Ariya ff:lakeerein part 17 on pg 19 updated 22/7/2020

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Part 1

A house is decorated beautifully

One middle aged women:sakshi kahan hai tu jaldi aa

Sakshi:ma kyun chilla rahi hu mei yahi hu

It’s naina rathod:beta tumari bai behen ki shadi hai jald jauo kuch saman arrange na hai kisi ki koyi kami nahi Joni chahiye

Sakshi:ma kisi ki koyi kami nahi hogi

Dadi:are naina chinda math kar sab achi se hogi hamari sameer or roshni ki shadi jo hai

Dadaji:isliye tho naina ko chinda hai is gar ki do bachiyon ki shadi hai doom dam se hona chahiye na vaise mera beta hai kaham ab bhi vo office tho nahi gaya

Alekh:papa hum yaham hai hamari bachon ki shadi ki functione shuru horahi hai ab hum shadi ke bad hi koyi kam keliye bahar jaugi

Sakshi:mei roshni di parlor jane vala hai papa

Alekh:jald jakar ana

Sakshi:Ji dad

At ayisha’s home

Priya(ayisha’s mom)kisi bhi chees par kami nahi hona chahiye hamari ek lauthi beti ki shadi hai

Shree liza chotu where presented there

Shree:hamri besti ki shadi hai aunty koyi kami nahi hogi

Anand(ayisha’s dad he is commissioner):tum sab hai tho far kis bath ki

Abhi:(ayisha’s brother)ma didi ki shadi hum doom damse kar rahi hai mera bhi aisa hona chahiye

Priya:phele padayi teek se kar ayisha and everyone giggle

At ravute mansion

Sumitra:karan tu kahan hai

Karan:kyun chilarahi hu ma mei yahm hu

Sumitra:tu bahar jauo jaldi kuch saman lena hai

Karan:abhi gaya

Suryakant to his workers:kisi ki koyi kami nahi honi chahiye is gar ki bade bete ki shadi hai

Dadi:hamara pote ki shadi poori duniya ko patha chalugi

Suryakant:kyun nahi ma number one business man suryakant ravute ki bete ki shadi jo hai

Sumitra:are acp arjun ravute ki shadi hai vo sirf apka beta nahi acp hai

Dadi:kuch bhi hu doom dam sr hona chahiye they smiles

Arjun relatives also arrived

Arjun sleeping in his room

Sumitra:udja arjun sari relatives agaya

Arjun:uff ab some bhi nahi dugi ma

Maya(arjun’s Sister)aisa kaise bai ab apki need tho gaya ap shadi jo kar rahi hai

Arjun:uff I sab ki vajah se shadi bhi karna pade rahi hai he get up and fresh

At rathodes

Ayisha and sameer talking with eachother on phone

naina:sameer neeche auo sari relatives aya hai tu tho salon bad vapas arahi hai yaham sab ko mil

Sam:ma mei abhi aya

When he goes downstairs everyone was chatting when a girl give everyone chai and snacks she goes back to kichen

Roshni and sakshi come back from parlor

Sakshi:uff tak gaya haina di

Rosh:ya

Roshni and sakshi talk with their cousins

When a girl came with juice roshni try to drink

Sakshi:tum hamarelite juice kyun lekar aya mei tumari chehra bhi dekh a nahi chatha

Naina:sakshi mei be bola use

Sakshi:but why mom yeh hame marna chaha tho is mei kuch milakar hame dugi

Dadi:yeh ladki ki vajah se gar mei hangama hotha hai kyun kadi hu yahm jauo yahm se she leave from there crying

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Part 2

Mukesh(alekh brother)abhi bhi ise yahan kyun rakha hai bai saab

Sakshi:chai tho ise nikalna chahiye tha yaham se

Alekh:ab ko bhi hu vo bhi is gar ki net haina

Dadi:beti nahi tumari najayz aulath hai vo ....is gar ki kushion par grahan hai vo

Sam:ab sab bas bhi karo kyun achi mohal karab kar rahi hu

Everyone was chatting when sakshi and others cousin go to kitchen vo log gee neeche guratha hai or vo ladki girth’s hai

Girl:ahh

Sakshi:kya hua riya dard hua koyi bath nai yeh tho choti dard hai

They go from there riya just look at them

Riya doing all work

Ramu kaka(serving)beta tune kuch kaya nahi na ab tak yeh lo kuch kalo

Riya:muje nahi chahiye kaka

Ramu kaka:beta kauo tab tak mei tumara kam karthi hu

Riya was eating food when dadi came:tu yaham khana kara hi hai bahar bahuth kam hai jaldi auo

