Arakshi - YOU & I Have that connection (NEW UPDATE ON PAGE 11)

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devikadevthosh

@devikadevthosh

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Posted: 5 years ago

#21

Nice update

So etf is going undercover as a family

Let see what will happen next

Continue soon

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Cutie2804

@Cutie2804

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Posted: 5 years ago

#22

Hii

What an update yar

Super ❤❤

Poor team hotel ke pass se hi wapas jana pada

Case is interesting

So they are going to disguise and kya couple banaye hai... Arjun and Liza, Shree and Sakshi... I can't even imagine in dream..

Poor liza kese rahegi Arjun ke sath.. And Shree and Sakshi ki chemistry dekhne mein maja ayega

Waiting for next update

Please update soon

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Khushii

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Posted: 5 years ago

#23

Wow.. New storyy..

Thanks for writing arakshi story

Thank u too Butterfly09 for posting on behalf of writer..

Arjun has no past.. New concept

Part -1 was nice.. Sakshii calling SIR..yeh tho imagine karna tho impossible haii voh serial me nahi tha tho.. It's ok

Arjun taunt abt being late..

Sakshi arjun ki Taarif kar rahi thii opps burayi kar rahi thi aur madam pakadi gayii..

Nice starting..

Thanks for pm..

Edited by Khushikeepsmile - 5 years ago

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Khushii

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Posted: 5 years ago

#24

Part-2

Nice update.. All went to Restaurent to have dinner.. But samjun called them back

They are going to undercover mission

Par yeh kya.. Saara maamla ulta..

Sakshi wth shree nd Arjun with Liza..?

Bechari Liza ka sochke bura lag raha haii..

Thanks for pm

Continue soon

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Pinky

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Posted: 5 years ago

#25

Awesome update

Sam and ayesha is a couple, sameer ka dil naach raha hoga

Arjun and lisa, bichari ko shock lag gayi

Sakshi and shree, Sakshi is already in her teasing mood

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Marathi_Mulgi

@Marathi_Mulgi

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Posted: 5 years ago

#26

Sorry for late comment

Thanks to writer for writing story on arakshi and thanks to you for sharing it

Loved start

ETF atmosphere

Sakshi imitating arjun😆

But her bad luck hot headed acp behind her

But sakshi never called samjun sir 😕

Ayesha is right sakshi never gives chance to others to talk and in her own world didn't notice ayesha ishara😆

Chhotu is right no new in arjun's sys

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Marathi_Mulgi

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Posted: 5 years ago

#27

Awesome next part

Poor team restaurant tak pohochke bhi khali pet laut Gaye but shree is right arjun sys se pet bhar dega sabka😆 and sakshi's tariff for arjun and good luck he is 2nd in command or they would be in coffin was wow👍🏼

Ayesha cutie khana bhul gayi sam k sorry sunkar lolz sakshi and chhotu giving look to each other 😆bhavnao ko samjhte hai and chhotu staring at ceiling and hawa khayenge and sys to chhotu by arjun😆

Sam ne khud ka ullu sidha kiya khud ko ayesha se pair karke but baki logo ka toh ulta ho gaya😲😆but liking it very much! Can imagine sakshi teasing shree and going to enjoy it but liza ne kya paap kiya tha😲arjun and liza! Can't even imagine 😆 but arakshi and shreeza k reaction dekhne mein maza ayega if they had developed some feelings for each other and chhotu hai hi food and more fun eliment k liye.

Such comical write up was needed that too with ETF case solving 👍🏼

Going enjoy this romcom 😃

Thanks once again 🤗

Edited by Marathi_Mulgi - 5 years ago

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Arakshi234

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Posted: 5 years ago

#28

Awesome

Etf is going undercover mission

They are as family

Sameer ayesha couple this normal

But Arjun liza ??? Uff poor liza

Sakshi chotu brother sister

shree sakshi's boyfriend

It will be interesting

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ArakshiLover

@Butterfly09

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Posted: 4 years ago

#29

Hey Buddies

Here is the next part of story!!!

PART: 3

Sakshi:- Ayesha ka matlab hey.... mangalsootra, saree, sindoor and all...

Arjun:- saree tho hogi tum logon ke paas baaki mangalsootra aur sindoor ka arrangement hum raaste mey kar lenge...

Sameer:- lets move guys...hume subhe jaldi nikalna padega....I don’t no kitne Dino tak rehna padega....So it’s better to pack your luggage....filhal ek hafte ka saman pack kar lo...

(looking at Sakshi & Lisa)

Sakshi aur Lisa.... Tum dono ka hi ghar bohot door hota hey so Arjun tum inn dono ke saath chale jaauo... inhe unke apartment mey chod Dena aur phir apne apartment chale jaana... shree ka koi problem nahi hey as uska apartment mere apartment ke nazdeek hey so I’ll drop and pickup ayesha and chotu...

