Originally posted by: RiyaA123
I have so much to say about this rant. And I'll deffo contribute. But I gotta go to office tomorrow so I'm gonna share a story here. And I'll come back to get somethings off my chest too❤️
First off, there was this story where the writer gave Chotu a backstory too. Like he had an drunk father who was abusive and corrupt constable maybe and Chotu decided to become a police officer to 1. Get a clean slate as an honest officer to get respect for his mother. And 2. Get his father punishment (later revealed he was framed or something). His mother ran lunch/tiffin service and she even cooked for the three (Choreeya) friends. He also got a newly joined forensic assistant at ETF as his love interest in another story. His hard exterior, soft heart was explored beautifully.
I was Wattpad reader too. And again bad memory alert so if this is sorta taken idea or something I mixed in my head. Apologies in advance.
So the story went like this. Riya dies in Xora as per show but no Prachand baba case so ETF is still alive. Anyhoo, the team finds out about some human experiments and they file out to a remote location. In one of those soundproof, white electronic rooms, Riya's bound on a stretcher. She was being experimented because somehow she was one of two survivors of Xora. The team raids and Shree hacks into the mainframe which frees Riya too and somehow she gets out of the room and flee. In one of those sequence she crashes into Arjun. There's a whole song thing and then shouts break out and Riya runs away thinking she imagined everything due to drugs while Arjun feels it was one of his delusions.
Fast forward Riya goes into a secret agent program (I don't remember the name). Turns out she was found by the director who considered her as his daughter. Recruits and trains her. But in one of the mission she loses her team and fiance (I think the name was Raj) and had to go for therapy. And then she went Missing.
The therapist was basically a psychopath himself who hated women especially who he thought were cheaters or sl*ts. And when Riya confesses she loved Arjun but agreed to marry the guy because he was good to her and loved her, the therapist kidnapped her and took her to his island where he sold women and kept them as slaves of the vulger kind. Anyways it was a dark story but somehow Riya emerged as a femme fatale. It was incomplete tho. And I was so intrigued because the Arjun in the story admitted he felt something for Riya and that he would've explored those feelings if she was alive. There was angst and pain and such Dark themes. I wish I could read it again .
It was on Wattpad maybe but I couldn't find it again. So when that story came to me, I thought if readers were allowed maybe they could collaborate to complete such stories and dedicate to writers since I think lack of time or writer's block was the most common reason for hiatus and incomplete stories.
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