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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start...
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Intresting prologue dear
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Superb starting
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Hey, prologue is so intriguing. I loved it. Any Ariya story us always welcomed here. So continue soon and please send me pm.
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Interesting n new writing style!! Like ur style!! Update soon n pm...
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Interesting prologue
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Guys , Thanks for your support..
Well it's my first story so please bhul chuk maaf.
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Part 1

Pichle 60 dino me itna sb ho gaya h ki samjh hi nahi aaya ki jo hua vo kyun hua. Meri shadi ek anjaan insaan se jise main kal tk janti bhi nahi thi aur aj vo pati h mere. vo vaise to bahut shant h pr kal jo hua vo to hadd hi tha, inki bua aayi thi unhone kuch to kaha unse uske baad se unka gussa satve aasman pe h. Kisi se baat tk nhi kri unhone, subah office chale gaye aur sham ko bua ji k jane k baad aaye.

Is kahani ki shuruwat aj se almost 1/2 saal pehle hua tha. Main Riya Mukherjee, Ashok Mukherjee ki eklauti beti. Maa ko gujre 15 saal ho gaye. Mere aur baba ki achchi khasi shant si zindagi me bhuchal tb aaya jb maine dad ko Karan k bare me bataya. Maine badi mushkil se Dad ko convince kiya tha Karan se milne ke liye. Vo bahut naraz the ye jaan kr k ki main ek ladke se pyar krti hun vo bhi dusri biradari ka, pr jb vo usse mile to sb almost thik hi tha. Sb ko samjhate hue shadi tai hui. Dheere -2 time spend hota gaya, shadi se 3 din pehle Karan k Dad ka accident ho gaya. Itna hi kafi tha uske liye usne shadi k 2 din pehle phone kr k shadi k liye mana kr diya. Dad almost tut hi gaye the.

Dad:- main ab kisi ko muh dikhane layak nhi rha aise shadi ka tutna matlab samjhti h na tu Riya... Kya kahenge hum logo se. Kaun karega tujhse shadi..

Isse pehle main kuch kehti karan ki bua gate pr se hi chilane lagi.

Karan's bua: are Mukherjee ji.. Kaisi beti paida ki h pehle Maa ko nigal gaye. Ab shadi tai hi hui thi ki mere bhai ko.. Ghar hi rakho apni beti aise ladki se kaun karega shadi.
Dad: dekhiye pratibha ji, ap aise na bole meri beti ne kuch nhi kiya. Apke bhai ka accident ho jo ki unki apni galti se hua kyunki vo wrong side pe drive kr rhe the. Aur jahan tk meri patni ka sawal h unhe cancer tha. Isliye ap bewajah meri beti ko na kose..

Main bahar aayi to dad aur pratibha bua k alawa ek aur ladka tha. Dad ko bahut paseena ho rha tha aur bua unse continuously lad rhi thi. Aur vo ladka Dad ko Sambhalne ki koshish kr rha tha.

I:- ab shaadi to tod hi diya h na apne aur apke bhatije ne to plz jayiye yaha se (main dad ko sahara dete hue ander lekr aayi) dad ap kaisa feel kr rhe h chaliye doctor k pass chalte h..

Dad:- nhi.. Riya main thak gaya beta kitne armaan tha tujhe bida krne ka. Sare armaan reh gaye mere. Main kya kru ki sb thik ho jaye, Riya beta mere liye sirf tu Hi important h.

I :- Dad plz ap aise mat boliye plzzz dad dad??? Dad

Stranger:- sir ko hospital le ke chalna padega.

Main dad ko support krte hue uski taraf dekha tu usne bataya vo Dad ka Ex-student h Dad ne use bulaya tha abhi intro ka time nhi h pehle hospital chalte h. Hum 20 minutes baad hospital pahunche dad ko emergency Ward me lekr gaye doctor check up kr rhe the.

Doctor:- ap inke sath aaye h.
Stranger:- ji bataye na kya hua h sirko.
Doctor:- ap inke family ko jante ho to unhe inform kr dijiye.
I:- doctor main inki beti ap bataiye na kya hua h Dad ko vo aise behosh kyu hogaye koi darne wali baat to nahi h na plzzz kuch boliye
Doctor:- Dekhiye miss Riya shayad apke dad bahut stressed the kuch dino se aur apni medicines bhi shayad nhi le rhe the isi wajeh se unka BP badh gaya tha & the worst case is ki unhe major attack aur high blood pressure ki wajeh se ye problem hui h hum unhe observation me rakh rhe h aur treatment start kr diya h but exactly kuch bhi keh pana abhi mushkil hoga...

Doctor to bol kr chala gaya pr main apna balance sambhalne ki koshish krte hue chair ki taraf jane lagi to us stranger ne mujhe support dete hue chair pe bithaya aur


Stranger:- ap yaha bathiye main apke liye paani lekr aata hun.

Main use mana krti isse pehle vo nikal gaya tha thodi der me vo paani lekr aaya aur bottle mujhe pass krte hue
Stranger- Riya paani
I :- thanks...
Stranger:- Arjun... Arjun Rawte

I:- thanks

RJ:- apko thanks bolne ki jarurat nhi h mujhe khushi h main vahan tha varna apko sb akele hi handle krna padta..
I:- (with a lost smile ) ye sb meri wajeh se hua h , apne Dad ki is haalat ki zimedar main hun..
RJ:- Riya jo hona tha vo ho gaya ab past k bare me sach kr apne present ko aansuoo me bheegane ka koi matlab nhi h. Bs ab bhagwan se manao ki Sir jaldi se thik ho jaye that's it.

Tabhi vahan bhaga bhagi hone lagi nurse doctor k pass gaye phir doctor dad ko check krne aaye koi hume kuch nhi bata rha tha thodi der baad Doctor ne aakr bola ki Dad ko hosh to aagya h pr unki halat bahut critical h. Vo milna chahte h hum dono hi ander gaye to Dad waha lifelessly pade the

I:- Dad
Dad:- I'm sorry Riya main tere liye kuch nhi kr paya
I:- Nhi Dad ye sb mera fault h maine humari shanti bhari life me KARAN naam ki problem lakr khada kr diya. Na main use humari life me lati na ye sb hota..
Dad:- Arjun beta mere pass jyada waqt nhi h meri beti ka khayal rakhoge na
RJ:- Sir ap rest kijiye apko kuch nhi hoga, main apko kuch nhi hone dunga I promise..
Dad :- Riya mere liye plz tum Arjun se Shadi kr lo.
Hum dono waha shocked khade the...

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