It’s sangeet day everyone was presented there when

Priya asked:yeh kon hai naina ji ham ise ab tak nahi dekha yeh pyaari bachi kon hai

Sumitra:ha meine bhi nahi dekha kon hai yeh pyaari bachi

Naina:voo...Choti beti hai yahm ki

Sumitra:are bahuth pyaari bachi hai

Ayisha:tumara naam kya hai sameer be kabhi tumare bare mei kuch nahi bola

Riya:riya

Ayisha:bahuth pyaari naam hai Tagamet baito meri saath

Riya sit with Ayisha sakshi get angry

Riya saw arjun he also saw her

Arjun:tho yeh meri saali hai Riya smiles sam tho kabhi nahi bola is saali ki bare mei

Sam:vo ... aisa kuch nahi bulgaya

Everyone was enjoying function when arjun saw sameer dadi slapping riya

Arjun mv:vo kyun use mar rahi hogi kuch tho hai

All function happening grantly

It’s mehendi day roshni Ayisha mehendi lagrahi hai sakshi and others also liza talk with riya

Arjun look at riya her face show she is scared he saw riya’s hand which have marks

He try to ignore it but his acp mind don’t want to ignore that

Next. Day it’s Faldo time but rathodes ki kandali Kangan nahi miltha hai or sakshi use riya ki rooms lekar atha hai

Sakshi:mera shak sahi tha usne aisa kiya(saal mei sakshi ne kiya yeh

Riya:me ne kuch nahi kiya

Roshni:riya tume hamari kushi dekna pasand nahi hai kya tu kuch na kuch karthi hai

Dada ji slap:is gar ko katham karne keliye paida hua hai yeh ab shakun sab kuch katham kar hi jaugi yeh

Naina:kyun tume meri bachon ki kushi pasand nahi hai

Riya try to defend her self but everyone accusing her

Riya:papa....she cried

Alekh:jab de paida hua ek pal bhi muje shadi nahi riya tu she ran from there crying Ayisha and others just look at this shockingly

Arjun:ap apni beti we aisa bath kaise kar slath hai

Dad ji:damad ji apko kuch nahi patha vo is gar ki beti nahi hai ek najayz aulath hai is bare mei hum bath na kare tho acha hai

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Part 3

Suryakant:arjun vo unki family mater hai hame is mei koyi bath nahi karna hai

Arjun:par dad

It’s marriage daddy roshni sakshi go to parlor for make up but vo log vahi raktha hai Because of rain

Naina others get scared because roshni abhi tak nahi aya soon roshni’s chachi make a plan vo riya ko roshni ki jagah par baittha hai Hungary Dallar before roshni came wedding happend

Riya was in roshni’s room she is clutching her magalsootra

Chachi:riya magalsootra roshni ko do use Tayar hona hai yeh bath kisi ko bhi patha nahi chalna chahiyesa samji riya nodded

It’s roshni’s bidayi

Sumitra:hamara ek rivas hai bahu ke saath uski behen bhi kuch din hamare far rahugi(ab yeh kon sa rivas hai math puchna😉)

Arjun:meri choti saali augi haina everyone look at riya she get scared

Sam:kyun nahi riya juo unke saath

Riya ko bahuth hurt hotha hai Arjun saali bola tho kyuki arjun biwi hai vo

Vo log ravute mansion atha gai roshni ki Griha pravesh hotha hai

Roshni:riya arjun ko kabhi nahi patha chalna chahiye ki tumari or uski shadi hua hai samji

Riya noded arjun saw roshni scolding riya for silly natters

He get sad thinking why everyone treating her badly

He try to talk with her but she ignore him

Riya was making all dishes but roshni taking credit from ravutes

Surayakath arjun or roshni keliye party raktha hai jis mei sab lo atha hai Ayisha talk with riya but dadi stop her

Dadi:Ayisha beti use zyada bath mat kar

Arjun some where came to know it’s riya’s birthday saw he arrange cake for here

Arjun:ap sab mujse chupaya par muje patha chala

Roshni:kya arjun

Arjun:riya ki birthday

Everyone gets shocked

Karan:woo happy birthday riya

Arjun:chalo cake kato

Arjun make riya cut cake and feed her but dada ji get angry

Dadaji:pehle iski ka ma ne hamari bete ko pasaya ab yeh apni jeeja ko pasane ki koshish mei hai

Arjun get angry

Dada ji slap her:sharam naam ki chees nahi tume

He try to slap her again arjun stop him

Arjun:vo koyi toys nahi jisee jab chahe mare pete kuch bhi kare ek insaan hai or meri samne kisi ladki ke saath atyachar hotha huye mei nahi deksaktha

Alekh:beta

Arjun:sam muje tumse yeh umeed nahi thi etf mei tumara women empowerment hai gar mei aisa chi he goes from there

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Awesomee upadateddd..

