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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: shivi.1512

wow..

its so awesome and mind blowing update....

loved ariya meet in past...

so riya is helping etf...

riya in research desk...

loved dinner part...

Continue soon and please let me know.


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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Serialbestfan

wow dear...

its so awesome and mind blowing update...


just loved it...so riya is in so much pain but thanks to arjun that now she is stable....


loved riya and ishan bonding....

riya birthday.. she is waiting for arjun wishes....


loved samjun friendly banter...


raid got successful but sam hurt...

lets see what happened next...


dp continue soon...


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Posted: 5 years ago


Part 4

Arjun:Nahi Ayesha tumhari galti nahi hai.. tum nahi janti thi peeche Sam hai nahi to tum use nahi lagne deti goli haina.

She nods.

Arjun:To bas guilty feel mat karo..Shree Chotu mill me hain tum office jao..mai kuch der me aata hu.

Ayesha:Thanks Juno.

She goes.

Flashback ends.

Arjun checks the time..its 11 am he has to go ETF but he cant leave Rathod alone so he calls Ayesha (from Rathod's phone) and ask her to handle ETF.

Arjun:Sam jaldi thik ho ja na...tere bina bahut adhura sa lag raha hai..abhi to tujhe Ayesha ko bhi manana hai..itni der tak soke time kyu waste kar raha hai..aur jab tu Ayesha ko mana lega na mai tujhe kisi se milvaunga..are jo tu soch raha hai waisa nahi hai..Riya bas meri dost hai aur apna idol manti hai mujhe..(suddenly he remembers its Riya's b'day and he forgot to wish her)..oh no Riya..he search his phone but remembers he lost it during raid.

He takes Rathod's phone and dials Riya's number. She see unknown number but still picks it up.

Arjun:Hello..

Riya understood its Arjun.

Riya:Hello Arjun sir..aap kaise hain aur Mr Rathod wo kaise hain..maine news me dekha unhe goli lagi thi aur wo City Hospital me hain..maine kitni baar call kiya aapne uthaya nahi..hello sir aap kuch bol kyu nahi rahe..

Arjun:Riya..shant ho jao..mujhe kuch bolne to do..

Riya:Umm sorry sir.

Arjun(smiles):Its ok..mai thik hu Riya abhi Rathod ke saath hospital me hu..haan use goli lagi thi aur thodi chot bhi ayi hai..but doctor ne kaha ghabrane wali koi baat nahi hai..jald hi thik ho jayega Sam..

Riya(taking sigh of relief):Thank god..mujhe pata tha Mr Rathod bahut brave hain itni asaani se thodi koi unka kuch bigad sakta hai..

Arjun:Right..by the way Riya happy birthday.. sorry kal wo raid pe jana pada aur fir Sam ko goli to mai bhool gaya..

Riya:Thank you sir and its ok i understand.. wo mujhe jana hoga abhi mam ne bulaya hai..

Arjun:Sure bye..

Riya:Bye sir take care.

Riya goes to her boss cabin.

Here Rathod gains consciousness and tries to sit. Arjun helps him sit.

Arjun(hugs him lightly):Sam tu thik hai na..

Rathod(smiles lightly):Haan yaar thik hu itni asaani se peecha nahi chodne wala.

Arjun glares him and calls doctor to check him.

Doctor:Mr Rathod ab thik hain..bas unhe 10 din bedrest karna hoga then he can work on field.

He goes

Rathod:What 10 din..itne din mai ghar rehke pak jaunga yaar..mai kal se hi duty join kar raha hu..

Arjun:Oh really..taki tu kal se duty join karke Ayesha ko aur guilty feel karvaye haan..

Rathod(confused):Matlab.

Arjun:Matlab ye ki Ayesha ko lagta hai ki teri iss halat ki zimmedar wo hai..goli use lagne wali thi par wo jhuk gayi aur use pata nahi tha ki goli tujhe lag jayegi..ab bol rest ya duty

Rathod(sulking):Rest.

Arjun(smirks):Thats like a good boy..chal ab let ja.

Sameer lie down again. Arjun informs the team that Sameer gained consciousness so all come to meet him. Ayesha feels relieved seeing him fine. Rathod sees this and feels happy inside that she still cares for him.

Rathod is discharged till evening. Arjun ask Ayesha to drop him home as he has some work. She agrees.

Here Arjun goes to Riya's office to pick her up. On the way he buys new phone and insert the sim of his previous no. She gets surprised seeing him.

