Ariya OS: Innocent Touches

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Jai Shree Ram

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Posted: 6 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
Wow this is so so so so beautiful dear awesome
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Plz write further i really want to know what will be the reaction of riya after all her drunken act..
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Thanks a lot dear 😊

It is an OS so you are free to imagine what could have happened the morning after.

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: aptl123
Wow... this is just beyond my words
What do I say about this os
It was simply awsome
Each and every emotion of the story was so perfect
Riya's touch was healing Arjun's wounds
And just love it's ending which is not an ending
It was a beginning of Arjun and riya's new life

Thanks a lot dear 😊

I agree that this was just the beginning of their life together.

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether
Beautiful os
But i wanted to see Arjun's confession too
Plz make it a ts
Loved Riya's drunk confession..lol
Thnx for pm

Thanks a lot dear 😊

I planned for this to be an OS so readers are free to imagine how they want Arjun's confession to be.

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Shanafr
Awesome amez os
Loveit
Thanks for pm

Thanks a lot dear 😊

I'm really glad you liked it

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: bloomie
Awesome os!
loved it so much!!!
Honeslty speaking, I love these kind of relations
they just seem so pure and innocent and passionate at the same time
Riya got drunk and kissed Arjun confessing her love for him
Arjun too decided to answer her when she was in her senses
hey! can we get a sneak peak to the morning scene...please?

Thanks a lot dear 😊

I'm really glad you liked it

To be honest, I didn't think of this as anything more than an OS. If I write more, I fear that the magic this OS created will be lost.

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: minamma
Again a splendid is
But can we get a part 2 of this...
Continuation of morning after when riya wakes up sober and his arms...
Pretty please...

Thanks a lot dear 😊

I haven't really given much thought to a part 2 of this so I'm not sure if there's going to be one

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Jai Shree Ram

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Posted: 6 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Vampire2468
Congrats on the new story dear👍🏼

Thanks a lot dear 🤗

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Vampire2468
Really very beautiful concept and u have wrote it very superbly👏Loved it❤️Riya's drunk confession was sweet...Hope she doesn't forget that when she comes in her senses😳Oh no Arjun couldn't confess it😒Want a second part...Update soon

Thanks a lot dear 😊

I'm really glad you liked it