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Posted: 11 months ago
#61

No, no - Don't call it your last rant...as I'm really loving this longgggg rants of yours, let them come & reach us as freely as possible....because, yours rantings are mirroring almost all of our true feelings regarding this show, jiska bhoot 12 saal mein bhi hamara pichha hi nahi chod rahi hai

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Posted: 11 months ago
#62

Originally posted by: naaheean

No, no - Don't call it your last rant...as I'm really loving this longgggg rants of yours, let them come & reach us as freely as possible....because, yours rantings are mirroring almost all of our true feelings regarding this show, jiska bhoot 12 saal mein bhi hamara pichha hi nahi chod rahi hai

Ikr I'm so glad she's here. I love how she has so much to say. And ofcourse her usernames ❤️❤️

Darn it she's not on my buddy list. Hoping she gets the message

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Also you guys were talking about her being a writer.

Is there a index thread or something?

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Originally posted by: naaheean

No, no - Don't call it your last rant...as I'm really loving this longgggg rants of yours, let them come & reach us as freely as possible....because, yours rantings are mirroring almost all of our true feelings regarding this show, jiska bhoot 12 saal mein bhi hamara pichha hi nahi chod rahi hai

he he thenks. I always have so much to say about these itv shows that's the reason I had joined IF long back and still part of even after so much moderator issues.

The main thing is how incomplete the show was. Like it was sudden how Riya died and then after 5 mins everyone forgot. And I still can't watch that epi though, it's just heartbreaking. And I understand for whatever reason actress couldn't continue, but in my head I still feel Riya will come.back and sit in office but still part of ETF. And like some ff shows shree will forget about Riya or Aisha sakshi Liza will be jealous about her i don't think it's true. They all will be friends cause Riya and other women is such, and seeing sakshi will be like seeing Riya cause Riya was also as transparent as her, and when Arjun gets angry it's also like Riya. I do think these two ladies will have their different bonding sharing pain, and maybe Riya is the person who has an idea not everything is sunshine rainbow behind sakshis smile. But yeah shree ignoring Riya makes good angst🤣🤣😅

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Originally posted by: RiyaA123

I have so much to say about this rant. And I'll deffo contribute. But I gotta go to office tomorrow so I'm gonna share a story here. And I'll come back to get somethings off my chest too❤️

First off, there was this story where the writer gave Chotu a backstory too. Like he had an drunk father who was abusive and corrupt constable maybe and Chotu decided to become a police officer to 1. Get a clean slate as an honest officer to get respect for his mother. And 2. Get his father punishment (later revealed he was framed or something). His mother ran lunch/tiffin service and she even cooked for the three (Choreeya) friends. He also got a newly joined forensic assistant at ETF as his love interest in another story. His hard exterior, soft heart was explored beautifully.

I was Wattpad reader too. And again bad memory alert so if this is sorta taken idea or something I mixed in my head. Apologies in advance.

So the story went like this. Riya dies in Xora as per show but no Prachand baba case so ETF is still alive. Anyhoo, the team finds out about some human experiments and they file out to a remote location. In one of those soundproof, white electronic rooms, Riya's bound on a stretcher. She was being experimented because somehow she was one of two survivors of Xora. The team raids and Shree hacks into the mainframe which frees Riya too and somehow she gets out of the room and flee. In one of those sequence she crashes into Arjun. There's a whole song thing and then shouts break out and Riya runs away thinking she imagined everything due to drugs while Arjun feels it was one of his delusions.

Fast forward Riya goes into a secret agent program (I don't remember the name). Turns out she was found by the director who considered her as his daughter. Recruits and trains her. But in one of the mission she loses her team and fiance (I think the name was Raj) and had to go for therapy. And then she went Missing.

The therapist was basically a psychopath himself who hated women especially who he thought were cheaters or sl*ts. And when Riya confesses she loved Arjun but agreed to marry the guy because he was good to her and loved her, the therapist kidnapped her and took her to his island where he sold women and kept them as slaves of the vulger kind. Anyways it was a dark story but somehow Riya emerged as a femme fatale. It was incomplete tho. And I was so intrigued because the Arjun in the story admitted he felt something for Riya and that he would've explored those feelings if she was alive. There was angst and pain and such Dark themes. I wish I could read it again .

It was on Wattpad maybe but I couldn't find it again. So when that story came to me, I thought if readers were allowed maybe they could collaborate to complete such stories and dedicate to writers since I think lack of time or writer's block was the most common reason for hiatus and incomplete stories.

lol chotus dad as police but disgraced then him finding out he was clean was part of my story love by chance (i guess??) but his mom didn't have tiffin system thing. I guess it's a common trope and its very interesting backstory for chotu. He wasn't abusive in my story and his dad and sameers dad was together in some work where Sam's dad died chotus dad was framed.

If you haven't watch this show called arrow - in there too we have a charge guy but he has a military background and he's as much part as show as main guy. I wish they had showed same to chotu, i have no issue with trio being fun but you can have fun with strength. nd chotu did have this baal khula to matlab Banda gya side of anger that would have been interesting to watch



Riya wala story sounds familiar but iirc it's like Riya don't remember things and she has a friend/fiance and she feels it's not right. Then she leaves ETF cause that guy turns out villain and she's ashamed to pick such a man and is like how can I beyray Arjun. Ye xora wala story sounds fascinating iska link please lol if you can find. And Riya was under some influence of xora under some terrorist/human trafficking program and ETF rescues her this story also I read somewhere lol



In Wattpad idk if we have liked story that might come in your feed or your profile not sure though

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Posted: 11 months ago
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Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

he he thenks. I always have so much to say about these itv shows that's the reason I had joined IF long back and still part of even after so much moderator issues.

