MEANT TO BE..26th part updated page 49 - Page 4

Thanx 4 pm. Absolutely loved d update. Again i love god character...savan...rab ne bana di jodi. Keep goin,its gr8.

Thanx 4 pm. Absolutely loved d update. Again i love god character...savan...rab ne bana di jodi. Keep goin,its gr8. I loved that song tune mujhe too.

Awseme start loved the beginning of it.sorry haven't read the second part will read it soon and comment.though the beginning I's too good loved shravan's intro

Anku.......absolutely loved it.....this story is so fresh....Shravan is already a responsible guy n Sanchi is a working woman..........thats a very nice start......oh 'God' indeed...instead of only God giving signs...he plays a part in this...thats so cool...n dadi...good she is an astute lady n she is the right person to bring them together. Waiting eagerly for their second meeting....plz update soon.

hmmmmm..di
absolutely u r a gud writer...keep it up..

Gr8888888.

WOW ! very nice update ! i love the way god intervens !

Second Meeting

Next morning

Shravan : dad mom hurry up dadi kahan hain ? mandir jaana hai…off chalo jaldi

They reached the temple and saw huge crowds(hurry up everyone we have to go to temple)

Shravan: aaj koi tyohar hai kya itni bhid kyun hai (why is it so crowded ,is today any festival?)

Dadi: bhagwan ke ghar roz hi tyohar hota hai beta cha lab chalen (in house of God there is always a festival now lets go)

The whole family climbed the stairs and then proceeded towards the main temple when suddenly

Shravan who was walking very fast and looking backwards also to make his family match his strides collided with a person

Person with who he had collided had fallen down and so had her Prasad 's thali

Sharavan looked down and realized it was a girl , his whole family had also stopped looking at the scene

Shravan : I am so sorry aapko chot toh nahi lagi(i hope you didn't get hurt)

That girl looked up and he was jolted because that was the girl from yesterday

Sanchi: oh toh aap hain (oh its you?)

Sharavan : tum …….. tum yahan bhi? (you are even here)

Main toh khamkha hi sorry bol raha tha tumhari hi galti hogi (I said a worthless sorry you don't deserve it , this collision is your fault only)

Sanchi: accha tum piche dekh ke chal rahe the toh meri galti , tej chal rahe the meri galti !!!!!!!!(you were walking looking backwards , walking so fast and it was my fault?)

Shravan : han tumhari galti hai tum dekh ke nahi chal sakti thi kya?(yes its your fault why couldn't you look where were you going)

Pratap: SHRAVAN !!

Pratap comes forward and say to Sanchi :"Beta I am sorry who hume dekh ke chal raha tha islye tumse bhid gaya(i am saying sorry on behalf of my son )

Sanchi: uncle aap kyun maafi mang rahe hain koi baat nahi(oh no uncle no need for that)

Shravan : papa aap bhi na (dad!!!!!!!)

Shravan hurried forward and completed his worship and walked out towards the temple's porch

There he saw Sanchi still doing her parikrama

He watched her she smiled at every person who came in front of her .

Then he himself remembered that he had to do parikrama

He started walking around the temple but in opposite direction.

Soon Sanchi and he came in face to face and due to so many people milling around them they were hurled close together and try as they may they couldn't move

God chortled at the sight

Sharavan tried to move and could , even Sanchi tried but couldn't . they were in a crowd of people and then suddenly frustrated Shravan turned and tried to walk the opposite way and at the same moment Sanchi also but again they were drawn back .

A naughty boy was laughing at them , he had tied Sanchi's dupatta with Shravan 's jacket.

But even before they could react the whole crowd of Jogi baba's clan came and jostled them , this way both of them were thrown together and because Sanchi's hand had a prasad's thali while Shravan's hand had mobile they were not even able to make their way out, they were being forced to do parikrama together tied up and in between the crowd .(I hope u all can understand what I am trying to picturise)

Jogi BabaS did full 7 parikrama around the temple and so did Sanchi and Shravan with them tied together, God's bells rang with each parikrama completed .drums were beating .

Shravan's family came out after completing their worship and saw the whole scene. They didn't know whether to laugh or help them as it was comic , both Sanchi and Shravan were ready to kill each other but were helpless .

Suddenly the parikrama completed and almost by magic the whole crowd pulled out , Sanchi who had been pushed so much that she was almost leaning on Shravan lost her balance and fell only at the last second Shravan held her by waist and saved her.

HEY EVERYONE HOW DID YOU ALL LIKE IT ? PLZ COMMENT AND GIVE YOUR FEED BACK

ankita.. i could totally picturize the scene and savan's frustration!!! loved it..

Ankita......temple going Shravan...25 points to that.... Naughty boy tying the clothes together...25 to that