In car

Riya:Arjun sir aap yahan..aapko to Mr Rathod ke saath hona chahiye..unhe zarurat hogi na aapki.

Arjun:Uski dekhbhal ke liye ek bharosemand insan hai uske saath..he winks at her.

Riya(surprised):Matlab ki..

Arjun:Yes Riya you guessed right he is in love.

Riya(squeals in happiness):Wow thats great..kaun hai wo..unka naam photo..bataiye na..

Arjun:Mai bataunga nahi milwaunga direct tumhe..filhal thodi naraz hai usse jab wo use mana lega aur firse propose karega uske baad.

Riya(face fells):Sir..

Arjun(sees this):Uff Riya..ok aaj tumhara b'day hai tumhe udas nahi karna chahta.. uska naam Ayesha hai..hum teeno training period se friends hain..Sam aur Ayesha tab se ek dusre se pyar karte hain..confession bhi ho gaya tha but ye idiot..iski ek galti aur ab tak Ayesha naraz hai.

Riya:What ab tak!! I mean its been 5 years.. zarur koi badi galti ki hogi Mr Rathod ne..

Arjun:Hmm lekin jahan tak mai Ayesha ko janta hu wo ab tak usse naraz nahi hogi.. bas training ke baad hum touch me nahi rahe aur isne Ayesha se informally baat bhi nahi ki jabse wo ayi hai..so we are not sure ki wo naraz hai ya nahi.

Riya:Oh..shayad na ho..after all she love him to get upset.

Arjun:Yes..lekin tumhe itna kaise pata..(raise his eye brow suspiciously)..sach sach batao

Riya(surprised):What sach sach batao.. its just i love love stories..(excitedly) and you know sir mai apne friends ki love stories jankar unhe tease karti thi..i so love it..aur unka wo blush..she giggles remembering it.

Arjun too chuckles hearing her and realize sooner or later Samsha will be Riya's prey.

Soon they reach Riya's home.

She go to kitchen to make tea and coffee and gets lost in flashback.

Flashback

It was exactly after 6 months..its Riya's b'day. Her family and relatives called to wish her..she decided she won't celebrate her b'day..she remembers how their relatives called Ishaan on his b'day which was after around 2 months of their mother's demise so as to distract him and give them some happiness but Riya decided she won't celebrate b'day and thats one of the reason she is away from her home and staying in Mumbai.

At evening

Arjun comes Riya's home. He didnt knew its her b'day. He see her fallen face and ask her.

Riya:Wo sir..aaj mera birthday hai..

ArjunWhat..oh sorry Riya mujhe nahi pata tha..happy b'day Riya..

Riya(faint smile):Its ok sir..waise bhi mai apna b'day nahi manana chahati..

They stay silent for sometime.

Arjun:Riya aisa kab tak chalega (she looks at him) kab tak aise hi udas man se jiyogi.. ok birthday nahi manana mat manao but aaj ke din udas to mat raho..tumhe unke liye khush rehna hoga jo tumhe khush dekhna chahate hain aur unke liye bhi jo nahi hai lekin fir bhi tumhe khush dekhna chahate hain..

Riya:I know sir but its difficult..

Arjun:I know Riya..ek min..(Arjun takes out something from his pocket) ye lo tumhara b'day gift..wo to mai yahan aa raha tha to le aya..fir pata chala aaj to tumhara b'day hai..

Riya(smiles and takes it):Aapko kaise pata cadbury is my favourite..

Arjun(winks):Meri nazar se kuch nahi chupta..tumhare fridge me dekhi thi ek baar..ab bolo kya socha..

Riya:Ok sir mai khush rehne ki puri koshish karungi..but

Arjun:Mai bhi nahi karta celebrate..its ok jab tum chaho tab karna..mujhe invite karna mat bhulna haan..

Both giggles and she nods.

Flashback ends.

She takes the tray goes to balcony.

Here Ayesha drops Rathod home and helps him with necessary things. She even cooks food for his dinner and was about to go when

Rathod:Ayesha abhi bhi naraz ho?

Ayesha(without turning):Hum iss baare me aapke thik hone ke baad baat karenge..Sir.. filhal apna khyal rakhiye aur kisi chiz ki zarurat ho to bata dena..bye..

Rathod's face fells and she leaves but he remembers how she took care of his necessity and cook food for him and smiles. He calls Arjun to share it with him.

Riya's home

Ariya were talking when Arjun's phone rings.

Arjun:Hello..haan Sam..

