Sasha SS: Faisle aur Faasle - Page 4

Originally posted by: Shalvisharma97

Awesome update dii

Loved it

Wow story on sasha

After ariya my second preference is sasha only

So sasha are husband and wife

Wow sam gave her anklet

Thanks for pm

Continue soon

Originally posted by: shreyashi19mld

Nice start dear

Like it

Waiting for next

This is my first try to your writing!

I liked your writing/narrating style.

I liked different title and how you start as Ayesha introduced in show!

Her as nadia doing undercover mission and ETF ruined her mission!

Her anger for that and reaction and after behavior with ETF team described ditto!

Though Ayesha mixed up with shreetu in litte time! Here u shown her rude is as she is orphan gives reason for her rudeness in start! And being only one female with four male team mates! Hope she will be friendly with shreetu, arjun is exception! Are u going to introduce liza n sakshi as her new joined team mates n would be friends?

Sameer always being gentleman admired her professional attitude.

Flashback of her memories of anklet was beautifully written!

Was already knew that Sameer was keeping eye on her in party and was sure about her that she will handle that advancing guy but after realizing that they were undercover he came to her rescue on time! Was very happy as Ayesha! How he scared that guy with just his few lines!

Description of Sameer and their dance was awesome! Song was also apt!

Ayesha touching her mangalstutra, remembering and imagining sameers hands is very symbolic and shows their love.

They made their journey from disguised married couple to real married couple, but then what happened? why she applied for divorce?hope they will not get separate!

Please pm when update.

Hey... thanks a lot 😊
After a long time solo Sasha padh rahi hu.. my dream couple
Amazing track with superb name...
I like those stories which starts with fb and of course agar woh Aisha k POV se ho toh 😳
So Aisha was recalling their past.. so lovely..
But divorce? Why?? Although I am not very surprised as mujhe first 2-3 line padhke lag rahi thi ki kuch gadbad Hai..
Update soon & please do pm me.. I don't wanna miss my Sasha 😊
Beautifully written.. good job.. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

This is my first try to your writing!

I liked your writing/narrating style.

I liked different title and how you start as Ayesha introduced in show!

Her as nadia doing undercover mission and ETF ruined her mission!

Her anger for that and reaction and after behavior with ETF team described ditto!

Though Ayesha mixed up with shreetu in litte time! Here u shown her rude is as she is orphan gives reason for her rudeness in start! And being only one female with four male team mates! Hope she will be friendly with shreetu, arjun is exception! Are u going to introduce liza n sakshi as her new joined team mates n would be friends?

Sameer always being gentleman admired her professional attitude.

Flashback of her memories of anklet was beautifully written!

Was already knew that Sameer was keeping eye on her in party and was sure about her that she will handle that advancing guy but after realizing that they were undercover he came to her rescue on time! Was very happy as Ayesha! How he scared that guy with just his few lines!

Description of Sameer and their dance was awesome! Song was also apt!

Ayesha touching her mangalstutra, remembering and imagining sameers hands is very symbolic and shows their love.

They made their journey from disguised married couple to real married couple, but then what happened? why she applied for divorce?hope they will not get separate!

Please pm when update.

Originally posted by: FarhanaKeka03

Hey... thanks a lot 😊
After a long time solo Sasha padh rahi hu.. my dream couple
Amazing track with superb name...
I like those stories which starts with fb and of course agar woh Aisha k POV se ho toh 😳
So Aisha was recalling their past.. so lovely..
But divorce? Why?? Although I am not very surprised as mujhe first 2-3 line padhke lag rahi thi ki kuch gadbad Hai..
Update soon & please do pm me.. I don't wanna miss my Sasha 😊

Beautifully written.. good job.. 👍🏼

Awesome start dear👏

Originally posted by: ariyalover

Awesome start dear 👏

Sorry for late😳

Good going...bt jb itna pyar hai to fir divorce kyu?😕

Please reveal it soon... Waiting for the next part eagerly... So update sooner please😊

Anyways thanks for the pm😊