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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
This might actually happen in BHPH as Shravan seems to hate Sanchi for now. But since he is begging Sanchi for money nowadays he has to embarass himself to Tara since she has to spend on her own to goto Mauritius......🤔
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: kchitra77

This might actually happen in BHPH as Shravan seems to hate Sanchi for now. But since he is begging Sanchi for money nowadays he has to embarass himself to Tara since she has to spend on her own to goto Mauritius......🤔


😆....Ya that may be the case..😆....But that's good na, 'coz when Tara will come to know that Shravan doesn't have a penny to spend on her, she will leave him, 'coz she is a very practical girl who knows that love isn't everything...😉.....
BTW, i do want that too happen which i have written 'coz that will spice up the story.😛.....Finally toh un dono ko milna hi hai....toh thoda spicy climax hona chahiye na!😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23

Sanchi felt very sad as well as anger that she was made to sit in the back but she took it in her stride as always. Shravan was cozying upto Tara by putting his hand at the back of Tara's seat n talking n enjoying with her. He also looked tauntingly at Sanchi every now n then. Feeling frustated Sanchi started to look around instead of the couple upfront. Then after a while feeling the breeze blowing on her face she slept off. Shravan looked again at Sanchi, seeing her in that peaceful sleep he does felt a little bad for dragging her along n so he removed his hand from the back of Tara's seat.
They reached the hotel finally, Sanchi also woke up. They were going into their respective rooms...Tara looked at Sanchi knowingly that she is the one who is going to be near Sharvan even though Sanchi is his wife. Shravan also looks at Sanchi but he feels a little guilty but he carries on inside. Later in the evening Shravan knocks at Sanchi's room, she opens up,Shravan tells her that they r going for dinner n she can also order room service for food. She says ok n closes the door. Shravan was upset she closed the door on his face but he goes on. After sometime Sanchi dint want to dwell on Shravan's thoughts n so she goes for a walk in the hotel's private beach. Her mood picks up due to the pleasant weather n the beautiful sunset n so she sits down on the shore. Time went by n she dint notice it ....she started when someone tapped her on the shoulder. She looked up n saw that it was her childhood neighbour friend Akhil....

Hope u guys like it n please some one continue....

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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
nice part
can i join tooo?

i am joining without permission

akhl:sanchi tum ...sanchi hi hona
sanchi: akhl .........
akhl: yakeen nahi ho raha itne dinon baad woh bhi yahan goa mein ..........kitni baatein karni hai tumse
sanchi:chalo kahin chal ke baat karte hain
akhl:han restaurant chalo
they sit talking of past times akhl was sanchi's school friend her best friend
after some time
akhl:tum yahan kaise sanchi.......kiske sath aayi ho kya chal raha hai tumhari life mein
as he was asking these questions
shravan came looking for her since he didn't find her in the room

shravan: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho bataya bhi nahi chalo
sanchi:shravan ji mujhe akhl mil gaya toh main baat karne lagi
akhl looks at sanchi and then at shravan
akhl: hi iam akhl sanchi ka school ka classmate
shravan:main shravan sanchi ka..........
sanchi: mere pati .............aap puch rahe the na akhl main yahan kya kar rahi hun
main yahan apne pati ke stah honeymoon pe aayi
akhl is a little stunned .......but retains composure
sanchi smirks at shravan
akhl extends his hand at sanchi congrats .........i leave you two it
bye sanchi see u
sanchi: bye

ok some else update more

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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
I'll continue! :)

"Who was he!?" Shravan asked Saachi furiously as soon as Akhil(Akhl) had left.

"Like he said," replied Saachi not looking at Shravan as she headed towards the elevator "He was Akhil(Akhl). We used to be best friends before college, and he was my neighbour."

Shravan followed Saachi into the elevator, and punched in the number for their floors angrily. Saachi snorted at his anger and asked, "Why are you so angry?"

Shravan glanced at her before staring at the elevator door and stating, "I'm not angry."

"Then can you not break the buttons, please? Oh well. Even if you do you're the one who has to pay for it." Saachi replied leaning against the wall of the elevator.

"You..." Shravan pointed a finger at her turning towards her so angrily and quickly that he took her by surprise.

"What happened?" Saachi asked mockingly tilting her head to the side "Did your dinner date with Tara not go well?"

