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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994

Hii

Sorry, for again being late comer to a already started lesson(FF) of yours. Hoping for a warm welcome from you this time too😊


Hi dear.


No problem ☺️


N welcome 🤗


I hope you enjoyed the story so far.




Chapter 1:

A wonderful start with broken and lost Riya, walking on streets in her own thoughts, not conscious abt her surroundings, who somehow reached railway station remembering hurtful words of her loved ones and decided to end her life, thinking nothing is left in her life.

Arjun enters her life as a savior, offering a helping hand to come along with him and give a new start to her life. Seeing the only left option at that time she gave her hand to him, climbed up the train, unknown the way where life was taking to her. Train catching scene reminds me of SRK-Kajol from DDLJHe saved her again from TC and from ending her life again.


Yes riya is feeling like she has totally lost everything in her life..


In her miserable state of mind ,she decided to take her life,but saved by Arjun..


N now she is in train with him..


Chapter 2:

Arjun sensing something wrong about Riya asked her to join his group and in between talks came to know about her name. Loved this young, studious, fun loving and talkative Arjun. Ohh! ArIya missed their train and stuck in that station. She was in tension how he came to know about her identity and he was ready with his own plan to make her smile or to irritate her more, but seriously he called her Icchadhari Naagin🤣


Yes arjun samaz gaya he ke iss ladki ke sath kuch toh gadbad he..


Ha studious toh he 13 ghante padayi jo kar raha he..


Ha train forse chut gayi dono ki..


Well icchadhari nagin 🤣waise ye toh shuruwat he aage aur bhi naam milne wale he usse..


Chapter 3:

Long & very entertaining update. Half of the update I was 🤣while reading. He really stretched that Nagin joke that even Riya couldn't control asking him to a mad man🤪but again he made her speechles. Both are hell bent on doing they want, she trying to get rid of him and he trying to find the reason of her attempting suicide. Finally he won and somehow managed her to tell him the reason. Loved how he tried to cheer her by telling her how strict mostly all fathers are, but that doesn't mean they don't love their children😛She decided to see her parents after finding sense in his talks. He accompanied her & how he shut up that driver with his unique talks, then threatened him by Nagin thing😆 &at last made him run away in fear was too good🤣 Riya made Arjun enter her house by climbing pipe & she is pro in that😲Amitabh-Jaya Joke was awesome.



Thanks dear


Glad you enjoyed it..


Yes finally he made her talk..


He try to convince her to go back to her parents thinking once she goes to her parents ,she would leave the idea of socide.


N they goes to riya's house ..


Chapter 4:

Sad to know that Riya's dad is among those, who thinks only a son can fulfill their dreams, bcoz of which she suffered all these years, yearning for her father's love,care & appreciation. This time her mother too said hurtful words to her😭She didn't want to go back home even after witnessing how worried they are for her as she had lost all hopesLiked Aakash uncle who said right things to her parentsLoved how Arjun turns the serious atmosphere into light mood with his talks, like his reading other's mind only by looking at them, removing doors and windows of house when one has to climb up & down pipe to enter & exit respectively and asking why her parents were looking for shona comments😆He is really an antique person who woke the shopkeeper at 2am to buy a gk book🤓 He wanted a nick name, hope he get one by her in future😉 So,he is on India tour & asked her to join him & she agreed.


Ha riya ne bahot kuch zela he life Me..she had tried her best to get love from her father..


N this time usaki ma ne bhi kuch aisa keh diya jisse riya aur tut gayi....


Sahi kaha usane agar itni aasani se pipe se chad utar sakhte he toh ghar me jane ke liye stairs n door ki zarurrat kya he..🤣


Arjun ko nickname mile ya na mile riya ko bahot nickname milne wale he😆


Yes he is on India tour with his friends..n he ask her to come with them..


N riya also get ready for it..




