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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome updates
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Riya saved her sis
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 3

Arjun opens his eyes and find himself in the hospital room. He tries to sit up but is hit by a wave of dizziness and feels hands steadying him as a voice said "Arjun sir. Please don't get up. Arjun's vision clears seeing Riya in front of him. He looks at her questioningly and she hurriedly explains "Your blood pressure is low. Doctor said that you seem to have skipped some meals that is why it became low. When was the last time you ate Arjun Sir?. Arjun tries to remember the last time he ate but he couldn't. Not receiving an answer from Arjun, Riya's concerned expression changes into one of anger but before she opens her mouth to say anything, a knock is heard and both see Rathore, Shree and Chotu enter the room with the doctor. Rathore glares at him as Arjun listens to the doctor's instructions with an impassive face. Shree and Chotu try to hold their laughter seeing Arjun's non-reaction to Rathore's glare.

Arjun tunes out doctor's instruction until the doctor said "You cannot be left alone. Arjun expression then turns into a glare and the doctor gulps but he bravely said "You are too weak right now. And your medical history shows this is not the first time you have had low blood pressure. I will only accept your discharge until someone here gives me the guarantee that they will stay with you throughout your care. Arjun glares at Chotu, Shree and Rathore daring them to say anything about his care. Chotu and Shree gulp, Rathore rolls his eyes used to now Arjun's glares but before he could say anything, Riya said "We will be staying with him Doctor. All four of them looked surprised at her, as the doctor nodded and left hurriedly to get the discharge papers before she changes her mind. Riya looks at the four of them and said "What, My house is a crime scene now. We have no home. And Arjun Sir's house is near the ETF Office. So I can take care of Arjun Sir and Arjun Sir's home can be a home for us. Samjhe ya Samjhau?. No one can argue with that logic and Arjun folds his arms with a mulish expression. Riya said "I will inform her. And she goes outside. The next second, Riya enters, a girl with curly hair, thin frame dressed in a shirt and skirt with a scarf on her neck following closely behind her looking towards the floor.

Riya looks at all of them sheepishly and said "This was not how I wanted to introduce my sister. But taking a deep breath, she looks towards the girl and said "Piya, this is my team. The girls lifts a gaze and Rathore takes a breath seeing eyes so similar to Roshni. Riya's gaze was still on her sister as she said "This is Shree our Technical specialist, Chotu Our Commando, Rathore Sir, Our ETF Chief and Arjun Sir our Second in Command. The Girl's gaze flits to Arjun and back to the floor and Arjun takes a deep breath seeing eyes which were not Roshni's but reminded him of her.

After the introductions, everyone is in awkward silence, No one making the effort to say anything. Shree trying to break the awkwardness asked Piya "Did the doctor gave the verdict? Everything is fine? Piya nodded her head and before anyone could ask any question turned her back towards them and left the room abruptly. Riya takes a deep breath her struggle clear in her slumped shoulders and giving them a slight smile she said "I am sorry. It's just Piya is uncomfortable with the others. So it make take her some time to warm up to others. And everyone nodded their head in understanding. Arjun's gaze suddenly shifts to the door to see Piya ducking her head back outside.

So I was stuck, in how to proceed with this story. But now my basic chapter outlines is ready so I will start posting longer chapters in two three days. So read and do comment.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#23
Nice update riya responsibility leti hai arjun ka khayal rakhne ke liye piya ki aankhe rosh ki yaad dilati hai kahi arjun piya ko like na karne lage eagerly waiting for nxt
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Posted: 6 years ago
#24
Nice updt
Lol Arjun ineffected wid Rathod's glare
Oh wow Ariya in same home
Lets see what Piya's entry will bring in their life
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Posted: 6 years ago
#25
Superb update
Love it
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Posted: 6 years ago
#26
awesome update

love it..

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Posted: 6 years ago
#27
Read last two part
In one go
Loved them
So tiwari got arrested
Riya said very true words
That our family is our strength and not our weakness
Ladoo is safe now
So arjun arjun got low bp
And he fainted
But now he is okay
I like riya fearless behavior
Y kya piya itna scared kyu hai
So piya '' eyes is similar to roshni
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Posted: 6 years ago
#28
Eagerly waiting for next part
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Superb update

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Posted: 6 years ago
#29
Nice story.Read the three parts in one go.
So, the case solved and Piya is also safe.
Now all will be living in Arjun's house.It'll be grate.I think Piya will have importance in Ariya life.Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#30

What's up with piya???

Glad they solved the case n saved piya

Both sisters r going to stay at arjun 's home

Looking forward for next part

Awesome update

Cont soon

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