have seen that Sanchi Shravan have been made to do seven parikramas around the temple and when the crowd dispersed Sanchi misbalanced and fell and Shravan in order to save her held her by her waist

This act brought them close together and suddenly bells and drums of temple started again .

This was their first eyelock. They were looking into each others eyes ……….

Shravan was holding her still by her waist and then suddenly as all the bells and the drums that had started beating ,they all stopped

This brought Sanchi to her senses and she disentangled herself from Shravan.

This action also brought Shravan to his senses and he also started to pull out of the moment.They untied the knot and then moved towards opposite directions without a word.

Shravan looked back at the receding figure of Sanchi , as he turned back Sanchi turned back and looked over her shoulder towards the back of Shravan walking towards his family.

The bells had started toiling again and the drums were beating again.

They both turned several times only missing each other glances by seconds

So they both were unaware of each other glances but one person Dadi had seen all this and being a person who had a foresight realized that God was pointing to her something.

This was no coincidence. She had seen both of them throwing glances at each other , had felt God's presence around her , saw them doing parikrama together.

Shravan came upto her Dadi!!!!! Chalo na der ho rahi hai aapko hi inauguration karna hai (Dadi lets go you only have to do the inauguration)

Dadi looked into the eyes of her favourite grandchild , his demeanor suggested that he had forgotten the incident which happened just moments ago but his eyes were telling a different story.They had a shadow of something behind the veil of ordinary.

She smiled at him and said lets go.

He walked leading her, and Dadi and thought to herself , beta abhi tu mujhse bhi chupa jayegha ki tujhe achnak kya hua lekin apne aap se toh nahi chupa payegha …….( son, you can hide your feeings from em and but you can't hide it from youself)

Dadi: Sab bhagwan ki iccha hai…(its all God's wish)

They all trouped towards the car.

Sanchi was terrified , what had happened to her for those few moments ,she hurried down stairs , running away from the place of the incident , she started wearing slippers really d=fast but in her haste broke the sandal clasp.she anyways wore them and started limping in search of an auto.

Dadi who came downstairs just then saw her predicament and called her

Dadi : Suno Suno (listen please)

Sanchi turned and saw an old lady coming towards her.

Shravan meanwhile turned and saw that his Dadi was talking to that girl.

He hurried towards them

Dadi: Beta kya hua tum langda rahi ho?(child why are you limping)

Sanchi : kuch nahi aunty who na meri sandal ka clasp tut gaya hai isliey…(oh nothing aunty just that my sandal clasp has broken)

SHRAVAN REACHED THEM

Shravan: chalo dadi(lets go Dadi)

DADI didn't pay attention to him

Dadi: beti kahan rehti ho tum (where do you live child)

Sanchi : ji ji woh mall road ke pass nirmala devi orphanage ke thodi dur pe jo apartments hain wahin(apartments near nirmala devi orphanage at the mall road)

Dadi : arre wah hum bhi wahin ja rahe hain hain chalo mera pota tumko chod dega(how nice we too are going there only , my grandson will take you there)

Shravan was shocked dadi main main

Dadi turned towards Shravan ,kyun puttar tera naya office wahin hai na ab jake keh Nidhi se ki woh Pratap ke sath uski car mein aaye aur hum is ko lekar ghar pahunchayenghe ( Shravan your office is nearby that place only na , ask nidhi to go in pratap's car , we'll take this girl to her home)

Shravan : JI dadi (yes )

In the car

Shravan driving the car and thinking : Dadi bhi na! He then looked at rear view mirror and saw Sanchi and made faces at her and at that very moment Sanchi was also looking at the mirror and saw and in return made a disgusting face too.

Dadi who was watching this laughed and God who was also there sitting beside Shravan laughed too.

Dadi: Tumhara naam kya hai beti….(whats your name child)

Sanchi : Sanchi

Dadi : Sanchi , bada pyara naam hai, poora naam ? kahan ki ho papa mummy kahan hain kya karti ho sab abato (what a nice name whats your full name ?what do you do , where is your mom and dad)

Sanchi: ji mere papa mummy nahi hain main yahin nirmala devi orphanage mein pali bhadi hun , padhai mein thodi acchi thi toh scholarships ke sath padh lia aur ab yahin Doon school mein English teacher hun( I am an orphas never saw my mom and dad I was brought up in nirmala devi prphange , I am now teaching english in Doon's school)

She said this all in a matter of fact voice without a trace of self pity ,this impressed Shravan who was watching her in the mirror

Dadi took Sanchi's hand and squeezed it : tum bahut bahadur ho beti , accha suno yeh jo mera pota hai na Shravan woh aaj apni company ka inauguration kar raha hai , wahan chalo tumhare ghar se jyada dur nahi hai .( you are very brave my child , my grandson is opening his first company and today is its inauguration you'll have to attend it)

Shravan again made a face and thought : ab dadi ko ise bulane ki kya jarurat thi, and he made a face which was again noticeable by Sanchi in the back seat

Sanchi : dadi who toh family function hai main kaise aa sakti hun?

Dadi: Shravan !!!!!

Sharavan: dekhiye Sanchi meri dadi ka kehna koi nahi taalta aap bhi nahi , aapko aana hoga , main function khatam hote hi aapko ghar chod dunga aapke ( listen Sanchi , nobody says no to my Dadi you'll have to come)

Sanchi was a little disturbed as she didn't want to spend any more time with Shravan than he wanted with her but she could not say no

mean while god is very happy he pats dadi's head

good child how you understand me so well,how can shravan start a new life and not have his future life partner with him at this auspicious occasion , i'll award you one brownie point for today's good work you have done otherwise i would have had to do some magic or create another situation to have Sanchi at the inaugration.

Guys , i hope you like this part , plz leave your comments and feedback
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
Ankita....u dont even have to write "I hope u liked it"...who wouldn't?? everything is wonderful....flow of the scenes, excellent narration, love ur comedy esp God offerring brownie points to Dadi😆.....the irritation between SS....i can keep on praising u....plz continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
Veryyyy nice part!!!!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.




Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
wow...that was really wonderful....eagerly waiting for the next update...

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