MEANT TO BE..26th part updated page 49 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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ankita!!!!!!!!🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

i love it already!!!!!!! plz continue... and like i said yesterday, i loved ur destiny FF. keep me in ur pm list if you have one!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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FIRST MEETING

Sanchi was walking in a great hurry on the road ,she was late on her first day to school

Sanchi thinking :" hey bhagwan mujhe aaj ke din hi late hona tha , pehli job aur usi din late , off jaldi jaldi chalun warna mera band bajega aaj, principal sir kya sochenge, main aajtak jab tak padhti thi tab toh late nahi hui lekin job lagte hi late ( oh god late on the first day of my job , I have to walk first or what will principal sir think ….i have never been late when I studied in this school but I will be late when I join as teacher )

God: beta maine tumko aaj late hi isliye kiya tha taki tum apne honewale pati ki ek jhalak dekh lo , ab time aa gaya hai ki tumhari saari wishes poori hon ….(I made you late because I want you to meet your love your future husband , it time now that all your wishes get fuldilled)

As Sanchi was hurrying along the road a car came at high speeds towards her and before she could react it was upon her but braked just in time

A guy got out advanced and asked

Guy: dekh ke nahi chal sakti kya ,dekha nahi itni badi gaadi aa rahi thi accident ho jata toh(can't you see, such a big car was coming your way what if an accident had happened)

Sanchi: tum log samajte kya ho apne aap ko ek horn nahi maar sakte the meri aakhen ka piche hain main aage dekh ke chalti hun samjhe (what do you think of yourself, can't you use the horn , I have eyes only in front of my face not behind)

They were at the point of arguing when another person climbed out of the car he was Shravan

Shravan: madam we are sorry , lekin aapko bhi bich sadak pe nahi chalna chaiye tha ,plz aage se dhyan rakheagah, chal yaar rahul, hume der ho rahi hai, while he was leaving( madam we are sorry but you shouldn't be walking in the middle of the road plz take care in future)

Shravan explained to Rahul

Shravan to Rahul: yaar aise raah chalte logon se nahi ladhte hain, bekar mein din aur dimag kharab hota hai ,( friend you shouldn't waste time talking to such people you'll only get pissed off and whole day will go waste)

Sanchi heard this and felt very angry but decided that she was already late

Sanchi in her thoughts- " yeh bade baap ki bigadi hui aulaad kisi ko kuch samajte hi nahi hain , koi nahi agli baar milega toh dekh lunghi samajta kya hai apne aap ko(what does he think of himself , the rich brat, next time I'll meet him , I'll show him how dare he)

God—dear child your wish will be fulfilled very soon don't worry

Shravan also sat in the car with his friend and left

Sanchi also made her way

While God looked on smiling…

And then God waved his hand ….

Shravan looked at the rear view mirror and saw Sanchi leaving and in the same moment Sanchi also turned…

They both were looking at each other and both didn't know why

Shravan thinking to himself - abhi bhi yeh ladki bich raaste pe hi chal rahi hai kya hoga iska (this girl is still walking right in the middle of the road , don't know what will happen to her in future)

Sanchi was thinking abhi bhi yeh ladka gaadi itni tez chala raha hai , aaj toh kisi na kisi ka accident karva ke hi rahega (this boy is again driving very fast , today an accident will happen by his hands )

They left …….

And then God appeared

My dear children this is the first of many meetings you'll have till you become one in your souls and then maybe at that time you'll know the purpose of meeting at cross roads

This day will be etched in your minds forever as this is a beginning of a new life for both of you

hey everyone did you like this part should i continue?


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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW LOVED IT !!!! it was jus sooooooooooo gud !pls update verrrrrrrrrrrryy sooooooooooooooon 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ankita...gr8 start....God as a character...........thats a nice idea....already romantic...hoping for more...thanx for the PM....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is fantastic ! Just wondering, how often do you update, do you have specific days or is it just randomly ?
atikna thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i'll update it randomly but will be sending out pms for this fanfic

glad you liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey ankita, absolutely amazin. I loved ur destiny ff. This new ff is awesome and i love how u kept d original story in mind. God character is so cute. Can u plz pm me when u update? Thanx:-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi ankita... I liked ur ff alot... Please continue... definately continue... Nice concept... & Please pm me also..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow ankita.... Very nice update😊 ... making GOD as a character very interesting ... Continue it soon... may be this weekends couldn't be bored with u r FF
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesomeeeee!!!!!
Loveeee the character sketch.
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.




Fatima

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