Rathod tells Arjun how Ayesha took care of her and kept necessary things for him and ask him to call her whenever needed except what happened when she was going.

Arjun:See kaha tha na wo ab naraz nahi hogi.

Rathod:Hmm.

Arjun:Thik hote hi usse baat kar liyo thik hai.

Rathod:Hmm.

Arjun:Pata nahi thik hone me kitne din lag jaye ek kaam kariyo iss case ke baad baat kar liyo.

Rathod:Hmm.

Arjun:Ayesha to chali jayegi 4 din baad miss to karega hi use haina.

Rathod:Hmm

Arjun(fed up of his hmm):Sam tera haath thik nahi hai to ab kal pub me mai aur Ayesha jayenge as a couple..tu waise bhi bedrest karega..case ki chinta mat kariyo ok..

Rathod(glaring at phone screen,sarcastically):Chinta aur mai..itne honhar haatho me jayega case mai chinta kyu karne laga bhala.

Arjun(giggles as if feeling his glare):Haan right..mai bhul gaya tha..chal rest le achhe se..bye.

Call ends. Arjun cuts call and sees Riya who is controlling her laugh. Suddenly both laughs.

Riya:Sir aap aisa kyu kar rahe hain unke saath..

Arjun:Maine kya kiya..wo bas hmm hmm kiye ja raha tha to bas thoda jealous feel kara raha tha..kal case ke liye mujhe aur Ayesha ko jana hoga ab as a couple..pehle Sam aur Ayesha jate.

Riya:Oh..waise aapko nahi lagta ye drama aapko Mr Rathod ke bajay Ayesha mam ke saath karna chahiye..

Arjun:Nahi Riya pehle mai sure hona chahta hu ki exactly Ayesha ke mann me hai kya..

Riya:Hmm right sir..waise sir aap kuch bhul rahe hain..

Arjun:Kya?!

Arjun acts as remembering and see Riya's pouted face and giggles.

Arjun:Riya mai directly hospital se aya tha na to tumhara gift ghar reh gaya..kal le aunga pakka..

Riya:Oh chaliye koi baat nahi..

Arjun:Abhi ke liye ye lo chocolates.

She smiles widely and take it.

Arjun:Waise Riya tum Delhi me apna b'day kaise manati thi..

Riya(smiles little):Kuch khaas nahi sir.. raat ko 12 baje mom dad aur Ishaan mujhe b'day wish karte the aur mai cake cut karti thi.. fir shaam ko family ke saath dinner ke liye bahar jate the..dost kam the koi itna kareeb nahi raha ki party du..jab school me tab deti thi but ab nahi..

Arjun:Hmm..kuch aur nahi to at least hum dinner ke liye to ja hi sakte hain na.. Sam Ayesha bhi mujhe kheech ke le jate the b'day pe..ab training ke baad team bhi..

Riya:Sure sir zarur chalungi..apne friend ko ek treat to de hi sakti hu.

Both smiles.

Arjun:Ok fir mai tumhe 8 baje lene aa jaunga be ready.

Riya:Ok..waise sir ek baat puchu.

Arjun:Pucho..

Riya:Wo Mr Rathod aur Ayesha mam ke beech aisa kya hua tha..

Arjun:Sam ko hero banne ka bhooth sawar ho gaya tha..

Riya(confused):Matlab..

Arjun:Matlab ye ki..

Flashback

(Consider Arjun is telling Riya)

It was around 2 months Sam Ayesha were in relationship. One of the trainee Vishesh used to like Ayesha from day 1. When he got to know about Samsha's relationship he got angry.

It was dinner time. All the cadets (girls and boys) used to have dinner together..when Ayesha was going towards her room Vishesh held her from back and tried to abduct her. Ayesha managed to get free from his hold and slapped him.

Ayesha:Ye tum kya kar rahe the aur kyu..officer banne aye ho ya criminal.

Vishesh:Ayesha i like you from 1st day.. lekin tum..tum uss Sameer se pyar karti ho..

Ayesha:Tum sirf mujhe like karte ho lekin mai aur Sam ek dusre se pyar karte hain..

Vishesh:Lekin Ayesha..

Suddenly out of nowhere a punch comes on his face shocking both of them.

Ayesha:Sam tum..

Rathod:Ayesha dont worry..tumhe iske muh lagne ki zarurat nahi hai..tum apne room me jao..mai dekh lunga ise..

Ayesha:Lekin Sam..

But he dont listen to her and fight start between both of them. Everyone comes hearing loud sounds and see Sam and Vishesh fighting. Arjun goes and calls their head who was Commissioner Cohelo that time.

