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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
^^ Haha! Same here! 😳 I'd start it off, but I would need an idea to start the story. And I'm not exactly the most creative person around here.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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^^Maybe people can just start giving ideas first and then you can start if off and if you'd like I can go next and so on and so forth... :)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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May be we can start from the last episode.. what we want to see after the "Khuda jaa ne" dance.. 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I will start.. here it goes.. 😳

Sanchi and Shravan are dancing to "Khuda jaane".. They are so involved into each other.. seeing this Tara is iritated and she walks away.. 😆
The dance is over, everyone claps .. Shravan wakes as if from a dream.. he is shocked to know he danced with Sanchi.. that too this intimately.. ❤️ Sara congratulate the couple..
Shravan and Sanchi gets down from the stage.. Shravan looks around, Tara is no where to be seen.. Viren and Bunty join them.. Viren says that Tara has left long back... Shravan is pissed..
Viren and Bunty congratulate Sanchi for her great dance.. hearing this Shravan is even more iritated..
He grabs Sanchi's hand and takes her to the car.. In the car he shouts at Sanchi for dancing.. asking her what she was trying to prove by dancing.. Was her intention to keep him away from Tara..
Sanchi is sad to hear this but she says.. "you only said that people dance and enjoy in discos. I was just trying to do that... If Sara called you to stage, that is not my problem.. 😆 "

Someone else can continue from here... 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sanchi n Sharavan reach home. Dadi n nidhi bhabhi r there in the hall discussing something. Seeing Sachi n Shravan they smile n ask them where they went. Shravan stutters to say something but before that Sanchi replies that they went for a long drive n had dinner in a nice restaurant, she also says infact after the drive she really feels sleepy. Dadi tells them they carry on n have a good night's sleep cuz tomorrow there is a surprise waiting for u two. Shravan is curious to know what it is cuz he is already very suspicious of her after that detective charade. In the bedroom Shravan ignores her n sits down on the bed n tries to sms Tara but since she doesnt reply he is irritated n gets more irritated seeing Sanchi sleeping soundly on the lounge seattee.
Next day morning all of them r gathered in the hall n r waiting for Sanchi n Shravan. When they arrive dadi wishes them goodmorning n delivers the bombshell(acc. to Shravan) about their impending honeymoon trip to Mauritius.
Thats it for now....someone else can continue or can even change the story....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16

Great Job krishnarani! :)

I'll continue..
After that Shravan doesn't respond because he has nothing to say and goes and sits in the car. She goes in after him and they both drive home in silence. While driving home however, Shravan keeps having glimpes of him dancing with Sanchi and smiles😍,whenever he realizes this he looks at Sanchi and then reminds himself that he "loves Tara". Sanchi also pictures her dance with Shravan their entire car ride home while staring out the window and taking little peeks at Shravan when he isn't looking😳. When they get home Dadi is still up waiting for them and as soon as they notice that Shravan grabs Sanchi's hand and puts a fake smile on his face and Sanchi does a little fake laugh as well. Dadi sees them come in and asks them questions and how their dinner went...she asks where they went and not having a story planned out.. Shravan and Sanchi both give different answers and then Shravan's eyes widen and him and Sanchi both look at each other😳. Dadi frowns and gives them a suspicious look...
K whoever wants to continue now can do so.. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oops sorry i didn't know u were posting one too, now we have 2 stories.. lol :E
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -xx-Roohani-xx-

Great Job krishnarani! :)


I'll continue..


After that Shravan doesn't respond because he has nothing to say and goes and sits in the car. She goes in after him and they both drive home in silence. While driving home however, Shravan keeps having glimpes of him dancing with Sanchi and smiles😍,whenever he realizes this he looks at Sanchi and then reminds himself that he "loves Tara". Sanchi also pictures her dance with Shravan their entire car ride home while staring out the window and taking little peeks at Shravan whenhe isn't looking😳. When they get home Dadi is still up waiting for them and as soon as they notice that Shravan grabs Sanchi's hand and putsa fake smile on his face and Sanchi does a little fake laugh as well. Dadi sees them come in and asks them questions and how their dinner went...she asks where they went and not having a story planned out..Shravan and Sanchi both give different answers and then Shravan's eyes widen and him and Sanchi both look at each other😳. Dadi frowns and gives them a suspicious look...