Arjun:- ok Sam...Hum suv lekar jaate hein tum apni car le lo....Let’s go Sakshi and Lisa....

(he said and both girls nodded and left with him)

Ayesha:- sir mey shree ke bike per chali jaungi... Aap chotu ko lekar jaauo...

Sameer:- hmm....That’s better...chalo chotu...

(sameer and chotu left in sameer’s car where ayesha went with shree)

(In ETF Suv)

Arjun:- Sakshi Lisa...ho sake tho zyada kapde pack kar lena and all those stuff Jo married women use karti hein..

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Lisa:- sir aap tho aise bol rahe ho jaise hum logon ki shaadi huyi ho....Array atleast 3 me se kisi ek bhi shaadi huyi hoti tho kuch tho idea milta....Mana ki Ayesha ki engagement huyi hey Per uske engagement mey bhi sakshi ne help kiya tha warna madam tho gayi thi kaam se....

(He nodded his head in complete disbelief)

Arjun:- Sakshi tumhara ghar pehle milta hey so tumhe chod kar phir Lisa ko hostel chod dunga... uske baad mujhe kuch kaam hey woh khatam kar ke aaunga tab tak tum dono ready hokar rehna....

(both nodded but sakshi was silent,he drop sakshi and moved)

Lisa:- sir sakshi kuch pareshan lag rahi thi....

Arjun:- mujhe doosron ke baare mey sochne ka time nahi hey....

(he said sarcastically)

Lisa:- khadoos....(she thought & then said) ummm....Sir case jaldi solve hua tho achha hey....agle mahine chotu ki shaadi hey....

Arjun:- bekar ke cheezon per dhyan naa dekar agar case ke bare mey dhyan dogi tho jaldi solve ho jayega...

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Lisa:- (making face) kya admi hai... inse tho bath karna hi bekar hey....(she thought)

(Then Arjun's eyes fell on a fancy shop and stop the suv)

Arjun:- lisa iss fancy shop se Jo kuch bhi khareedna hey sab khareed lo…

Lisa:- per sir....

(he look at her)

Arjun:- ek bath batauo Lisa… tumhara per ke bina sentence aage nahi badta hey kya?? Jab bhi mey kuch bolta Hun...tumhara answer shuru hota hey “PER” se

(he said angrily)

Lisa:- per... (she again said that and he left without listening to her words) Hey Jesus...Yeh mujhe kahan phasa diya aap ne?? inhe yahan ek pal ke liye jhel nahi paa rahi Hun... poore undercover operation may kaise jhelungi???

Arjun:- lisa yahan baitke kya kar rahi ho? andar shop mey chalo.... (her chain of thoughts gets break by his words)

Lisa:- umm...Ha..haan sir... (she said and stepped towards shop)

(On the other side)

Ayesha:- Shree....tu ek kam kar... mujhe naa mere apartment tak chod de....mey phir apna bike leke Arjun sir ke apartment jaungi....

Shree:- per tumhari gaadi tho kharab huyi thi na..

Ayesha:- haan woh repair ho chuki hey....aur woh kya heina?? achanak sab kuch decide huva hey tho agar kuch reh gaya tho laane ke liye bike raha tho easy hoga Na...

Shree:- woh theek hey per...Rathod sir ne kuch kaha tho?

Ayesha:- don’t worry shree.....mey Ayesha Hun sakshi nahi....

Shree:- haan haan pata hey...(he said and she launched) arree per uske liye tumhari gaadi lene ki kya zaroorath hey....sakshi ke paas gaadi heina??

Ayesha:- haan shree per Arjun sir ke apartment ke liye sakshi se zyada mere ghar nazdeek hota hey tho Maine socha ki gaadi mey lelu..

Shree:- haan woh bhi sahi hey....kya bath hey madam?? Mere saath rehke bohot intelligent ho gayi ho??? Not bad...

Ayesha:- woh actually kya heina shree mey pehle isse bhi zyada intelligent thi...ab nahi rahi....You know??...

(she said with sad face and shree glare her through mirror)

Shree:- very funny... (he said sarcastically)

Ayesha:- hahaha.....

Shree:- arree haan mey tho batana hi bhool gaya Lisa ki tho chal padi yaar.... Arjun sir ki biwi???!!!!!

Ayesha:- woh tho hey...

Shree:- waise ayesha kya tum apne fiance ko iss disguise ke baare mey inform karne waali ho?

Ayesha:- i think mujhe nahi karna chahiye....Sir ne already bola hey ki yeh bohot sensitive and confidential case hey aur tum tho jaante ho ki Sagar high profile family se belong karta hey So I don’t want any issues... Mere liye case solve karna first priority hey....Case solve hone ke baad mey sagar ko bata dungi..I hope he will understand...

Shree:- hmmm

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