MEANT TO BE..26th part updated page 49 - Page 32

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Posted: 14 years ago
wah Anki...... u wrote after a long time... very nice, very crisp and gr8t writing..
So shravan has fallen in love now what museebat is in store 4 him??
update regularly plz....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: atikna

God: dekha pyar ek besure ko bhi gaana sikha diya



I swear I love the God's character that you've wonderfully incorporated in here. And I totally disagree with what you said today.. .you were saying that like the show, this FF is going down too but I dont' think so! You've done an amazing job here, Anki! Thanks for taking out the time to cheer us all up.. after all, these FFs and VMs are the only remaining fun these days it seems like!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Anki Dear what a triple dhamaka u had instore us after a long time....too good n too cute n too sweet. They fell in love. I absolutely loves God's dialogues. When did u say to Jhaan ur FF is going down the drain...........no way this was million billion time better than the original show...........gr8 update thanx

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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing update Ankita.👍🏼
It was worth the very long wait. Impatiently waiting for your next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am reading your ff after so long still have to read the last part you updated but so far too good
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 22

Sanchi: main aapke sath nahi jaunghi

Shravan: kyun

Sanchi: nahi main nahi jaunghi

Sharvan: accha school hi nahi jaoghi

Sanchi: nahi main school toh jaunghi

Shravan : toh chalo

Sanchi: aapke sath nahi

Shravan: dekh lo ab paidal ya rickshaw se jaoghi toh der ho jayeghi, aur teacher ka school der se pahunchna accha thode hi lagta hai , main pahunhaunga toh jaldi pahunch jaoghi

Sanchi: main bas tumhare karan late hui

Shravan: nahi apne karan late ho rahi ho aur mere karan sahi time pahunchoghi

Sanchi :matlab?

Sharavan: mujhse chupti nahi toh abhi tak school mein hoti

Sanchi ne sir jhuka lia

Shravan: aaj nahi toh kal manoghi Sanchi jarur manoghi ….

?(shravan was smiling at Sanchi 's confusion)

Sanchi: kya maoonghi?

Shravan: hum jab sath hote hain toh sab thik hota aur akele tum ya main sahi nahi hote

Ab chalo

He dropped her to the school , making sure they passed over all the potholes on the way so Sanchi was thrown on shravan everytime and in the end irritated she has held on to shravan tightly

Shravan: lo pahuncha diya aapko time pe

Sanchi: kehte kehte thak jaunghi lekin aaj phir se than..

Shravan: thak rahi ho toh mat kaho

Sanchi: nahi thanks

Shravan : aise kaam nahi chalega

Sanchi: matlab

Shravan: mera ehsaan chukana padhega

Sanchi: ji kaise?

Shravan : bata dunga lekin baad mein tab tak main aapko roz school pahunchaunga aur lene aaunga

Sanchi: yeh koi jabardasti hai

Shravan : nahi meri chahat hai

Sanchi blushed again and then turned and ran inside the school gates

Shravan went to the office and found the door locked and lock changed

He was flabbergasted . called rahul but rahul did not pick up the call

Shravan: damn you rahul main itni aasani se tumko apne sapne khuchalne nahi dunga

Shravan went to the bank and there again he got to know that rahul had freezed the account and also there was nothing left

Shravan was fuming by the time he reached home and ranted out everything to his dadi

Dadi: par beta teri ladhai kyun hui rahul se , tu toh uske b'day gaya than a

Shravan: dadi who Sanchi ke sath batameezi kar raha tha , maine use punch kar diay

Dadi: punch kar diya , tune maar pitayi ki?

Shravan: toh kya karta , who mere saamne Sanchi ko tang kar raha tha aur main use jaane deta

Mera toh mann kar raha khal udhed dun uski……..par Sanchi ke bare mein soch ke ruk gaya

Meanwhile nidhi and madhura had come into the room

Dadi: par beta rahul tumhara dost tha na(baiting him)

Shravan: dost tha , lekin usne Sanchi ke sath batameezi ki kaise

Dadi: teri galti thi, tum Sanchi ko wahan kyun leke gaye jabki jaante ho ki woh apna aise jagah khayal nahi rakh sakti , kisi aur ko le jate

Shravan staring at dadi

Sharavan: dadi aap keh rahe ho yeh, abhi kal aap uski tareef kar rahe the na

Dadi: tareef maine ki lekin yeh toh nahi kaha ki use disco le jay a uske sath ghum(ab bol bhi de beta, apne mann ki baat)

Shravan: wah dadi , main Sanchi ko isliye le jaana chahata tha kyunki ……..kyunki..

Dadi: han beta kyunki?

Nidhi: han shravan ….kyun le jaana chahata tha use

Madhura: han beta bol Sanchi ko hi kyun?

Shravan stared at all of them

Shravan: main aapko kyun bataun , nahi bata raha ………..