Chapter 5:

Riya's dilemma was natural. Arjun's Nagin talks were hilarious🤣Poor passenger got scared listening to their talks & left the place😆Again he mentioned of wanting Nagmani, it seems like he is going to expect some precious stone from her in future😉anyway atleast his talks made her smile😃So they reached Bhuvaneshvwar, she did some shopping for her. Again he confused shopkeeper with his talks, that Ranveer Singh comment 🤣So he has no time to make girlfriend, poor boy😆Neha's comment abt dressing style reminded Riya of her friends who laughed on her😒 & she went to the garden. Luckily Arjun succeeded in locating her & ask her to start her Riya Kahani. Liked how he became serious looking tears in her eyes😳


Yes arjun ki nagin ki bate sunke woh passanger dar gaya..


Arjun ne riya ko shopping karayi..


Ha kya karega bechara 13 ghante padayi karega..fir college karega aur fir itni bakbak bhi karni he ,gf banane ko time hi kaha he usake pass..🤣


Ha neha ki baat sunke riya ko kuch purani baat yaad aa gayi..


Ha ab riya-kahani shuru hone wali he..



Chapter 6:

Aaditya claimed to love his wife but can't love & her and his own creation, wowDamn that man who couldn't see his own innocent child's efforts to win his love. It's sad that in order to impress & melt his father's heart, she changed herself completely leading to losing of her only few friends, leaving her in aloofness😒 Arjun told her that he is her friend, but she's still in dilemma to consider him as a friend but somewhere she knew that his words affected her and she was impressed by his gestures, he is the one who could not only make her laugh but others too. She realised he is different, also that she could trust him. He witnessed her laugh. Loved Arjun's masti-mazak with his group❤️ and how he again scared Neha with his Nagin joke😆



Yes riya's father couldn't overcome from his own misconceptions about girls n boys..


N her efforts couldn't melt his heart..


Yes riya realise Arjun is somewhat different than others..


Ha bechari neha ko bhi dara diya😆



Chapter 7:

ArIya and group visited a zoo. She is getting comfortable in his company, also enjoying his jokes. He knew this thing, that's why keeps on his Nagin jokes to make her smile. They were behaving in such a way that nobody would say that they had met few days ago. Neha clicked photo of theirs together, hope they both keep a copy of it & remember each other after this tripThey got stuck in zoo. The way he was telling don't worry to her, it seemed like he was more worried than her🤣Looking her in tension, he tried to act bravely which made her smile😳 Both laughed together when realised their action contradicted their words😆She wanted to join army & was preparing for it, hiding it from her family. So, secret of her being pro in pipe climbing is out and he want to implement it too, let's see.



Well trip ke baad woh log kaise ek dusare ko yaad rakhege..ye toh upcoming parts me hi pata chalega..khair ye trip thoda lamba chalne wala he..


Yes they got stuck in zoo..


Yes she wanted to join army ,so that she can prove to her father ..


Well Arjun implement kar pata he ya nahi ye toh baad me pata chalega..


Chapter 8:

Riya's father😡Hope he will have a hard time in getting her forgiveness, when she succeeds in life. Arjun's commentary was superb. They reached near main gate of zoo in their own running & catching game, but found guard missing. To their luck, guard came there, however late and got them out of zoo. They reached hotel safely but not before scaring that guard with Nagin joke and took dinner with friends. Now they were moving to their next destination, everybody was enjoying the train journey, Arjun too joins it after completing his reading hours which reminded her of something. She got upset and moved out towards door, Arjun too followed her and started talking to her. He revealed to her that he has many friends but not anyone close enough, whom he could call as a best friend. She too reveal about not having true friends in college🥱


Yes they reach back to their friends safely..


Ha Arjun padayi bhi kar raha he ..


Yes arjun ke bahot sare friends he but not the one whom he can call bestest friend..


Riya had very bad experience with her friends..