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But arj kab pata chalega..ri ki us ki shadi hue hai..??

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Poor riya kitna sehna pad raha hai ab arjun se shaadi ke baad bhi apni jagah bi**h roshni ko deni padi hope arjun jald pata kar le fab updates dear eagerly waiting for nxt

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Part 4

Riya leave from there crying

Ayisha: sameer ap in sab mei chup kyun hai

Sam:mei kya bolu

Ayisha:what is this sameer muje ap par proud thi yeh soch kar ki ap kisi ke saath anyay hothe huye nahi deksaktha ap ladkiyon ki respect karthi hai par ap tho kudh ko behen ke saath hone vala anyay bhi nahi rok rahi hai

Sam:meri chahne sr kya hoga riya chaha tho yaham se jasaktha tha par usne yahi rehna ma Faisala liya mei me use bola tha yahan de kahi dur jauo usne nahi mana yahan rahugi tho yeh sab hi hogi yahan koyi bhi use accept nahi karugi 15 saal hogaya kisi me use is gar mei accept nahi kiya

Ayisha:kya ap bhi nahi?????

Sam:mei......

Arjun:ha bol tu use behen nahi mantha sakshi roshni se muje koyi umeed nahi kya tu nahi mantha???

Etf team look at sam

Sam:mei man tha hu use behen bachpan yahan sab muje sirf sakshi or roshni ko hi dika kar bolthi vo meri behen hai tab muje nahi patha tha riya bhi meri behen hai jab mei bada hua tho mei samj gaya ki vo meri behen hai mei me hameesha roshni or sakshi ko jo chees lekar atha hai vo riya ko bhi di thi par har bar is gar par us chees ko lekar bhi hangama hothi thi isliye mei yahan se dur bag gaya shyd apni problem se bagrahi thi tab mei sirf apni bare mei socha ab yaham vapas akar bhi vahi sab hi dek rahi hai

Arjun:tum problem se bag gaya sameer uska solution nahi dunda

Sam:vo meri galthi hai par meine bar bar riya se kaha hai yahan sr jane ko vo nahi mana

Ayisha:vo yahan se kyun jauo sameer yeh uska bhi gar hai

Sam:Ayisha tum samaj nahi rahi hu mera use apka ne se sab use nahi apnaugi

Arjun:kyun nahi???

Dadi:beta aplog kuch nahi jantha iski ma me hamari zindagi narak banaya tha or ham kabhi use apni poti ki roop mei nahi apnaugi

Naina:riya dekkar muje apni southan ki yaad atha hai jisne meri zindagi barbad karne ki koshish ki thi kabhi bhi use mei apni beti ki roop mei nahi apnaugi

Anand:ab aplog bas bhi karo kyun party mei thamasha create kar rahi iske bare mei hum baad mei bath karugi

Arjun angrily leave

Rosh:arjun ruk tho sahi

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Part 5

Riya crying in garden tez barish horahi hai bahar par vo rothe jarahi hai use patha hi nahi chal rahi hai ki vo beeg rahi hai poori tharah

Riya:kyunn hamare saath aisa horahi hai ma ne jo galthi kiya uska saza hame kyun derahi hai??????

Arjun saw riya crying

He ran there

Arjun:kya kar rahi hu riya tez barish horahi hai or tu barish mei kyun baits hai???

