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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 6 years ago

#831

Wow lovely story dear...thank you

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Bloomie

@bloomie

Dazzler

+ 10

Posted: 6 years ago

#832

Awesome update

loved it so much!!

hey bhagwan...bed pa bhi?!?!

finally shaadi ho gayi, ab Riya uske saath hi rahegi toh Arjun ko kaand nahi karne padenge

are bichara Sameer, Riya ko toh ek jhatke mein pehchaan iya upar se ayesha aur neha ko bhi par woh nahi pehchan paaya

the end?

kyun?

but epilogue jaldi dena aur chota mat dena ha!

cont sooon

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Raksha

@ariyalover

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Posted: 6 years ago

#833

Wow Di...dil khush ho gya update padh kr...😃

Beautiful ending to a wonderful story👏

But I will miss the story too much😭

Anyways please do give an epilogue soon😳

Loved ariya moments😃

God bechara Sam bura fasa tha...bt ayesha ka gussa hona v jayaz tha...😳

Thanks for the pm😊

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Ariya Kazi

@Aayat.ariya14

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#834

Mujhe pata tha ye aaj hi tata bye bye the end hoga.. Q ki jis tarha se aapne shadi ka description dia!! Yaar ye arjun fir se ayesha ko pakda!! Pata tha mujhe ye riya nhi hai n ayesha hai!! Ye scene mujhe pata tha so padhne se pehle hi haas rhi thi soch k.. Aur ye kya?? Koi warning varning nhi dia!! Bacche hai na bht!! ( hehehe!) thank god mein computer se update nhi padha... Nhi to aaj hi meri net mujhse chin leta... Q ki aaj hi itni mehnat k baad mujhe pc n net dia ghar walo ne.. Aaj to mein satwa asman pe udh rhi hu... N ye aap itna jaldi q khtm kia?? Thora. Aur likhta to kya hota?? Aab kya kare aapka story hai so itna Jaldi keise chor du?? Ek k baad ek dhamakadar stories Wow!! U really deserve an Award!! Aab ek badha sa romantic sa epilogue dena.. I know epilogue me wahi baccho ka kahani hoga! Paar chalega... Aapka hi update hai... Jo v hoga bindas hoga... Ok now me tata... Thnx for pm...