Shravan punched the elevator wall right beside Saachi face and she flinched, but quickly regained composure. "Oops. Struck a nerve, did I?"

Shravan was about to say something but Saachi moved away from him. Shravan grabbed Saachi by the arm and pressed her against the wall.

"Listen Saachi..." Shravan spoke but he was cut off as the elevator door opened only to reveal Tara standing there a shocked look on her face.

"Shravan?" Tara looked surprised. "What the hell are you two doing? Where did you disappear off to Shravan? I was worried sick about you, and you're here getting cozy with your wife in an elevator!?"

Shravan stepped away from Saachi embarrassed by the position they were standing in. Tara glared at Shravan, and stormed away but not before giving Saachi a dirty look.

"Tara!" Shravan exclaimed before turning to Saachi "It's all your fault! If you hadn't gone off and..."

"Yeah, yeah. Whatever." Saachi cut off Shravan "Go after the love of your life. We wouldn't want her to get mad now, would we?"

"You..." Shravan threatened for the umpteenth time during the evening, but Saachi rolled her eyes at him, stepped out of the elevator, and walked towards her hotel room which was in the opposite direction of Tara's.

I know! I know! Very short! So, anyone wanna continue? :)
Edited by xxdevilishxx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
Oh dude this sounds fun!😆

lemme give it a try😉

Starting from the part Saachi walks in to her room---

Saachi makes herself comfortable on the bed while turning on the TV. The phone rings and it's the hotel receptionist calling the guests to invite them to their annual beach summer party in the evening.
A couple of hours go by and still Shravan's been pestering Tara about his loyalty towards her and only her. After much much much explanation, Tara seems a bit convinced by Shravan and decides to accompany him to the party in the evening. Shravan gets happy and leaves to get ready.

Meanwhile Saachi is already downstairs at the party place. Akhl walks up to her .
Akhl--hey Saachi
Saachi--hey.
Akhl --You seem different now compared to way back then.
Saachi (bit confused)--Why? What's wrong?
Akhl--Nothing's wrong. You look beautiful that's it!
Saachi--well thank you. you look good as well.
Akhl (smiles broadly) --Do I?!

Shravan and Tara are shown walking down to the party area. Shravan fidgeting with his hair while Tara giving her single expression that she always gives. Tara gives him a look and he forces a smile at her as usual.

The announcer welcomes everyone to the party and asks them to find a partner as they are going to turn on the music and have a dance.

Akhl--So Saachi, would you like to dance with me tonight?
Saachi (looks a lil hesitant..eyes searching for Shravan)
Akhl--Oh common saachi! One dance won't hurt ya now. Please don't deny. Say yes for those old times.common.
Saachi-- errrr...ok. but only a lil bit.
Akhl--Let's go.

Akhl and Saachi join the dance floor. it so happens that Shravan and Tara are right behind them. Shravan notices Saachi. ..but Akhl's back is at him so he doesn't know who the guy is.

Shravan (in his mind)-- Who is that guy with Saachi? Why is she dancing anyhow?! I need to find out who that is.

Shravan steps besides Saachi-Akhl and realizes it's Akhl. He just stares at them both dance. Tara tries to make a turn but Shravan just won't move. He just keeps staring at Saachi dance with this guy.

Tara gets frustrated as usual and walks off while Shravan still dances with an imaginary dance partner.😆


Tara yells "Shravan" from distance and that wakes Shravan up.
Shravan(in his mind)-- Wait what?! where is Tara. (scratches head)
He hears Tara's voice and walks up to her.

Tara---Shravan...Shravan..Shravan! what's wrong with you?! why are you so lost!?
Shravan(mumbling)--Why is he here? Why did she agree to dance with him?
Tara--Huh?! What? Who in the world are you talking about?!
Shravan (jolts back up) --umm..what?! errr nothing...nothing. Let's have food..I'm starving.
Tara (gives her disgusted look)-whatever.

They walk up to dinner area and see Saachi sharing a laugh with Akhl while enjoying her dinner.
Tara---Ughhh! Just look at your wife! She's laughing and having dinner with some random man.
Shravan --I know! How could she?! I think I'll have to go talk to her now. I don't like this.
Tara-- why do you care anyhow?! It's actually better if she has someone to accompany. That way she won't bother us. Let's go eat.
Shravan still staring them with a weird look in his face.

