||~AvRaj SS: Yaarian~||Part 2 Updated on Page 7 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
RES! 4 now...wil unres wid my comment...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Great start Jas
loved it
do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: McSteamy

Ab hum apki sari res ki kasar nikal denge idhar. yoyo19 hehehe coming towards the update. ab main kya batau meri jdi ne likhe hai toh acha toh hona hi hai...ye bhi bhala koi puchne ki baat hui? The story is awesome so far... can't wait for next.


PS: TIP:Never underestimate yourself.



hahaha...manu Love u for these lovely monkey emoticons 🤗

Glad u like my Work.😃

Ahaa ..Jdi ne likh to achha hai...kya baat 😉😆

Okie Ur Tip i will alwayzz keep in Mind

Will update soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: krupaa

Good start Jas 👏

looking forward to it. 😊



Thanku Krupaa 🤗

Glad U liked it 😃

will update soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Princyz_Belle


🤣 haan..ab har jagah mein Bittu se bhi late aati hoon...

U deserve it Jas...it'll more soon..aur koi na aye toh hum hi isse 100 pages bana denge..no probs..😉😆

Hihihi...serials hum pe kuch zayada hi effect karta hain...but really it was awesome.bohot accha laga par ke.

Waiting to see Suket shocks...😆

n yeah Gujju_Punjabi fights r always best ones..these days i'm loving South-North fights too from YHM...😆

haan..wait hi kar rahi hoon..iss ke elawa koi rasta bhi toh nahi.


hahaha...100 pages ar very far abhi tak 😆
sUKET SHOCK N ROCK bOTH
hahah YHM and 2 states effect on U 😉

will updat next part soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: tina_sre

RES! 4 now...wil unres wid my comment...



Di abhi Unress kardo puleezzz😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ruby794

Great start Jas

loved it
do continue



thnku Ruby 🤗

glad u liked it 😃

will update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShivinkiJas

Hello Guyzz
Here I m presenting new SS on AVrAJ. Its diif. from Original story and Lead names are taken from Serial and few More characters as Introduced as story progresses. It is inspired from a punjabi Movie. Hope u all Guyzz Lyk My effort.


Part 1:

Scene1:
Boyzz Hostel

It was beautiful Morning In the hostel premises Of one of the prestigious colleges of chandigarh. All were getting ready to go to college some doing Jogging and exercise . A person from canteen came and went door to door serve Tea to everyone. It was his daily routine But Boyzz usually Tease Him. But One person who supports him and never play pranks on him. That canteen man name was hari.
hari collided with a boy who just came from jogging. Hari trembled once and then said Raj its U i got scared. Yes it was Raj the heartthrob of college who recently joined college and and have good friendship witha common person hari in hostel inspite being from a rich family.
Raj: Oh Ho hari main Hi hoon bHoot nahi jo darr gaya.
Hari: Oh nahi raj babu mujhe lagg woh sabh aa gayye jo pura din mujhe tang karte hain.
Raj: are woh to aise hi tumse mazaak karte hain. But u sing very well hari lagta hai ashiq the kabhi. raj winked
hari gave Raj tea and left from there. Raj went behind him that he forgot he dun wnat tea as he drink Coffee Only.

Raj back in His room. He was getting ready .Just then somebody knowcked on His Room door.
raj: Come In
rohit : abhe Kitna tym laggeyaga Tyara hone mein Today is first day of College after vaccation and U know wt Life was so boring wihtout girls.
Raj: Beta ladkiyon ke pichee kahin pehle hi jutte mat khaana. Sri ganesh Ho jayega pehle hi din.
Rohit : tere se Baat karna hI bekaar hai. Koi Baat nahi Tumahri waali Bhi aayi Hogi.
Raj: meri waali kaunsi Mujhe bhi bata de mujhe To aaj Tak ni pata Chala. Apne jaisa samjh rakha hai kya.
Rohit : koi na bachha hamare jaise nahi ho to bahut jaldi ban jaooge. Yeh isHq hai hi aisi balah Jisko lagg jayega kam ka ni rehta. aur shart lagga le Beta humse pehle batti teri hi fuse hoyegi.
Raj: koi na dekhenge. Chal bike nikal kitne din ho gayee Ek Ride ni Li. College jaane se pehel Ek ride Ho jaye.


Wow! Jas I am loving it...Raj is a heartthrob and a very kind guy...jis thara se woh Hari ke help karta hai I really lyk dat...saach me yaar Raj show me ho ya FF me kabhi galat nahi ho sakta...he'z everybody'z sweetheart...Oh ho...aus ka dost kafi badmas laraha hai😆 luved d dialogues between em...pehle batti teri he fuse hoyegi🤣 loved dat😃

Scene2:
Aggarwals House

aree Mera Dhikro Uth na. Dekh Subah ho agyyi. Utha ja mera Dhikra. MAIN TERE liye nashte mein Dhokla banati.
Voice came: Mom let me sleep and plzz dun give ur Gujrati dose in morning tym.It irritates me.
aree Avni dheekra Tu college ke liye late ho jayegi. Aaraa mujhe kitchem mein Itne kaam.
Yes it was Avni whow as still sleeping. Actually her father is Punjabi and her mother is gujarati. and she dun know Much Punjabi and know mixed gujju hindi.
Avni: Mumma aap itna torture dete ho ..aapa hindi mein baat kar sakte ho to kyun nahi karte. Papa ne kaise aap shaadi ki pata ni.
Suket agarwal(Avni's dad): Beta kya bataoon tumhari iss gujratan maa ne mujhe impress kar diya aur main dil de baitha. Mujhe kya pata tha yeh saari upar mujhe dhikla fafra hi khilayegi.
Both Avni and his dad has Heartly laugh.
Avni came downstairs after getting Ready and hv breakfast with parents. She was also first year student in Raj's college. Raj has Secret crush On her But he never Told anybody.
Avni left For College after vacation Too.
Bhavna(Avni Mom): Waving her byee and said ladkiyan kitni jaldi badi ho jatti abhi is ke liye humein koi dheekra dhoodna padhega.
Suket: She is COLONEL Suket agrawal's daughter. Ladke to apne aap ayenge shaadi ke liye But abhi meri beti ke enjoy karne ke din hai aur Woh sirf apne dad ki marzi ke ladke ke satah shaadi karegi Itni jaldi bhi kya hai.
Both agree on dis and got busy in their chores.

OMG! Diz hilarious...mixture of punjabi and gujrati ...Avni Dikra

😆 bechari Avni...Bhavana giving tough tym to Suket bapre jo ke ek colonel hai...aaree yeh kaisa hua...yeh sab sirf tum sooch sakti hoo Jas...u completely changed d track...

Mind blowing yaar...u just rocked it gal...plez. jaldi se update karo...super duper excited to know wat wil happen next...Plez. Avraj pe zaayada se zaayada focus karna...Show me na sahi tumare FF se he maan ke tasali miljayege😊






Precap: Avni and her friends had fight with Raj and his friends...

Aaree, yeh kaya milte he fight


Hope U lyk My Story . Do Lyk and comment if u find it interesting.

Simply loved it ❤️❤️❤️


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Posted: 11 years ago
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. i enjoyed reading this part..suket is very cool in this ss...here is also raj is having crush..bhavna was very funny..😛



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanku Tina di for superb Comment 🤗

gald u lyked it and dialogues i m not god at .Bas jo dimaag meina ayea jst wrote that. U liked my dialogies. Thanku 😃
Edited by ShivinkiJas - 11 years ago

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