Cohelo:Enough..cadets aap log yahan training ke liye aye hain..ye hai aapka discipline..you all move to your room now..

All leaves except Sameer Ayesha Arjun and Vishesh. Cohelo gives detention to Sameer and Vishesh for three days for creating indiscipline and leaves. This is seen by everyone from their room window. Vishesh goes from there after glaring Sameer.

Ayesha:Sam tumhe beeche me aane ki kya zarurat thi..mai baat kar rahi thi na..

Rathod(angry):Oh really baat kar rahi thi.. tumne dekha kaise dekh raha tha wo tumhe.. Ayesha i love you i cant lose you..

Ayesha:Achha hamari training ke baad hum log aise logo se milenge..fir to tum meri job hi chudwa doge just because unki nazar gandi hai..

Rathod:Nahi Ayesha aisa nahi hai..i i just wanted to protect you..

Ayesha:Protect me? Kisi ne mangi thi protection..you know what tum sab admi ek jaise hote ho..aurat ko kamzor samajhte ho..aur mai aise insan ke saath nahi rehna chahti..its over Sam..

She leaves from there angrily. Rathod sees her going helplessly. He seeks help from Arjun but he refuse to help him until he realise his mistake. Soon the news of their break up is spread in whole camp. Rathod tries to seek forgiveness from Ayesha but she ignore him saying they should concentrate on their goals.

Flashback ends.

Riya is listening all this with open mouth. She couldnt believe Sameer Rathod who used to give speech about women empowerment and his appeals to women to join police force was like that in training periods.

Arjun:Jo Rathod tum soch rahi ho wo isi kaaran aisa hai..use apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya tha isiliye kai uski help ke liye maan gaya..

Riya:Ye to achhi baat hai sir..galti ka ehsaas agar na ho to mafi koi mayne nahi rakhti..

Arjun:Exactly.

After sometime Arjun leaves reminding Riya about the treat.

Edited by Ariyatogether - 5 years ago


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Posted: 5 years ago

Yipee me first 🥳

Awesome update dear 👏

Loved it ❤️

Arjun emotional talk was nice

Wow Sam ko HOSH agaya and he want to rest for 10 days par mana kiya but Jun know very well how to make him good boy 🤭

Ayu went to drop Sam home and took care of all the necessary things aboyyt him

Here arjun went to ri ofc to surprise her

Ariya convo is nice and Flashback is intresting

Sasha ka break up Isliye hua tha 😱

LOL Sam changed a lot and uske galti ka usko ehsas bhi hai

Hope fully ayu maaf karde jaldi and wo Phir se relationship me aajaye

And ariya ki bhi love story aage badhao jaldi

Cont soonish

Thanks for the pm 🤗

Bye take care 👋 😘 😘 😘

Edited by sana1819786 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Beautiful ❤️


I enjoyed SamJun's convo 😆


Also Ariya


Flashbacks are very interesting 👍🏼


Looking forward for the Ariya and SamSha's love story and how Riya will overcome from her past.


Update soon 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part-3


Wow amazing part rashiiii 👏

Loved it ❤️

I guess I know one such introvert who say she is introvert but mere se HAZARO baato kar leti hai 🤭

Riya was too broken after her mother demise aur ho bhi kyu nahi after all mom is world for children

Hope har ladki jo riya ki tarah situation me ho usko ek arjun mile who can show her right part and support her each and every time 😍

Ishaan bada hai par wo usko bhai nahi bulati bechare 1 sal wale bade siblings ko izzat hi nahi milti 🤦🏻‍♀️🤭

Oh no Sam ko goli lag gayi hope wo jaldi thik hojaye

Poor ayu she was feeling guilty thinking it happened coz if her but arjun made her understand it wasn't her fault

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

Bye take care 👋 😘 😘 😘

Edited by sana1819786 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Flashback was interesting..

Thoda short update that😉

But it's okay..

Keep writing ❤️❤

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Posted: 5 years ago

Loved it Raashi dear

Awesome part

Hmmm so finally Sam is out of danger & is stable enough

FB was cute Ariya chocolate scene was really sweet

Sam & Aisha FB was nice & bit realistic as most men behave in a same way

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🙂

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Posted: 5 years ago

Fabulous update

Love it

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 5 years ago

Sam ko hosh aa gaya aur 10 days rest ayesha uski help karti hai ariya conversation nice Arjun riya ko samsha ki breakup story batata hai fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

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