K whoever wants to continuenow can do so..😊




We can have yours as second and kchitra77 as third part.. since it is talking about next day morning..
So anyone continuing the story can start from the honeymoon bomb 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh yea ur part is nice as well...u can take mine as the next part as i started only after they reach home..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Okay am continuing from Kchitra77's part.😊

As soon as Saanchi and Shravan got to know about Dadi's surprise, they both looked jaw-dropped at each other. Shravan instantly thought of a plan. He told Dadi that since he is working as a sales manager these days, he won't like to discontinue his work, or else Pratap will be angry at him. But Dadi told him that Pratap has given his consent. Both-Saanchi and Shravan got tensed then. Just then Shravan's phone started ringing and it was Tara on the other side. Shravan excused himself and went to talk to Tara. Tara then apologised to Shravan and said him that she thought a lot last night and came to the conclusion that whatever happened in the disco was not Shravan's fault since he himself was ready to leave the disc. with her. Shravan being relaxed and happy knowing this, instantly thought of a plan; he asked Tara whether she would like to go with him to Mauritius for holidays. Tara told Shravan that her father won't allow her to go abroad right now, but she can very well go with him to any place in India. Shravan then got an idea. He asked Tara whether she would like to go with him to Goa. She instantly agreed to it. Shravan then told her to be ready tomorrow as he would come to pick her up. But this time, to not let any misunderstandings occur, he told Tara that he would come along with Saanchi, but that is just to show his family members that he and Saanchi are going out together. But in Goa they(Shravan and Tara) will be together and he will make Saanchi stay in a separate room, while he and Tara will stay together. After a little cajoling, Tara gave in.
Shravan then went inside the room and told Dadi that he is ready to go on the honeymoon. Saanchi was shocked to listen to this. But as soon as Dadi was going to happily spread this news, Shravan added that he will rather go to Goa than to Mauritius. Dadi asked him the reason for it and he told her that that's 'coz he likes Goa more than Mauritius and (then sarcastically added that) he would rather like to take his ''loving wife'' to a place he loves that to some place which every newly-wed visits.Dadi agreed to this.
Saanchi and Shravan in their room started packing their bags. Shravan then said to Saanchi-'' Yeh mat sochna ki main Goa isliye jaa raha ki ki main tumhare saath honeymooning kar saku....balki mein isliye jaa raha hoon ki main Tara ke saath time spend kar saku''. Saanchi was suddenly taken aback and then says,'' Taraji?....Kya Taraji bhi hamare saath aa rahi hain?''.....Shravan,'' Aur kya!....Tumhe kya laga tha ki main tumhare saath chalne ke liye raazi hounga?!.....Tara bhi hamare saath aa rahi hai......aur haan Saanchi, tum mere aur Tara ke beech already kafi problems khadi kar chuki ho, par abb mein nahi chahta ki tum hum dono ke beech mein aao.....aur isiliye, maine tumhara room separately book karaya hai....Goa mein main aur Tara saath rahenge aur tum alag.....aur abb tum galti se bhi mere aur Tara ke beech aane ki koshish mat karna...warna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga....aur Goa mein toh mujhe tumhare aanso pochne ke bhi zarorat nahi padegi kyunki waha tum kisi se meri shikayat nahi kar paogi..''.....Saanchi then had tears in her eyes....she had no words left to reply back to Shravan...he had crossed the limits of hatred with her.........
The next morning: Shravan and Saanchi start leaving the house taking every one's blessings. Dadi told Shravan to take good care of Saanchi and she told Saanchi to enjoy this time fully since this phase is the most beautiful phase in the life of a couple. Saanchi then thought that how opposite Dadi's words seem when matched with her predicament.
Shravan and Saanchi then left in a jeep (the one which is open at top). They reached Tara's house. Tara was all ready. She immediately came and hugged Shravan. Then Shravan told Saanchi to sit at the back in jeep and made Tara sit alongside him. Then they left for Goa.

Sorry, it's a bit long. But actually telling, i dreamt all this yesterday night😆...so just thought to write what i dreamt as it goes with the flow of the story.😳....Hope someone continues from where i left.😊
Edited by Krishy_ - 15 years ago

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