Dadi: nahi bittu bata de

Nidhi: han Shravan bata na

Madhura: mere raja beta bata de

Shravan thinking : yeh log aise mere piche kyun padh gaye , kahin inhe maloom toh nahi , nahi inhe kaise maloom ho sakta hai ……..kahin Sanchi ko bata diya toh , uske pass rishta leke chale gaye toh , nahi nahi itni jaldi nahi

Shravan: woh meri dost hai isliye

Nidhi: dost toh tu mujhe bhi manta hai mujhe le jaata

Shravan: bhabhi's not allowed aur saurabh bhaiya mujhe maar daalte

Main ja raha hun, mujhe ab kuch na kuch karke rahul ko dhund ke mere office ka tala khulvana hai

Dadi: tu kaise karega yeh

Shravan: aaj nahi , ek do din mein uske ghar jake baat karta hun tab tak main partnership ke papers padh ke use sahi order mein karke lawyers se baat karlun

Mujhe ab rahul ke sath aage kaam nahi karna

Dadi: humne toh pehle hi kaha tha

Shravan: mujhe koi aur finance karne ko tyar nahi tha

Dadi: galat pratap ready tha

Shravan : main papa se paise nahi lena chahata hun

Dadi: kyun

Shravan: mujhe apne pairon pe khud hi khada hona hai

Aap log chinta mat karo main dekh lunga rahul ko

Nidhi: aur Sanchi

Shravan had been climbing the stairs he turned immediately

Shravan: Sanchi ko kya

Nidhi: nahi Sanchi ko….

Shravan : Sanchi ko kya bhabhi

Nidhi: laughing , Sanchi ko ghar kab layegha

Shravan: main kyun laun use a ghar , bulana hai khud bula lena

Nidhi: hum aise ghar lane ki baat nahi kar rahe hain

Shravan: toh kaise

Nidhi: itna bhola mat ban , tu bahut acchi tarah se jaanta hai main kya keh rahi hun

Shravan : nahi janta hun , na jaanna chahata hun , bye kaam hai mujhe

Shravan turned and smiling went up the stairs

While dadi nidhi and madhura high fived

God: high five me too, it me who brought them together…..thank me , arre kaise log hain

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 23

Shravan's room

Shravan: off oh , yeh log toh piche hi padh gaye hain , main chahe Sanchi ko apne dil ki baat bata paun na paun yeh log jarur bata denghe ……….

Ab kya karun , oh han legal papers

He searched high and low but couldn't find the papers

Shravan : kahan rakh diye , off kahin rahul ke pass honghe to musibat ho jayeghi

Then he remembered that he had kept them in office safe but only he knew the code

Shravan: mujhe jald se jald woh papers nikalwane honghe nahi toh rahul kuch bhi kar sakta hai

He was thinking very hard when he glanced at the watch

It was past 4:30

Shravan scrambled up and ran , he didn't want Sanchi to wait outside the school

Shravan drove his bike at full speed to the school

Sanchi was waiting outsided

Shravan brake his bike right in front of her

She sat behind him

Shravan : kitni der wait kiya

Sanchi: 15 min se wait kar rahi thi

Shravan : kyun

Sanchi : kyun kya matlab

Shravan: aaj subah keh rahi thi ki mere sath nahi jaoghi

Sanchi: tum aaane wale the na isliye…

Shravan: bada yahkeen tha ki main aaungha?

Sanchi: han yakeen toh tha

Shravan : smiling kyun?

Sanchi oh thinking yes why did I stand here for so long, how did I believe he'll come

I think I am going mad … mujhe yeh kya ho raha hai

Shrvan : soch kyun rahi ho batao itna yakeen kasie tha?

Sanchi: sawaal bahut puchte hain aap, main ja rahi (she almost got down the bike)

Shravan: ab wait kiya hi hai toh apne chariot ka toh chalo saying this he started and she had to hold shravan .

Sanchi: aap itni tez kyun chala rahe hain?

Shravan : mere sath coffee peene chaloghi

Sanchi: nahi

Shravan : soch lo?

Sanchi: kya

Shravan increased the bike speed and then stopped right in the middle of the road .

Sanchi: yeh kya kar rahe hain

Shravan got off the bike

Sanchi seeing this got scared and got off the bike too

Shravan approached her very deliberately …

Sanchi got scared and looked around saw no one and then looked back at shravan

Sanchi: aap kya kar rahe hain , she moved back step by step

Shravan didn't reply just moved towards her

Sanchi moved back and then tripped on the stone and fell

Shravan came upon her….

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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice anki, gr8t dialogues...👍🏼
eagerly waiting for saachi to fall ; both in shravan's arms and in love of shravan
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update !! pls continue !
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Posted: 14 years ago
This:

'God: high five me too, it me who brought them together…..thank me , arre kaise log hain'

really made me laugh here 🤣

Such comedy coming from the Man Himself 😉

Keep it up Ankita, you're one of my favourite writers of fanfics, along with Maris and Jassie.

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