She didn’t utter a word arjun push her towards a sequr place

Arjun:what the hell is this riya binary padjaugu he give her towel but she didn’t take arjun kudh towel de use sequre katha hai

Arjun:chalo mei tume gar chod thi hu he take her to her room

At hall

Priya:Ayisha aj bahuth hogaya beta tum I sab mat pado tho acha hai Arjun damad hai isgar ki use isliye koyi kuch nahi bolugi tu bahu hai tumara assurance hai tu sirf apni zindagi ke bare mei soch

Ayisha:but mei ek etf officer hu or commissioner ki beti hu

Anand:correct tumare samne tu koyi anyay dekha tho tume bolona hu chahiye chalo beta hum chalthe hai they goes sam and rathode’s also goes

Sakshi:hum chalthe hai di riya par najar rakna

Roshni saw arjun taking care of riya she get angry

At arjun and roshni’s room

Roshni:arjun riya ke saath apko dekna muje pasand nahi hai

Arjun:mei sirf use behen ki tharah dekthi hi tu usmei zyada math soch

Roshni:par arjun Muje pasand nahi hai

Arjun:muje kya karna hai tume Boone ki zaroorath nahi mei janthi hu mera naam arjun ravute hai

Days passed roshni try to hurt riya in many way

Oneday riya vapas rathode house jarahi hai

Sumitra:apni kayak rakna beta she hug her

Maya:by riya

She goes there Ayisha doing kitchen work

Naina:Ayisha beta riya aya hai ab tume kuch karne ki zaroorath nahi

Ayisha:mei use help karugi ma

Naina:iski zaroorath nahi vo kudh karugi

Sakshi:ha Ayisha yeh sab uski kam hai or kal sr hum ab ko etf bhi jana hai

Ayisha get angry but she control

Next day riya give everyone breakfast

Ayisha:bahuth tasty hai tumara khana she smiles

Sam:yes tum pehle bar karahi huna Ayisha riya tasty food banathi hai riya smiles

Everyone get angry

At ravute’s pleace

Sumitra:riya kithni achi kana banathi thi aj this bilcul bhi taste nahi hai roshni get angry

Arjun:correct mom riya ki hath ki khana waaa


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Poor riya yeh kya bol diya arjun ne behen ki tarah dekhta hai jab pata chalega patni hai tab kya karega nice updates dear eagerly waiting for nxt

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Part 6

At etf

Everyone was busy doing their work

Arjun:riya kaisa hai ayisha

Ayisha:teek hu sir

Arjun:I hope tum uska saath de

Ayisha:why not sir kya apko mei vo log jaisa dikthi hu

Arjun:nahi muje tum par barosa hai

Roshni sakshi hear their conversation

Sakshi:di hame is riya ka kuch karna hoga varna vo arjun lekar jaugi

Roshni:sahi kha tu chutki arjun ko hameesha uskibare mei jan na hai kuch tho karna hoga

At rathode’s home

Sakshi:arjun ke as paas bhi jana math tu

Riya:par mei nahi jatha

Sakshi:chup dur reho arjun se

Sakshi poori family ke samne tamasha create kartha hai

Naina:tumari ma meri zindagi barbad ki ab tu meri beti ki zindagi barbad math karo mei tumari samne hath jodthi hu

Riya:ma mei kuch nahi kiya

Dadi:kya karo mei is najayz ka apshakun hai yeh

Ayisha:bas bhi karo a ap sab mei arjun sir ko janthi hu vo aisa insaan nahi hai

Dada ji:yeh jaisa ladki socha tho koyi bhi badal jaugi

Ayisha:riya tu apni kamre mei jauo

Riya vahan se rothe jatha hai

Ayisha mv muje kuch socha hoga riya keliye

At garaden riya so alekh doing his work she goes towards him

Alekh:kya hua yahan kyun aye hu tum

Riya:papa muje apse

Alekh:muje tumari bathon mei interest nhi hai muje bahuth kam hai chali jao

Riya:papa

Alekh:riya please roshni ki zindagi mei tum mat gusso chod meri beti ko jan se is duniya mei aya hai muje ek pal bhi chain de nahi jeene diya tu

Riya felt hurt she goes from there

Days passed oneday arjun roshni came rathode mansion

Everyone was chatting Riya came with snacks

Arjun:hi riya tumari hath ka khana mei miss kiya

Everyone look at riya angrily

Riya get scared

Arjun:tune ek din bhi fir gar nahi aya??

Riya:vo mei

Naina:riya jauo khana ki tayari karo

Sam:hamari shadi ki video aya hai

Arjun:saath milakar dekthe hai

Arjun rosh Ayisha sam and sakshi where watching vm everyone shock with one thing which a photo naina rand chachi Dulhan ko lekar arahi the Dulhan is non other our ri Sam Ayisha Arjun gets shocked naina gungad se chehra chupatha hai and next is wedding video arjun eyes widened Arjun if the laptop

Arjun:yeh sab?????

Roshni:arjun meri bath suniye

Arjun angrily leaves

He call everyone in hall sam and Ayisha also shocked


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