*Tera Mera Rishta* LAST PART p43 - Page 20

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Posted: 17 years ago
awesomme part ika!! 👏 vry vry sweet.. 😳 really looking forward 2 read da next prt..
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Posted: 17 years ago
that part was verrryyy sweet! 😳 😳 Pravin ki naadani mujhe bohot achchi lagti hai...but this part was a bit emotinal too... 👏
It was reallly really well written! 😊 😊 Ab mujhe predict karne ke alaava aur koi raasta baaki nahi rehta! 😆 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Iqa.. is there any chance you are sending next part in near future.. means today or tomorow
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Posted: 17 years ago
heyyyy that was veryyyyy cuteee 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Been really busy, will continue sooner or later this week. 😳 😳
reg,
ika
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

Been really busy, will continue sooner or later this week. 😳 😳
reg,
ika

thats okay Ika.. we are patiently waiting here.. no complaints!! 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
...:::TERA MERA RISHTA:::...

Part 7

Everyone is shock with pravin's outburst, when leela has tears in her eyes.

Leela: pravina dekh pravin bhai ki halat ab toh laut aa.

Dimple: mummy pravina kaki ab Kabhi nahi ayeingi aur hume yeh baat maan leni chahiye.

Baa agrees with her, baa sees children has not eaten anything so baa ask them to eat.

Mitali: maan nahi hai.

Baa: beta agar teri mummy dekh rahi hogi toh usey acha naih lagega ke mere bache khana nahi khah rahe.

All of them look at each other and eat the food slowly.

Pravin is in his room thinking about what just happened, when hemal comes to him with plate filled with breakfast. He sees pravin lost in thoughts 1st seeing him in this state it brakes him heart, tears are so close to his eyes when pravin sees him standing there with food plate, hemal quickly turns around wipes his tears and turns to pravin comes and suits next to him.

Hemal: um..pravinn bhai, app…ke liye yeh… and bring plate in front of him.

Pravin: mujhe nahi khana, le jao.

Hemal: pravin bhai, janta hon pravni bhabhi ki yaad arahi hai. Pravin looks at him

Hemal: par pravin bhai agar bhabhi apko es halat mein dekheingi toh unko bura lagega na? please khana kha lejiye.

Pravin looks at hemal lovingly pats on his cheeks and asks about kids when hemal says that they're eating. Pravin tells hemal to go he'll eat breakfast. Hemal agrees and goes.

Pravin looks at plate and then puts on table and turns around to leave

Voice: arre yeh kya?? Hemal bhai ko kaha ke khalonga aur khah hi nahi rahe.

Pravin is so shocked to hear this, he recognises this voice very well, dared not to turn around, he stands there still.

Voice: kya main itni buri honk e meri taraf dekhna bhi nahi chahte?

Pravin: nahi.. and quickly turns around and is shocked to see who was standing in front of him.

Pravin (shocked): pravina????

(Yess guyz..its our pravina)

Pravina: aise heran kyon hokar dekh rahe ho? Maine kaha than a ke tumhe chodh kar kabhi nahi jaongi.

Pravin comes near her he still cannot believe it. He then moves his hand forward and touch pravina's face pravina gets shy and before anything moves away.

Pravina: ab toh yakeen agaya na?

Pravin: par tum raat ko kaha chali gayi thi?

Pravina: mujhe jana tha pravin. And lowers her eyes, pravin feel hurt and quickly holds her face up and says sorry Pravina smiles.

Pravina: chalo bohut hawa laad ab khana kaho.

Pravin nods no: nahi mujhe tumse baatein karni hain.

Pravina: main yahi hon baatein saath mein hongi par khana pehle

She takes him and makes him sit on bed and sit in front of him.

Pravina: chalo main tumhe khud apne haathon se khilati hon.

Pravin agrees and pravina starts to feed pravin from her hands. Unknown to what is happening in pravin's room all are sitting downstairs when hemal comes and tells them that pravin bhai will eat his breakfast. Kids are not eating properly so meenakshi feeds them with her hands.

Screen splits in two: on one side Pravina is feeding pravin and on other side Meenakshi is feeding kids.

The End


Written by: Me😊
sorry guyz for posting late been really busy😳 will continue soon😃

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey Ika!! Rocking as ever!! 👏
Good show... worth the wait!!

waiting for the next one 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww iqa it was really a lovely part... pravin pravina are really soulmate 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pinstripedshirt

hey Ika!! Rocking as ever!! 👏
Good show... worth the wait!!

waiting for the next one 😳


thanx...will post next part soon, lil busy these days😳😳

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