Shravan (thinking)-- Tara's right! Why does it matter to me? I should be happy that she isn't tagging behind my back. Yeah this is better. I think. May be. i dunno.😕

Shravan slowly walks away but still keeps turning back to check Saachi with Akhl.



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Alrighty.....this is it for now.

Some one else continue😳




Edited by Ramy25 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
nice parts...atleast here we can make SAVAN romantic ..the real show is getting disgusting day by day...next couple of weeks is going to be disappointing i feel
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: kchitra77

nice parts...atleast here we can make SAVAN romantic ..the real show is getting disgusting day by day...next couple of weeks is going to be disappointing i feel



I liked today's precap! Let's hope tomorrow episode is not disappointing! *fingers crossed*

Btw, do the same people who wrote the parts before me want to continue, because I have a feeling that for now this is all the people that are going to join us for now! :]
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Ok. I will continue...

Meanwhile Sanchi is having a great time with Akhil..
Sanchi is thinking.. Shravan is with Tara and will be having a great time.. why should i go to room and cry.. atleast here i am with someone who is friendly to me.. i will stick on here for some more time..

Shravan and Tara are going back.. Shravan is thinking about Saanchi and Akhil.. Tara is getting angrier each moment noticing this..
Tara :- Shravan, what are you thinking? Are you still thinking about Sanchi?? We are here because we wanted to spent some time together.. i dont understand why u had to bring Sanchi here.. she is a pest.. her main agenda is to create problems between us..
Shravan gets angry hearing this :- Tara !!!! Enough !! Sanchi is not like that.. you dont have to right to say antthing like that about Sanchi.. She came here only because it was the only way we could be together and she is helping us out..
Tara is shocked hearing Shravan defent Sanchi.. she is upset..
Tara - if you feel she is that good, why dont u go and join her.. what are u doing here with me..
Shravan :- Tara listen.. i want to be with you.. you are the one i love.. I was just saying...
Tara :- wht Shravan?
Shravan :- Tara please understand..
Tara :- Shravan we are both angry and upset now.. why dont we cool off and talk tomorrow morning.. if Sanchi's "booth" is our of ur head..
Shravan :- Tara..
Tara :- good night Shravan.. talk to you tomorrow..
Shravan goes back to his room...


Someone please continue...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It was already passed midnight. The weather was hot and sultry. The AC in the room ws making more noise than circulting cool breeze. Shravan , usually a good sleeper felt restless and started tossing from left to right , then again to left.

He switched on the light, drank some water and again tried to go to sleep. After another hour of tossing and turning he got up and opened the balcony door and came out . The slightly chilled night air along with the scent of tropical flowers invaded his nostrils. It cooled him down and reminded hm of something very familiar - fragrance of Sachis talc.
"Sachi ki Bacchi - what is she upto with that guy , I will kill him ' He banged on the glass door causing it to vibrate loudly.
"Shravanji, aap kya kar rahe hai:
Sachi was standing on the other side of the balocny shared by both the rooms and separated by a wired mesh with climbing plants.
"Tumko kya , - tum jao masti karo "
" Theh riye main aati hoon"
After 3 long seconds , Shravan could here the expected gentle knock on his door.
He waited a bit before opening it as he did not want to show Sanchi his eagerness.
Yes, he realized at that moment that he needed Sachi besides him to calm him down, He wanted to get reassured about her presence.
But few harsh words came out his mouth.
"Ab tumhe yahan kay chahiye, tum yeh dekhe ayi ho ki Tara idhar hai / "
" Nahin Shravanji, aap mujhe galat nahin samajhna"
While talking, she quickly took out Shravans nightwear from the suitcase , filled up the water tumbler by the bedside, adjusted the Ac regulator and dimmed down the nightlight ,
"Aap so jaiye"
"Aur tum.."
" Main kya ..."
"Tum , tum,,,,,"
Shravan could not find the words . he simple did not have the guts to say what he wanted to say.
Sachi never needed words from Shravans mouth . She knew him.
So she took threw couple of coushions on the couch and said
"Aur main yahan so jati hoon,..."
Shravan heaved a sigh of relief.
Soft tinkling sound of Sachis bangles soon lulled him to sleep,
Edited by sunaina02 - 15 years ago

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