The main thing is how incomplete the show was. Like it was sudden how Riya died and then after 5 mins everyone forgot. And I still can't watch that epi though, it's just heartbreaking. And I understand for whatever reason actress couldn't continue, but in my head I still feel Riya will come.back and sit in office but still part of ETF. And like some ff shows shree will forget about Riya or Aisha sakshi Liza will be jealous about her i don't think it's true. They all will be friends cause Riya and other women is such, and seeing sakshi will be like seeing Riya cause Riya was also as transparent as her, and when Arjun gets angry it's also like Riya. I do think these two ladies will have their different bonding sharing pain, and maybe Riya is the person who has an idea not everything is sunshine rainbow behind sakshis smile. But yeah shree ignoring Riya makes good angst🤣🤣😅

Exactly, uss episode ke unn 5 minute ke scene dekh ke, I think, jisne show kabhi dekha bhi nahi hoga woh bhi agar iss era mein yeh show dekha toh usse bhi aisa hi feel hoga ki jis tarikey se Riya ka the end dikhaya gaya, uss hisab se toh uss ke kuch mahine baad hi sahi, bhale hi as on field officer na sahi, ya kisi aur situation ya characterization mein hi sahi par wapas lautne ne chances kam hone ke bajay aur bhi badh chuki hai. And, yes, agar usse wapas laya bhi gaya hota toh bhi baki ki female members ke saath bhi Riya ki bonding achhi dikhayi jaa sakti thi, since usski nature hi waisi thi ki sabko ek saath ek dhaagey mein bandhke rakh saake, phir chahe woh Sakshi hi kyun na ho.

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Posted: 11 months ago
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2. https://www.wattpad.com/story/246541449?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Naheean02


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4. https://www.wattpad.com/story/259483864?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Naheean02


5. https://www.wattpad.com/story/159952506?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Naheean02


6. https://www.wattpad.com/story/155816579?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Naheean02


7. https://www.wattpad.com/story/214454249?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Naheean02


8.https://www.wattpad.com/story/140676261?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Naheean02


9. https://www.wattpad.com/story/152645136?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Naheean02


10. https://www.wattpad.com/story/110953206?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_list_details&wp_uname=Naheean02


11. https://www.wattpad.com/story/93503031?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_list_details&wp_uname=Naheean02


12. https://www.wattpad.com/story/107412827?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_list_details&wp_uname=Naheean02


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26. https://www.wattpad.com/story/360263300?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Naheean02


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30. https://www.wattpad.com/story/104404185?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_list_details&wp_uname=Naheean02


31. https://www.wattpad.com/story/140958300?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_list_details&wp_uname=Naheean02


32. https://www.wattpad.com/story/351655658?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_list_details&wp_uname=Naheean02


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Ye rahe kuch wattpad stories jo maine abhi tak padhe hai aur inn mein se maximum stories forum mein hi start hui thi pehle aur kuch abhi ongoing hai toh kuch abhi bhi incomplete hi hai forum mein bhi aur wattpad mein bhi.

P.S - @Phir_Mohabbat, sorry maine iss mein bhi aapke stories daale, but please, don't deactivate your wattpad account due to your shyness...🙈

Edited by naaheean - 11 months ago
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Posted: 11 months ago
#68

Originally posted by: RiyaA123

There was another story of Ariya.

One was electrons cannot be friends. I don't know if it's completed or still incomplete.

Also there was one, where Riya was in another team after Xora. NCIS maybe. She became a ruthless leader there and ETF had to work with them for a case and they met her there. Which shocked them. I just remember Riya was so badass there.

If this rings a bell. Do share. Also if you happen to come across a story where Riya changed and became all cold and Arjun-like. And Arjun realize that he's attracted to that and he is the one who goes all up in her space. It would be best.

@Bold - Mujhe jitna yaad hai, iss theme pe at least 3, or, more than 3 stories hone ke chances hai, mujhe filhal 2 story ke barein mein yaad aaya hai - unn mein se ek tha "Kismat", jo ki bohot pehle hi delete kar diya hai writer ne. Dusra hai "Zid Tere Pyar Ki".

1. Kismat

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/5038182/ariya-ff-kismat-deleted

2. Zid Tere Pyar Ki Thread 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4592195/ariya-ss-zid-tere-pyar-ki-part-11-on-page-34-14-11


Zid Tere Pyar Ki Thread 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4795710/t2-ariya-ss-jid-tere-pyar-ki-part-33-on-page-103-15-4-2017


Zid Tere Pyar Ki Thread 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4835257/t3-jid-tere-pyar-ki-last-part-on-page-52-6-8-2020

Edited by naaheean - 11 months ago
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Posted: 11 months ago
#69

They have to delete my Wattpad account from my cold dead hands smiley36


IF ka koi bharosa nhi pange hote rehte hai mods se. Use pehle sare ffs ko save krke dal dungi Wattpad pe 🤣🤣

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Posted: 11 months ago
#70

Oh Yes

Same. Wattpad has been my saving grace for a while. Or I would've been ultra depressed by the real life. It's Wattpad MMC and FMC that makes me still happy. At least they have their happy endings.

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