Chapter 9:

Poor Riya, she not only lost her focus but also fall for that Karan🥱He not only rejected her proposal but insulted her before others too😡Arjun was right she should slapped him twice or thrice there only. Hope when she return back to college after this trip, she give back to his father & that Karan strongly with her actions, in her real self, what she actually is and not what she has become bcoz of her father. Also slap that Karan so hard, that he will remember it for lifetime😈With each passing days, Arjun's concern is increasing for her, he is getting more affected by her tears also sharing things with her. Loved the small ArIya scene when she shouted on him and he stopped to follow her, but then she turned back to say sorry, he accompanied her again😳


Yes karan reject riya's proposal n insult her..


N because of that riya broke down n even lost her will to go back to college..


Due to her mind state she fall sick n couldn't attend her exam..


Yes Arjun's concern increasing for her..



Sorry, but u forget to mention their destination this time


So here I am done with my homework on previous updates as being a late comer

Also end of part 1 of my comment😊


No problem dear..


Thanks for commenting..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994

Chapter 10:

~Arjun couldn't see her sad face anymore so he asked her to go back to hotel 😳& tried to uplift her mood with his commentry, in which he got successful getting a look from her

~Riya saw a girl in a familiar situation and got down from the train to help her. Finally with the help of their friends and crowd they succeeded in helping the girl👍🏼 Arjun's suggestion increased respect for him in Riya's eyes 😛& she got lost in herself, due to which they again missed the train

~While waiting for the next train, she told her how she failed to make her parents understand her & hadn't faced the situation bravely🥱

~Very sad her one year got wasted in all this and her parents tried to get her married without her consent. As if this wasn't enough, her mother too slapped her in anger saying wish they had a son instead of her😒😭😭

~Hope Arjun make her come out this depression completely & heal her invisible wounds with his comforting words and company😊 Also make her strong enough, so that she return back with full energy & determination to fulfill her aim and give back answer to everyone with attitude wherever required😎


Finally finished commenting all parts till date and latest one especially with your color

Expecting some good remarks from you😉not a compulsion feel free to quote me and express your views😊

A big thanks for sending pm smiley31

Waiting 4 for reply⏳ and here ends part 2 of my comments.

With Lots of❤️ &

TC😳


Thanks dear


I hope you enjoyed the update..


Yes riya find the girl in similar situation..she n arjun help her..


Yes they missed their train again..


She had faced the same situation n couldn't convince her parents at that time..


N this time her mother too don't understand her n slap her with hurtful words..



N that break riya more..


Well now how Arjun will give hopes to her..how she will overcome of all this will be in upcoming parts..


Thank you so much for your reviews..I really appreciate them..n they encourage me..


Stay tune to read more..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Kajal_wasekar

Awesome update

Continue soon


Thanks dear


Hope you enjoyed it


Keep reading

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: bloomie

Cont soooon

Ek hafte se upar ho gaya😢


So sorry dear.


I will update today

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Posted: 4 years ago


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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome updt

Lol Arjun ne anchoring nhi chodi uski kahani khatam hone ke baad bhi


Loved that train scene..Riya (jhansi ki rani) ne achha maza chakhaya..isse mujhe Chak De India ka McD scene yaad aa gaya😆But yahan Riya akelo hi kafi thi instead of rakshason ki sena🤣


What Arjun said is ryt..Riya ko apne papa ka pyar pane ke liye badalne ki zarurat nhi hai..wo jaisi hai waisi hi best hai..hope she realise this thing ASAP


Mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai in future Arjun sach me uss railway officer ko suspend karega😆His expression would be worth watching


Cont soon

Edited by Ariyatogether - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it Sonu dear

Awesome part 🙂

I really feel Riya needs her space & time as well as friends to get over it

Good that Riya started sharing her thoughts with Arjun to relieve herself

She is missing her mother 😕 but still adamant that will not return back

Bravo kya maza chakya hai Riya ne 👏👏 7 janam naho bhulega wo

Arjun ke kehne ka kuch to asar hua that Riya at least gave a thought for people who care 🙂

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update

Loved arjuns piece of advice for riya and his new nick name jhansi ki rani

Arjun telling aurat ki kabiliyat and riya telling SYS

Thanks for the PM in advance

Continue soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

superb loved it update soon thnx for pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Its a unique story. opposite character of both.

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