Manzil (Arjun New SS- Chapter 2 updated)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello All!

I am back with an Arjun story. It is a short story.

Name: MANZIL

Characters: Our usual ones, however, including Karan and Simran.


PROLOGUE

One moment. That's all it took to change everything.

Boom!

For an instance, one would think that the people caught up with the blast, perished. However you could call it divine help that they didn't. Yes, they were not even as close to being in a state of liveliness but they were at least breathing. And for the few people who called them family, it was as good as enough. They were breathing and it was enough. Its not as bad as being dead, right?


Note:

I would appreciate your patience with regards to the erratic update schedules and with the fact that the updates might be short. Thank you. 😳

If you want PM for when the next part i.e. chapter 1 is updated, please like this post.


-Dinazz


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Yeh ariya story hai? Interesting prologue
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Interesting prologue
Is it ariya story?
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Nice prologue
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Superb update
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Intresting.. Please continue soon
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interesting
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello!
Thank you all wonderful people for liking and commenting on the prologue!

Note: for all those who were asking, yes this is an Ariya SS, but it will also include other couples, hence it is mentioned Arjun SS and not specifically Ariya.

CHAPTER 1

'Still. That's what they stood like.'


It was a regular day, just chasing around some goons like they usually did. No wonder, the leader of the gang was untraceable, but that didn't stop the ETF from following his minions. The chase led them into a warehouse. Boxes, boxes and even more boxes everywhere, unevenly stacked up. They segregated their team. Sameer, Arjun and Liza took the south entrance, Chotu, Shree and Sakshi took the North entrance.

They searched for the goons whom they had followed here, only to find no trace of them. they stealthily moved towards the boxes, they opened a few of them to find them empty. Arjun and Sameer skimmed through the almost empty rooms, and the empty cartons in those rooms, while the rest of them yet separated to probe around the warehouse.

Mistake.

That's where their mistake lay.

Suddenly, the warehouse that was hustling with the movement of cartons, and ears that were filled with sound of other members chattering about how the whole place was empty except filled with other empty boxes and rooms, suddenly became quiet. It seemed like the calm before the storm.

Arjun and Sameer came out of the room they were searching in. the warehouse had an air of resistance. They quickly scoured around the place to find their teammates.

Finally they found them, tied to their chairs, attached to explosives that were about to blow up in a minute. Sameer ran towards his colleagues.


"Damnit!

"Rathore sir, please yaha se chale jaiye. Just go away!

"Ayesha tum pagal ho?! Tum sabhi ko liye bigair main nahi jane wala!

"Sir, please jaiye. Yeh bomb kabhi ki phat sakta hai

"Chup raho Shree!

Sameer called up the explosives squad. When he turned back he saw a pale Arjun rooted at his spot. He hadn't moved. Tears weld up in his eyes at the thought of losing his family again. He had already lost Roshni first. Later it was Riya who was snatched away from him. This would be the third time.

The team had got quite close. They were more like friends outside office hours. He knew knew about Sameer and Ayesha's feelings for each other. He knew how Sakshi, Liza, Chotu and Shree bickered all the time and thought of him as Khadus' behind his back. However he had grown to like the bond they all shared. They were like a family and had each other's back. Once again he had a feeling he was going to lose them.

Seeing Arjun stand like a statue, broke Sameer's heart.

There was not enough time left. The clock has started ticking, 10 seconds were left.

"Arjun Leave, you idiot! Sakshi voiced.

That brought him out of his reverie.

Arjun and Sameer soon started tracing their steps backwards, taking a last look at their team, their family, their loved ones. They were stared back at by them, they had nothing to hide and let their vulnerable side show. tears rolled freely down their cheeks while their hearts thudded with paramount fear. Many words were left unsaid.


Arjun and Sameer ran just in time.

The impact of the blast went far and wide, they were thrown onto the wall and the premise shook a little as though an earthquake had occurred.

Feeling a bone or two break in their body, the duo lay still.

Soon enough the sound of sirens came nearer.

They lay there seeing splinters and chunks everywhere. their eyes fell on their teammates who lay there covered in spots, gunpowder and and wounds all over their body.


The duo's immobile bodies were places on gurneys to be taken to the hospital while the firemen and the explosives squad stood around the site of crime taking relevant action and checking the marred bodies.


Just as he was able to get a glimpse of one of the unrecognizable bodies, he swore he saw a body twitch.





That's all for now.

Hope you all like the update.

Waiting to hear from you all.

Note: All those who want a PM for the next update, do like this post.


-Dinazz

Edited by dinazz - 6 years ago
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Nice update
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Posted: 6 years ago
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interesting update really all died or some twist and body twitch eagerly waiting for that thanks for pm dear

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