||~AvRaj SS: Yaarian~||Part 2 Updated on Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello Guyzz
Here I m presenting new SS on AVrAJ. Its diif. from Original story and Lead names are taken from Serial and few More characters as Introduced as story progresses. It is inspired from a punjabi Movie. Hope u all Guyzz Lyk My effort.


Part 1:

Scene1:
Boyzz Hostel

It was beautiful Morning In the hostel premises Of one of the prestigious colleges of chandigarh. All were getting ready to go to college some doing Jogging and exercise . A person from canteen came and went door to door serve Tea to everyone. It was his daily routine But Boyzz usually Tease Him. But One person who supports him and never play pranks on him. That canteen man name was hari.
hari collided with a boy who just came from jogging. Hari trembled once and then said Raj its U i got scared. Yes it was Raj the heartthrob of college who recently joined college and and have good friendship witha common person hari in hostel inspite being from a rich family.
Raj: Oh Ho hari main Hi hoon bHoot nahi jo darr gaya.
Hari: Oh nahi raj babu mujhe lagg woh sabh aa gayye jo pura din mujhe tang karte hain.
Raj: are woh to aise hi tumse mazaak karte hain. But u sing very well hari lagta hai ashiq the kabhi. raj winked
hari gave Raj tea and left from there. Raj went behind him that he forgot he dun wnat tea as he drink Coffee Only.
Raj back in His room. He was getting ready .Just then somebody knowcked on His Room door.
raj: Come In
rohit : abhe Kitna tym laggeyaga Tyara hone mein Today is first day of College after vaccation and U know wt Life was so boring wihtout girls.
Raj: Beta ladkiyon ke pichee kahin pehle hi jutte mat khaana. Sri ganesh Ho jayega pehle hi din.
Rohit : tere se Baat karna hI bekaar hai. Koi Baat nahi Tumahri waali Bhi aayi Hogi.
Raj: meri waali kaunsi Mujhe bhi bata de mujhe To aaj Tak ni pata Chala. Apne jaisa samjh rakha hai kya.
Rohit : koi na bachha hamare jaise nahi ho to bahut jaldi ban jaooge. Yeh isHq hai hi aisi balah Jisko lagg jayega kam ka ni rehta. aur shart lagga le Beta humse pehle batti teri hi fuse hoyegi.
Raj: koi na dekhenge. Chal bike nikal kitne din ho gayee Ek Ride ni Li. College jaane se pehel Ek ride Ho jaye.


Scene2:
Aggarwals House

aree Mera Dhikro Uth na. Dekh Subah ho agyyi. Utha ja mera Dhikra. MAIN TERE liye nashte mein Dhokla banati.
Voice came: Mom let me sleep and plzz dun give ur Gujrati dose in morning tym.It irritates me.
aree Avni dheekra Tu college ke liye late ho jayegi. Aaraa mujhe kitchem mein Itne kaam.
Yes it was Avni whow as still sleeping. Actually her father is Punjabi and her mother is gujarati. and she dun know Much Punjabi and know mixed gujju hindi.
Avni: Mumma aap itna torture dete ho ..aapa hindi mein baat kar sakte ho to kyun nahi karte. Papa ne kaise aap shaadi ki pata ni.
Suket agarwal(Avni's dad): Beta kya bataoon tumhari iss gujratan maa ne mujhe impress kar diya aur main dil de baitha. Mujhe kya pata tha yeh saari upar mujhe dhikla fafra hi khilayegi.
Both Avni and his dad has Heartly laugh.
Avni came downstairs after getting Ready and hv breakfast with parents. She was also first year student in Raj's college. Raj has Secret crush On her But he never Told anybody.
Avni left For College after vacation Too.
Bhavna(Avni Mom): Waving her byee and said ladkiyan kitni jaldi badi ho jatti abhi is ke liye humein koi dheekra dhoodna padhega.
Suket: She is COLONEL Suket agrawal's daughter. Ladke to apne aap ayenge shaadi ke liye But abhi meri beti ke enjoy karne ke din hai aur Woh sirf apne dad ki marzi ke ladke ke satah shaadi karegi Itni jaldi bhi kya hai.
Both agree on dis and got busy in their chores.


Precap: Avni and her friends had fight with Raj and his friends .

Hope U lyk My Story . Do Lyk and comment if u find it interesting.


Edited by ShivinkiJas - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ab hum apki sari res ki kasar nikal denge idhar. yoyo19 hehehe coming towards the update. ab main kya batau meri jdi ne likhe hai toh acha toh hona hi hai...ye bhi bhala koi puchne ki baat hui? The story is awesome so far... can't wait for next.

PS: TIP:Never underestimate yourself.
Edited by McSteamy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful Start Jas you finally wrote SS on Avraj
Raj and his friend convo was funny
Avni and her dad bonding is nice in the show Suket is hitler but in here he is nice
Looking forward to see AvRaj first meeting
Cont Soon
Edited by Anam Ali - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kedi movie da plot chak leya jas ji...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Navi.Brar-

kedi movie da plot chak leya jas ji...



aape hi pehchan lao... tuhanu pata hona chahida...😆

But i changed a lot ... so try hard to guess it 👍🏼

and I u get it ..dun reveal it ... 😳
Edited by ShivinkiJas - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShivinkiJas



aape hi pehchan lao... tuhanu pata hona chahida...😆

But i changed a lot ... so try hard to guess it 👍🏼

and I u get it ..dun reveal it ... 😳

hmm yan tan Yaar anmully aa te yan young mallang aa baki pta ni tusi dass deyo...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good start Jas 👏
looking forward to it. 😊
Edited by krupaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Jas a perfect beginning.. loved it..😳 btw ye Rohit naam mere FF se liya hai kya? 😆Lol.. he is a suspense hero in my FF.. lol..😎 //dont want to spill beans here 😆// anyway.. looking forward for next update! Great job!👍🏼

Yours,
//SammyExpress!!
Edited by Sammy11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I just luv it..conti ASAP...n ha!! Pls PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely beginning... Continue soon! Thanks for the PM! Take care. 😳

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