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Ariya Kazi

@Aayat.ariya14

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#61

read whole story together ... loved it.. but there is a some pblm with ur writing style! like proper word na likhna, spelling mistake ( ye koi khas baat nahi),, n hindi word se english word betha dena without completing what u wanna to say... overall updts were good.. carry 1.. thanks for pm...

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Arjunasr

@Arjunasr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Aayat.ariya14
read whole story together ... loved it.. but there is a some pblm with ur writing style! like proper word na likhna, spelling mistake ( ye koi khas baat nahi),, n hindi word se english word betha dena without completing what u wanna to say... overall updts were good.. carry 1.. thanks for pm...

Yeah I know it is a major problem. I give the updates from my phone. And here the auto correct does its own job. And while rechecking the whole thing I tend to miss out some points. And about the Hindi English one can you be more specific about which part. I know my Hindi is weak and to avoid typing much on phone due to the fear of typographical error I write English words. Sorry for the inconvenience. If you tell me which parts I'd like to correct them. Thank you for commenting. And sorry again.

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rinku95

@rinku95

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Awesome. Continue soon. Will ariya forgive them ???

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gauri

@ariya143

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Awesome update..

Ri support arj .. how sweet .

N team n Sam..😡

But know ri n arj promoted..👏

Nicee n interesting..

Thanks for pm dear..

Continue soon..

Update..

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zubiya92

@zubiya92

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Brilliant update

I feel really bad for Arjun

How much he craves for love but the love always stanched away from him

All ETF blame Arjun they didn't trust him

Coz of that Arjun have so much stress

Glad Riya is with Arjun look after him

Yippee Ariya got promotion

Continue plz

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

super story and moving at a great pace

waiting to see how team gains arjuns respect again

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armishra

@armishra

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Superb amazing update

Wow arjun DCP nd riya ACP awesome

Love it

Thanks for pm

Eagerly waiting for next part

Continue soon

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#69

Commissioner was sikky??

Ariya got promotion nice

Etf team blamed him

Ariya together so nice

Awesome update

Cont soon

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Ekta

@plmzaq

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#70

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

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