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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Shalvisharma97
Awesome update dii
Loved it
Wow story on sasha
After ariya my second preference is sasha only
So sasha are husband and wife
Wow sam gave her anklet
Thanks for pm
Continue soon

Thanks a lot dear 😊

Sasha are my second favourite couple too.

I'm really glad you liked it...

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Vampire2468
Congrats on the new story dear👍🏼

Thanks a lot dear 😊

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Vampire2468
Beautiful start👏Sasha are husband wife and loves each other a lot😳But then why divorce they want?...Want to know what happened that triggered the divorce between them...Eagerly waiting for the next part

Thanks a lot dear 😊

You'll soon find out the reason behind their divorce petition

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: shreyashi19mld
Nice start dear
Like it
Waiting for next

Thanks a lot dear 😊

I'm really glad you liked it...

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Marathi_Mulgi

@Marathi_Mulgi

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+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#35

This is my first try to your writing!

I liked your writing/narrating style.

I liked different title and how you start as Ayesha introduced in show!

Her as nadia doing undercover mission and ETF ruined her mission!

Her anger for that and reaction and after behavior with ETF team described ditto!

Though Ayesha mixed up with shreetu in litte time! Here u shown her rude is as she is orphan gives reason for her rudeness in start! And being only one female with four male team mates! Hope she will be friendly with shreetu, arjun is exception! Are u going to introduce liza n sakshi as her new joined team mates n would be friends?

Sameer always being gentleman admired her professional attitude.

Flashback of her memories of anklet was beautifully written!

Was already knew that Sameer was keeping eye on her in party and was sure about her that she will handle that advancing guy but after realizing that they were undercover he came to her rescue on time! Was very happy as Ayesha! How he scared that guy with just his few lines!

Description of Sameer and their dance was awesome! Song was also apt!

Ayesha touching her mangalstutra, remembering and imagining sameers hands is very symbolic and shows their love.

They made their journey from disguised married couple to real married couple, but then what happened? why she applied for divorce?hope they will not get separate!

Please pm when update.

Edited by Marathi_Mulgi - 6 years ago

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Farhana Sharmin

@FarhanaKeka03

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#36

Hey... thanks a lot 😊
After a long time solo Sasha padh rahi hu.. my dream couple
Amazing track with superb name...
I like those stories which starts with fb and of course agar woh Aisha k POV se ho toh 😳
So Aisha was recalling their past.. so lovely..
But divorce? Why?? Although I am not very surprised as mujhe first 2-3 line padhke lag rahi thi ki kuch gadbad Hai..
Update soon & please do pm me.. I don't wanna miss my Sasha 😊
Beautifully written.. good job.. 👍🏼

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi
This is my first try to your writing!

I liked your writing/narrating style.

I liked different title and how you start as Ayesha introduced in show!

Her as nadia doing undercover mission and ETF ruined her mission!

Her anger for that and reaction and after behavior with ETF team described ditto!

Though Ayesha mixed up with shreetu in litte time! Here u shown her rude is as she is orphan gives reason for her rudeness in start! And being only one female with four male team mates! Hope she will be friendly with shreetu, arjun is exception! Are u going to introduce liza n sakshi as her new joined team mates n would be friends?

Sameer always being gentleman admired her professional attitude.

Flashback of her memories of anklet was beautifully written!

Was already knew that Sameer was keeping eye on her in party and was sure about her that she will handle that advancing guy but after realizing that they were undercover he came to her rescue on time! Was very happy as Ayesha! How he scared that guy with just his few lines!

Description of Sameer and their dance was awesome! Song was also apt!

Ayesha touching her mangalstutra, remembering and imagining sameers hands is very symbolic and shows their love.

They made their journey from disguised married couple to real married couple, but then what happened? why she applied for divorce?hope they will not get separate!

Please pm when update.

Welcome to my story. Thanks a lot for such wonderful words dear 🤗

I've tried to keep several similarities to the show but also changed some instances to suit the plot-line.

There will be mentions of her friendship with ETF members but I won't highlight them too much. In this story, Aisha won't be making any decisions without a proper reason.

Yes the memories that Aisha is reliving symbolizes the love between her and Sameer. But why she applied for divorce will soon be revealed.

I'm really glad you liked the story...there will be more of that romance to come.

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: FarhanaKeka03
Hey... thanks a lot 😊
After a long time solo Sasha padh rahi hu.. my dream couple
Amazing track with superb name...
I like those stories which starts with fb and of course agar woh Aisha k POV se ho toh 😳
So Aisha was recalling their past.. so lovely..
But divorce? Why?? Although I am not very surprised as mujhe first 2-3 line padhke lag rahi thi ki kuch gadbad Hai..
Update soon & please do pm me.. I don't wanna miss my Sasha 😊
Beautifully written.. good job.. 👍🏼

Thanks a lot for the wonderful comment Di 😳

A solo Sasha story is hard to find so I decided to write one myself. Unfortunately, this is just a very short story.

The reason for divorce will be revealed in the upcoming updates. And it will be told from Aisha's POV.

I'm really glad you liked it...😊

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Raksha

@ariyalover

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#39

Awesome start dear👏

Sorry for late😳

Good going...bt jb itna pyar hai to fir divorce kyu?😕

Please reveal it soon... Waiting for the next part eagerly... So update sooner please😊

Anyways thanks for the pm😊

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 6 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: ariyalover
Awesome start dear 👏
Sorry for late😳
Good going...bt jb itna pyar hai to fir divorce kyu?😕
Please reveal it soon... Waiting for the next part eagerly... So update sooner please😊
Anyways thanks for the pm😊

Thanks a lot dear 😊

Thoda toh suspense daalna banta hai na 😉...but jald hi reveal hoga.