*Tera Mera Rishta* LAST PART p43 - Page 18

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

🤣 so true...Sandeep bas aik bar bol de kisa khatam ho🤣🤣🤣

bohat chalaak hai... ishi liya tu nahi kahta...... luchaaaaaaaaaaa🤣
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer


Thanx...I'm glad u liked it😳😃
Arre pravina is back sweetie, she's not going away in my story par kya karon, maine socha todhi dair usey bhi aram karwa don, phir jo pravin ko bohut sara pyaar karna hai😳
aur tumhara kya dil hai bechari ki atma ko sara din kya ghar mein hi chakar lagwati rehti kya??😆

Yay! Love guru ne meri duaae sunli!!!😆 Thank oo love guru!😉 aur aapka preview mujhe daraa raga hai yaar... I hope I dont faint off and dissapear!😆 Pretty sure that wont happen lekin aapka koi bharosa nahi hai Iqa di!!😳 😆 Just joking.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer


kyon usme kya kharabi hai???

Iqa main bataun kya kharaabi hai..

Well usmein kharaabi hai that u wrote such beautifully and lively that now we are forced to think what if Hats Off Production house reads ur fanfic and ask u to write their serial then you wont have time to finish this fan fic na… 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: uru_hershey

Yay! Love guru ne meri duaae sunli!!!😆 Thank oo love guru!😉 aur aapka preview mujhe daraa raga hai yaar... I hope I dont faint off and dissapear!😆 Pretty sure that wont happen lekin aapka koi bharosa nahi hai Iqa di!!😳 😆 Just joking.


haan kyonki love guru bhi toh yehi chahti hai😉
Arre arre daro mat meri ladu, kuch nahi aisa, bas tum padhti jao😳😉😆
Well while writing next part mere stomach mein butterfiles udh rahi hain😳 toh pata nahi tumhara kya haal hoga?😆😆😉
Well aj toh mujhe khud par nahi bharosa😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: gaurifan

Iqa main bataun kya kharaabi hai..

Well usmein kharaabi hai that u wrote such beautifully and lively that now we are forced to think what if Hats Off Production house reads ur fanfic and ask u to write their serial then you wont have time to finish this fan fic na… 😆


😳..AWwww..I'm flattered...
arre dont worry agar serial likhne ki offer bhi ayi na, toh main sabse pehle yeh FF likhongi phir serial😳😳😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer


😳..AWwww..I'm flattered...
arre dont worry agar serial likhne ki offer bhi ayi na, toh main sabse pehle yeh FF likhongi phir serial😳😳😃

good u better not to think to leave the FF in middle warna... 😆😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: gaurifan

good u better not to think to leave the FF in middle warna... 😆😆😆


Meri shamat ayi hai kya???😉
and dont go, next part on its way😃😃😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer


Meri shamat ayi hai kya???😉
and dont go, next part on its way😃😃😃

hehehehe jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiii karoo 6 baje hamara office close ho jayega

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Posted: 17 years ago
...:::TERA MERA RISHTA:::...
Part 6

Pravin gets shocked remembering about last night, his heart was convinced that pravina was with him last night but his mind was not convinced. He remembers each and every word and every moment of last night. He thinks how this is possible, but still was sure that pravina was there. Pravin was sure that now pravina was back with him, even death can not separate them. Pravin looks around and finds children sleeping peacefully like sleeping in mother's lap, pravin the notices that chaitali is wearing the pendent which pravina was wearing now he was sure that pravina was back, she did come. Now he doesn't want to understand anything but this that pravina is with them always, death cannot separate them. He smiles, when sun falls on his face again and then he gets up to do curtains when he remembers.



Flashback

Pravin is sleeping when sun rays fall on his face. Pravin getting irritated: pravina please parde age kardo dhoop arahi hai.

Pravina was sitting in front of her dressing table and combing her hairs.

Pravina: dhoop esi liye padh rahi hai kyonki subah hogayi hai, ab uth jao.

Pravin: uho uth jata hon parde toh agey karo.

Pravina turning around facing pravin: parde tumhare pichein hain haath maro aur kardo agay.

Pravin gets irritated: oho sune do na.

Pravina then gets up and holds a jug full of water which was on the side table.

Pravina with devilish smile on her lips: pravin akhri bar keh rahi hon uth jao warna….

Pravin doesn't pay attention and continues to sleep.

Pravina: Pravinnnnnn

And before even pravin could open his eyes to see anything pravina throws the water on pravin, basically empties the jug.

Pravin gets up jerking he's breathing heavily and tries to say something but words aren't coming out of his mouth. While seeing in this condition pravina couldn't control and laughs hysterical. Finally pravin speaks.

Pravin: yeh kya kiya tumne?

Pravina still laughing: arre akbse keh rahi hon uth jao, par tum nahi uth rahe thay toh maine…

Pravin gets really angry.

Pravin shouts: toh yeh kya tarika hua?

Pravina stops laughing and gets scared. Pravin gets up and stands up front of pravina, pravina gets sacred and lower her eyes. Pravin could feel that pravina is scared. Pravina still standing lowered her eyes, pravin sees her like this and his all anger transform into love.

Pravin thinking "uuff yeh mujhe kya hojata hai mujhe? Kyon main esko aise nahi dekh pata?"

Pravin moves forward while pravina move back pravin then moves forward and before pravina could move pravin holds her from arm.

Pravin: kya howa dar gayi?

Pravina nods but her eyes still lowers, pravin holder her face and make her look at him, pravina slowoly looks at him. Pravin smiles.

Pravin: I'm sorry, please tum muskrado na, main tumhe aise nahi dekh sakta.

Pravina doesn't smile.

Pravin: plzzz and pravin make a puppy face and pravina smiles and then laughs, pravin moves his hand forward for taali and pravina gives him taali and both laugh.

Flashback Ends


Pravin smiles remembering he sees pravina's picture look at that for long time. Pravin then slowly wakes children up. They all get up when chaitali sees pendent and asks pravin about it, pravin says that pravina gave it to her, chaitali gets confuse when pravin changes the topic. He asks them to get ready for breakfast.


At breakfast table

Dimple and meenakshi are making breakfast and leela is giving breakfast to everyone, when pravin+kids come and sit. All are quite when gattu talks to them. But pravin+kids don't speak much. Dimple comes and give pravin a paratha with daal and goes. When pravin sees this gets irritated.

Pravin: Pravinaaaa….Pravina kitni bar kaha hai ke mujhe paratha achar ke saath khana hai. Phirse bhool gayi na bhulakadh.

Everyone stops where they were and looks at pravin shockingly. When pravin gets confuse why everyone is looking at him, when he realises his mistake, his eyes fills with tears he could not stand everyone staring at him, so he gets up and leaves from there leaving everyone shock.

The End

Written by: love guru aka ika😳😉


Edited by Day_Dreamer - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer


Meri shamat ayi hai kya???😉
and dont go, next part on its way😃😃😃

if u get an offer take it..... write 2 stores, some for us n some for them 😆

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