Ariya OS contest(3ed prompt given) - Page 8

aquabutterfly awesome os

i loved every bit of it

ariyabestfan what an amazing update

The way riya was manofying was fabulous

Bichaara arjun full too hosh udd gaya uska

i loved it

First of all the initiative itself is very very lovely one and thisis more like a reunion together here.

and really i can't judge something like this because i loved each and every story equally and i can't be biased to one particular story

so here you go .... upto where I've stopped now

@bloomie : love doesn't scare

i've already been so much into ur stories so i didn't expected yours to be something very routine and thanks for making it something fresh and i loved the way of urs presentation too much. And i am really attached to the part that comes at the ending it has heart in its place.

@bitterberry : OLD SCHOOL LOVE

first of all the best thing is the narration i loved it absolutely. and that conversations they never looked forced and everything was going with the flow and the you have injected her pain into us that is commendable.

@unishaz : TRUST

and we missed our etf office in the first two stories and you have brought them back . i loved everything but that discription about her anxiety is too good. And thanks alot for keeping the ending simple. sometimes being simple adds alot beauty to the narrative.

@annie2248 : HIS FOREVER

writing from ones perspective itself is tough but stayed to two charecters pov itself is a great step here. i loved it totally. mainly those conversations.

@ariyabestfan : pyaar se dar

i've been someone who adores your works so much and here you gave another reason here. that awkwardness is lovely. As all your stories the confession here is too good. And keeping something totally from riya's pov is too good.

@haal-e-dil

this one needs some really special mention from others. what stands up here is the conversations they are absolutely lovable no i can say i just loved every minute detailing.

@aquabutterfly : the green eyed monster

what to say where to start? i've been like is she writing a science fiction when i came through the title but thank you u have mentioned the genre. And what to say about the story it is something above all. i was waiting for something very light hearted and this made my heart float. And fooling readers with first two paragraphs worked the best here. how can you write such simple conversations with such beauty?

@minamma: stolen kiss

FIRST OF ALL WE HAVE TO THANK YOU FOR BRINGING ALL OF US HERE. THAT INTIATIVE ITSLEF IS TOO GREAT.

a true man always protects his lady. And the explanation you've gave about riya is too good

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WHOEVER MAY WIN BUT ALL STORIES ACTUALLY PINGED HEART IN ONE WAY ORR OTHER...

LOVE

SHRIYA REDDY

Thank you to everyone who has sent me a pm

I really appreciate them.

I am loving this contest... Looking forward to read all the OS. Don't know how many times I have refreshed this topic just so I don't miss any of the os

All the is that I have read are amazing.

I love how each one of have interpted the prompt differently and the story you come up with is so different.

Love it

minamma os lovely os dear

@bloomie nice Os well written

@bitterberry loved your Oscar

And yeah I am a sucker for neck kisses and love bites too🙈

@annie wonderful part

@unishaz short but nicely written

unishaz os short but lovely os dear

Originally posted by: Shriyareddy

i am late as i didn't know about this and yes would have been in if informed earlier

and i will be a part in this ...

i know i am late but make sure you inform me from next ones