*Tera Mera Rishta* LAST PART p43 - Page 15

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer


bas thoda sara, its on its way😳

okay ika .. do it soon..😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: gaurifan

okay ika .. do it soon..😊


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Posted: 17 years ago
waitinngg 4 ur nextt partt..kab post karo gi?
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Posted: 17 years ago

...:::TERA MERA RISHTA:::...

Part 5

Pravin and pravina are sitting on jhula holding hands, pravina'a head is resting on pravin's shoulder. Both are smiling remembering those moments and both had tears in their eyes.

Pravin: maine socha tha ke es sapne ko hum log apni wedding anniversary par pura kareinge, lekin dekho kya hogaya.

Pravina trying to hold her tears.

Pravnia: pravin, humara sapna toh pura na hosaka par mujhe aisa lagta hai ke meenakshi ka hone wala bacha hi humara bacha hai.

Pravina looks at him sees tears in his eyes; she slowly wipes off the tears.

Pravina: tumhe neend ayi hain na pravin?

Pravin nods as YES like a little kid.

Pravina: Chalo main tumhe achi si neend sula deti hon.

Pravin: nahi mujhe nahi sona mujhe tumhare saath hi rehna hai.

Pravina: toh main yahin hon na tumhare pass, nahi jaongi kahin nahi ok yahin hon chalo thodi dair araam kar lo.

Pravina makes a really cute puppy face which pravin could not resist and agrees.

Pravin: pehle vada karo tum mujhe chod kar naho joagi. Tum mere pass rahogi.

Pravina: main humesha tumhare pass rahongi, jab bhi meri yaad aye ankhein band karke mujhe yaad karna main hazir hoinjayongi. Main tumhare aass pass rahongi. Background song: Aass pass (atif and hadiqa's)

Pravina holds pravin's hand and lead him towards their room, pravina once again forgets all world he was under the spell bond of pravina's love. Both slowly go to their room. Pravina sees kids sleeping their eyes were red coz of crying pravina feels sad seeing their conditions. Pravina goes to them and kisses their foreheads.

Pravin lay down on bed and pravina sits next to him, pravin put his head in her lap and hugs her tightly from her tummy. Pravina gently run her fingers through pravin's hairs and crease them, pravin feels like in heaven and then gently kisses pravina's tummy, and she gets shy. Pravin looks at her and smile a little and pravina continues to run her fingers through his thick hairs. While pravin crease her back, she gets shy. Both feel like in heaven. Background music Jo Tu Akhiyon Ke Samne

Aaaaaa Aaaaa Aaaa Aaaaaa Aaaaa Aaaa

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Karwat badlon main tere inteizaar mein

Karwat badlon main tere inteizaar mein

Karwat badlon main tere inteizaar mein

Jindari yeh jindhari Jindari yeh jindhari hui hai behaal ve

Jo tu haal ko mere nahi samajhna

Haye..Jo tu haal ko mere nahi samajhna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Jo tu akhiyon ke samne nahi rehna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Sajde kiye hain ji maine tere naam ke

Sajde kiye hain ji maine tere naam ke

Sajde kiye hain ji maine tere naam ke

Aj samne hai tu aj samne hai tu apna bana le

Jo tu mujhe tera apna nahi kehna

Haye…Jo tu mujhe tera apna nahi kehna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Jo tu mujhe tera apna nahi kehna

Jo tu mujhe tera apna nahi kehna

Toh biba mera dil modh de

Both seems to forget the reality, totally lost in each others eyes.

After pravina's so much effort and convincing that she'll not leave pravin finally sleeps. Pravina looks at him and sees him sleeping peacefully like a small kid, she smiles and kisses his forehead. He was holding pravina very tightly and close to him like a little kid holds his fav toy. She carefully lays pravin on bed in right position, he was holding her very tight, but pravina managed to release herself. She then kisses on his forehead and his eyes.

Pravina: Abhi mujhe jana hoga, par main humesha tumhare pass, tumhare saath rahongi, jab bhi bolayoge mujhr apne pass paoge, bhale hum do alag alag duniya mein rahein phir bhi juda nahi honge.

She carefully gets up from bed whitout waking any of them up, she goes to her children give them love and she then takes her pendent off and makes chiatali wear it she then kisses their foreheads whisphers "goodnight" in thier ears. Then covers them with blanket then goes towards the door, turns around and give pravin a flying kiss. A light comes from behind and a sec later pravina is gone.

Next morning sun is out shining through brought a new morning but nothing is same in Thakkar family, this morning was not the same old one. Everything was quiet no usual hungama was going on. No where could be heard Pravina's voice.

Soumil gets up but doesn't find M, M and C, so he goes to baa and asks that M,M&C could not be find. When gattu comes and tells them that they are sleeping with pravin and his room. Gatu says that he'll wake them up, baa says no let them sleep this is 1st time afrer pravin'a died they slept, so let them sleep.

PRAVIN'S ROOM

Sun struck through windows and sun ray's falls on pravin's face, pravin could feel sun's rays on his face. Pravin is his sleeping tone: "Arre Pravina parde band kardo dhoop arahi hai" "Pravina kahan ho?". He then opens his eyes and sits up to do himself when realises that pravina is no more with him. He looks at her pic whne suddenly remembers about his last night he remembers each and every word of moment from last night. he gets shocke remembering last night.

The End

Written by: DD

So guyzz did u like it???

Coming up:

A cruel game of fate and destiny has began. A war between fate and true love begins. A game which fate started, has started to turn. Everything starts to change.

Pravin: Pravina wapis agayi hai, pravina mere pass hai.

Call for True love

Pravin: pravinaa ajao na, PRAVINAAA

Unacceptable truth

Dimple: Pravina kaki mar chuki hain, aur ab hume yeh man lena chahiye, ke woh wapis kabhi nahi ayeinge.

Unfaded Memories

Pravin is holding jug and says: Pravinnn akhri bar keh rahi hon.

Pravin puts his hand on his face and says: nahiii

So be prepared for the game between love and fate.

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey ikaa!! gooooood one... veryyyyy beautiful scene... :) worth the wait.
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Posted: 17 years ago
soo cuttee!!!!! 😳 😳 😳 veryy vryy well written..i enjoyed it alott.. 👏 rockk on!! 😃 luved the part where pravina tries to make pravin go 2 sleep.. 😳
wonder what will happen nextt... 😕 will wait 4 ur next prt!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pinstripedshirt

hey ikaa!! gooooood one... veryyyyy beautiful scene... :) worth the wait.

sww thanx for liking it😃I'm glad u liked it, next part will be up soon😃

I konw, esi liye kehti hon wait karo😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy_lil_gurl

soo cuttee!!!!! 😳 😳 😳 veryy vryy well written..i enjoyed it alott.. 👏 rockk on!! 😃 luved the part where pravina tries to make pravin go 2 sleep.. 😳
wonder what will happen nextt... 😕 will wait 4 ur next prt!

Thanx..I'm glad u enjoyed it😃..me too loved that part😳

Do wait for next part😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
😲 That part was sooo cute... just like the last one... So Emotional...
But the ending was sooo shocking... For some reason I accepted the fact that Praveena was actually back and she was actually spending time with pravin.
But the night part was well written... 👏
Good job Iqa di!!!.... 👏
The coming up preview is sooo awesome too... Soo suspenceful...
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

...:::TERA MERA RISHTA:::...

Part 5

Heyy Iqa first i m sorry yaar.. for not waiting for the part yesterday as i was in office and i was getting late for the home.. but i must say wait was worthy and it was really really beautiful part and ur choice of songs is more beautiful.. please give a link of the songs too everytime.. 😊

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